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Pristrelka 80

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Propose a you subject another buy out:
Gribnik or hunter (age and gender individual on your choice) the usual paths picking its way through wood, as suddenly.
— Izba — comfy hut, turn around me go front to front, to the forest striker.
And in winter hut something and there is no one, only synthetic voice welcomes guest:
— Password adopted. Universal module "Kolorado" awaits your rulings.

Genre — any
Volume of — not more 12 tys would Moderate

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Implementing extraterrestrial technologies through popular fairy tales)

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Am running.

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Стив-О wrote:

Embedding software extraterrestrial technologies through popular fairy tales)

Such option, too, is possible)

Still wishing to there is?

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Girls, with song you.
Incidentally — I in topic)

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Thank you, the Slav)) Who still? Friends, ah again on buy out alone and those same. Anyone. All of!

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Vision very reminds the endgame Tarmasheva "War." Only there "the Egyptian the pyramid." Very want, but fear. Talked himself out.

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Пек Зенай wrote:

MA – It want, but fear.

And you not worry, this seems only, that talked himself out)

So, I shall declare start! For wait same how many can be)
Respected participants! Await the from you texts in BOS. Deadline 18 March 17.00 on minutes Moscow Time
Yes arrives with you inspiration!

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Гадость wrote:

Yes arrives

Arrives — far?

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Imhotep, fixed the. ., thanks)

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Alas! With 15 on 31 I in bezinternetnoy zone.

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Reminder authors. Today deadline.

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So, that same is happening in mysterious a hut? Let us will know have experts))

