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  • Posted by: dedMcAr
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Hmm. Syodni again rose this question.

Grandfather: — Thurinigia? — mention any country by officer, first time having looked on interlocutor: Dark-eyed haired beauty. Much he or and the colon where are starting?
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She: — to? — and.
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­: Grandfather, a large he or and the colon because, that not had it redacted on until now. Not revised signs in direct speech. And the colon will replace words "namely", conclusion: Officer looked on his interlocutor namely dark-eyed haired beauty.
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Grandfather: Of our protection. I would still understood: — Thurinigia? — Officer looked interlocutor: Temnoglazyy dlya, sednego growth, traits faces ends and Noble
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Grandfather: ­, 2
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­: Because further there is no matching members?
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­: And only "dlya temnoglazyy"?
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Grandfather: ­, still times. Here is so, as I have — one will buy it, for transfer, have you — haired beauty — comma
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­: CE. Moschus of have Ra not boils. I voopsche around the confused 8— [
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Grandfather: Have you must stand comma.
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­: Of our protection. This I understood.
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Grandfather: But. Easier do transfers in one proposal — then Nominative case ablative — in this case and the colon
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­: Javadxan, dotumkal as.
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Grandfather: And made here tumkat — I those increase wrote ;)
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Grandfather: But! Here is here precisely Officer with big hew
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­: ­ so the handbrake, that and over ready mogyot, za :)
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Grandfather: Was would "a small embattled, officer" — then with small
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Grandfather: Paradox, f-fuck..
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She: Officer this as instead behalf of, Ra ;)
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Grandfather: And cuts against helpful to pisyatkudryavogo year, but as something so
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Grandfather: So and "mention any country by" with small, but here this word need not
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­: By the way yes, Ra remembers, that officer should be with big. Read somewhere.
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Grandfather: Not necessarily
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of the transit: — Thurinigia? — officer grinned at, okidyvaya mournfully tschedushnuyu figure a recruit,. — Obmelchali the Expedition with Glorious land!addition and Funds and Bergen. For bolshiva razkrytiya.
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Grandfather: Here is here well one will buy it with small
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Grandfather: Here smyslovoe division, Processors PLUS times, kind Upper Intermediate

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And even times. Example slozhnosochinennogo dialogue in the diversion from Dasha.

— Nu, as would say, — confusedly explained Kryuksi, — is done this is so: Beret a bit maize, put its in a melting-pot, say, Number three, add, means, a bit cooking oil with, and then bet from above plate or anything in this kind, and, when start need heating, maize is beginning to babakhat. There is no, there is no, not seriously, — calmed he. — In general, when she Percome babakhat, you if you withdraw plate and will these here is. E-Dora Balls. — He've circled mournfully nedoumevayuschie faces. — This is can be there is, — finished talking to you he quietly, as if rather. — If add, oil and where sea salt, taste of is obtained, as have salted butter.

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And I always'm on a badge of punctuation characters. Point — with big, 's notice stop — with small. Here is have grandfather in latest example in sight this.
There is no, there is no, not seriously ,— havespokoil he.
You if you withdraw plate and will these here is. E-Dora Balls .— Ohbut've circled mournfully nedoumevayuschie faces .— deemedthe can be there is,

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What this you Rastishke bones peremyvaete? "Seventy seven" remembered?

Here is here just many.

With examples of.

wayless wrote:

and I always'm on a badge of punctuation. Point — with big, 's notice stop — with small. Here is have grandfather in latest example in sight this.
There is no, there is no, not seriously, — calmed he.
You if you withdraw plate and will these here is. E-Dora Balls. — He've circled mournfully nedoumevayuschie faces. — This is can be there is,

So this, when Dj — understandable. And when himself write, what questioning? :dontknow:

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About formalizing the direct speech:
(Again, uh, swiped with another site)
Forging direct speech,
The Presents the positioning signs punctuation characters under it
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— In the trunk lay nalapnye bracelets, — said Dragon. — location pradedushkiny.
Here – two phrase dashed sentiment of, words aid. After the first phrase must be point, is true? But we have atributsiyu dialogue: "Said Dragon." Means —
1) Dot is being replaced by semicolon!
2) external a verb "said" write on with small hew!
3) After words aid are posing point! Not comma!
In case:
— In the trunk lay nalapnye bracelets! — said I.
— In the trunk lay nalapnye bracelets? — asked I.
— external a verb VSE Yeah is written with small hew!
2.
— In the trunk lay nalapnye bracelets, — said I, — even pradedushkiny.
Here – one phrase smashed sentiment of. Therefore:
1) After words aid are posing comma!
2) There write on with small hew!
3.
— In the trunk lay nalapnye bracelets, — said I and added: — location pradedushkiny.
Here – the colon!
4. Attention — slippery moment!
— In the trunk lay nalapnye bracelets. — I with the threat has to to a traitor. — location pradedushkiny.
Two phrase divided NOT sentiment of, and act, not relevant to the exactly speech, not obedience and its. Proof of: Here atributsiya can be is withdrawn in another place text, until or after direct speech
Here is so:
I with the threat has to to a traitor.
— In the trunk lay nalapnye bracelets. Even pradedushkiny.
Or here is so:
— In the trunk lay nalapnye bracelets. Even pradedushkiny.
I with the threat has to to a traitor.
A consequence:
1) In case division direct speech act, to exactly speech not concerned with, are posing point (long voicemail you'll see, exclamation point, vecherom signs — on need).
2) atributsiyu are starting with Grand hew!
At all all of this – with atributsiey, not concerned with exactly to speech – indeed slip for anyone is possible … Happens “he smiled ” — then point and associe. And case “smiled he ” — then comma and a small he or … Better avoid quite perishing slick moments – to beat all these precariousness of on two parts of, for example …
The entire science – from Mr. Rosenthal syndrome and teachers, general University. Dragon nor under fix — but in cause its am confident absolutely. In including — about slope respect.

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As people looks at milieu, hoarse and sloths can words in speech author from third faces.

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50 BMG wrote:

How people looks at milieu, hoarse and sloths can words in speech author from third faces.

People this "is eating it up" ;)

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I to what must be accounted for in criticized, eats-but in measure.

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In force "reviving" Aoyama had to impose in him epizodicheskogo individual. Now, in continuing, can be this character delegate certain replicas and functions. ????, this not will look excessively for one, but clearly will add signs. And can be to leave development actions between two main heroes, but then action will drier. So, question znatokam: "That to do"?

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I of course not be backtracking this way, however'll spit it out.
If in the text just TWO YEARS hero the risk get from reader summary: Skushnoe Pulp pro and a half hero. Plus the availability of "ballast" hero can give push for fantasies the reader as well, he can as would for themselves domyslit that Gg "lived" until this text, that occurred events until, outward this the scene. This expands picture.
However increasingly question implementation and sense which is invested.
Think I that dopgeroy introduced for; and jangling event — see. So?

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