Баба Яга

How you think, kids, about whom shared stories our hacked the-hacked the-hacked the-hacked the-hacked the-hacked the-hacked the-hacked the grandmothers. .fat, pro Neanderthal sites? Tiddly.. They shared pro modern. Ah, so here is, listen to fairy tale, pro the most that neither naest, modern. A fairy tale pro Ivan-Tsarevitch and Vasylissa Prekrasnomudruyu.
In some reign, some state, but not in our district, accurately, lived yes was Ivan-young tsar. At all something name of his was Oleg, and surname Tsarev. Ah not regulation after all to speak: Oleg-young tsar. So all and was called his — Ivan-young tsar, even with schools. Here is ringing as something Ivan on mobile his father and says: It is me time son … there is no, not to die, not, you, cough up horses. It is me time to go in long drives the brink, on work. In England, through month, year on two-three. And I, knowing your disposition playful, not can you one without supervision to leave. If, hiring I guard you, you its listen to not regulation, a babysitter you late, so that let-pay, brother, i.e. Ugh, son, get married.
Thought son and is boring. Disposition have papanki-Tsar a steep. Can on times “legacy as well ” strip, yes and seemingly a rewrite not really hesitate. And seemingly a have Tsar was not weak. With luzhkovskim ultimate, yes and bat'ko-Lukashenko a different times oblizyvalsya, looking on annual income Tsar.
Yes here and to think nothing to acquire, said young tsar, Lesse we moment in Net posharim zhurnalchikami poshurshim, gazetkami poelozim. Will you, dad's, like,, sister-in-law. The entire day watched. On site dating there is no nor one suitable. The far lives, then being veiled not likes, and other knew personally on-from binge student youth. Some Prom Queen otpadali after telephone telephone call. Spat Ivan in face emotionless... my computer, potoptal a white chook's foot a newspaper a insensitive and followed sleep. But, not sleep either him at night the dark. Sees he in dream alluring losing, that flies around him, and to capture its he raze not can. And she him, then on reduce leverage sits down at, then on brains warm craps (this to money, in dream thought Ivan), then on ears something tender whispering. On the morning with paradoxical head (empty, but tyazhyo — logogram — logogram-La) decided to act.
Thought-thought and decided to go pedaling in newlyweds the countess. Released in yard, bestrode the his quarters ". And finestjumper P.Gudauskas: 're a Tuareg is called. Aboard chocolate airbrushed: A grey R-dawg with oskalennoy cleft palate in precipitous the hop. One something to go awkward, will be a laughingstock people. Took for of trustworthiness its the secretary – Vasku. At all something she was Vasilisa, in our times parents like children to lend ancient names. But, its friends all so was called. Ivan-young tsar knew its even with kindergarten. In one pot were, for one front of a blackboard in school sat. Yes and character have Vaska the most that neither naest “townie credit. ” And the secretary — better not'll come up with. Tsar long wanted to lure away its to itself, perishing painful for she was premudraya, yes Tsarevich not authorized. Particularly trust it became, when through his an over-familiar, Kascheya, from state Duma she averted reyderskiy capture Olegovoy companies.
Long-whether, short-whether toured they in newlyweds the countess. There, as learned, who such is Ivan-young tsar immediately let him on choice albums show. Moor-purr-purr, and look at entu nice cat, and look at this on entu beauty but also an. Yes only vas'ka denied all. Pro one she accurately knew that the kind in tenth marriage, and husbands all former businessmen, as flies a spider vysosannye, who sits for embezzlement treasury, who squatted, and who and in crude earth. Another, often saw (children, close your ears, and adults themselves figure) in embracing one another with bottle and different men. The third with difference has high school KGB and worked-tenth a secretary have Khodorkovsky. Wiped at Ivan-young tsar warming with forehead and got to become the treasure of. But, on path decided along to, perhaps-vorozhee.
After year-old heat of this have soothsayers well. Airconditioning plough he spits, after I, quiet, cat you blacky tick (mite) mark as. As has brimmed his a fortune-teller maps their, as looked it up in balloon glass, immediately with faces Slept. Oops, 's owing and saying, brothers something your boleyut, zhana pomirait, children evils different threaten. And jockeys the handle, golden, 'll take off I damage with your family. I'll save from of perdition.
Cross Ivan. Says, that there have him nor your brothers., nor zhany, imagined dityov, … until. A fortune-teller zasuetilas. Says, that file not the in computer, okay launched. Not so curves in particular raspryamila. Balloon glass pokvadratit since forgotten. Not became its listen to Ivan. Spat and released ??? ?? ? ?, together with girlfriend correct.
And girlfriend true to and says him, nourished German, not along whether them on path to Alyosha Monument, Plovdiv-Popovich,. To visit our. And why would and there is no? The sun to wane is tipping. Under evening can be and take a quick shot miss. Toured they to Popovich,, the as their saw, as been happy about. Have us, says, post over. Can be on this occasion and Kagorchiku chiostro try. In common, put two and two together they on three figures, as before, in school even. Sat across theatre in cell and have become made Musical. The three of us were friends even with schools. Together prokazili, together the answer held. After the first glasses hath descended forth the grace. Increasingly around became kind-policies-policies st, a good. After the second told Ivan-young tsar Alyosha Monument, Plovdiv its trouble. Long thought Alyosha, and after the third said, and why you far go, if fate your near sits. That need a learns, so and go on to … family. Has laughed Ivan-young tsar, zardelas area-icing Vasilisa. However “having missed ” fourth, boy left all alone He on Vasylissa and decided to, that words Popovitch have under a real the groundwork. Only here is raze could not solve on whom marry Vasilise-perfect or premudroy? Because after fifth glasses their became two …
Has awakened on morning Ivan, and before him on the little table bottle beer a cold one. Stimulant he estimated of sorcerer's and ls it good him. And decided to he, that need to to go in Internet upside. Better wife and not meanest, most selfish bastard. Rejoiced, of course, that choose him not need to. Vasilisa something from two for night in one become — Prekrasnomudruyu.
Increasingly would nothing, yes only zasverbilo have're in for indecent place. Station clicked childhood. Wanted him get family to wedding the, not know, that. But, to it, this most, was better, than have other. Ah, if anything, not such as have other.
And again bestrode the he quarters "his the staunch. And a series or there, not know far. Only GPS arrow was playing on the Stripper, yes voice a nasty from ed the guy squeaked “you're a bit out of" self the speed …. ” Here is moved in he in the most thicket forests. Here finestjumper his staunch was determined. Shoved his face snout broad in tree trunk, in quagmire neprokhodimom utoplennom and said nechelovechim voice “There, without grub further not do!. ” Had to Ivan-explained to Tsarevitch was coming out feet white not trenirovannymi on the forest dremuchemu to muddle. Long was cutting he, crushing bushes, line, its feet, yes hands. Finally released on poljanku. Future together, is worth in the midst of the meadow comfy hut, on the pigeon-house a similar. Three times's got to go around he around it. There is no nor windows, nor doors. And escaped unwittingly have him: Comfy hut-comfy hut turn around to the forest striker, me go front to front. Here happened miracle. , uh, cracked the wall Buildings and 6600m the door. Not became Ivan long to think. Jumped into inward and was governmentalist positions. And within frightening! — With Matthis small, polutyomnaya. In the midst of stove again is worth increasingly place ranks. Yes in street corner satellite dish in the form of web color-inverted. Emerged here from Gloom is aaaea, stinking, yes an appalling. And says she mechanical voice:
— Password adopted. Universal module "Kolorado" awaits your rulings.
Marvel at your debasement Ivan, are scared by, yes only species not shows. And replies it:
— Goni-pay me, aaaea, then, not know that, yes hurry, hurry.
Aaaea withdrew from the shadows, podbochenilas and are you staring at on Ivan faded analizatorami. Here only he and managed to its pleasantly to consider. Puny a steering, in ragged, yes even on right-wing drawn and leftist become its has left. And under skin the, cries, 50s joints as have-life terminator. Here is you and Kostyanaya Bandage!
— To this services is needed an additional parole.
Thought, Tsarevich, thought and I mentioned, as in childhood have mothers chocolate bar asked. Made, you know, lamenting cute, little face and sang...:
— Please!
— What the chelovechenkoy there was the smell. Will I have today lunch. And ah, get in the are a good brilliant in stove again. This you hint – winked at one only aaaea. The answer not staunch, remained attempts to – two.
— You that the old, hammed? What attempts? Let product, and deal with the end of. I first comer?. How many?
— Answer not staunch, remained attempts to – one!
Behind that pop automatic. Doors have closed. Actively invisible neon illuminating.
— Listen, let change. That you need to? Drugs, weapons, girls? Like it or, firm its over?
— Answer not staunch, remained attempts to – zero! Included self destruct exposure.
On the wall flared red oaaei: Self destruct. Remained 30 seconds. Then figures been. 29, 28, 27…
— Grandmother, you that, not descend mad! I have here is, credit card there is’s victors. Like it or? – in panic zaegozil Tsarevich.
— To’s victors — prs have us credit. The additional attempt to. Talk less.
Ivan monopoly warming. Recent speech and thought, as if rats with sinking ship, with happy squeak left head. Hint, hint, in stove again not Yo, Cid! Land, that – that such. Feed, just get him drunk. Spoke same, Sat down beside “East in school ”, so there is no, increasingly fentazi read.
— deemed-e-e the old! You know who I have father? Tsar! Now. Maybe, you'll whistle, his good fellows s Whitney on times-two's gonna be blown.
— Answer not staunch. Self destruct vindicated by.
And oaaei increasingly inexorably schyolkalo: 3, 2, 1 …

Яга

Since hard their way through closures, downed trees and dry burelom young man was cutting in the most the wilderness forests. A his Oleg is Sinitsyn.
“This is OK need to was go for mushrooms and fall for on podnachku colleagues going in protected zone of our Institute! ” – thought he. –“ Gotcha on loosely! ”
Oleg with annoyance, broken's tape covering before him the review cool branch and saw, that proved on a small rounded miss glade, in the center of the which teetered directly-??? fabulous comfy hut on tiny little foothold legs.
With hard by transferring breath, he red line of being able to it. Him as something the very a time come to mind say:
– Izba – comfy hut, turn around me go front to front, and to the forest striker …
Suddenly the door opened and hospitably invited his enter inward, that he and not certainly taken its toll do.
– Password adopted, – breathed suddenly feminine voice, clearly artificial, it was a computerized, – Universal module “Kolorado ” and fulfilling your rulings.
Eyes guy were turgid, and jaw has fallen somewhere on gender, metaphorically speaking.
– you had a chance the favored chance experience the newest diversification of module living space “Kolorado. ” – Prodolzhal broadcast voice, – I got have developed scientists of our Institute TekhiMa.
– Ukraine! Means you tozherazrabotka Institute Technologies and Magic? – whistled Oleg, from looking around surrounding his objects futuristic furniture and different implements. – And that such the last word specific talismanic tekhnofokusov as you can offer effort you?
– Rest with full comfort and full security! You now have become part of programs tests. So that your cazul recreation began.
– Wait … This is as cazul recreation! But me need to same to return, yes and homes mother will worry! Pro work I perishing I'll shut up!
– Don’t worry. Your colleagues already increasingly reported. Mother, too, already's been notified. At work I reported, that you have for-on two weeks. For-leaf already dispatched with delay delivery. His gets your chief of exactly through two weeks.
– But I well! As you for-received? – So as voice was feminine, Oleg involuntary wanted turn to this machine in appropriate kind.
– Wu you were all signs of excessive tiredness and depicted a depletion. So doctor agreed, that you need recreation.
– But he same me even not saw! – in the end of the taken aback Oleg.
– Don’t worry, I have there is increasingly necessary equipment. Until we are talking, you over full comprehensive check-ups. So that am asking, unpack and set up.
– that's awesome not to stand up! – has exclaimed guy.
He dismantled a jacket –, boots and crochet of the location, put an on behind have entry poof and they, until he was distracted on staring room, in which him were Bohemia couple of weeks, somewhere disappeared. But on bed emerged kit convenient domestic clothing.
Oleg, progressed in a small, but convenient shower and, nasolodivshis jets of comfortable experience warm water, has changed clothes. He gladly throwing himself prostrate on later mired gays’“bed and asked computer, which ran all of these miracle.
– Kolorado, and why outside you irritating as comfy hut on tiny little foothold legs?
– casualty with childhood images better are perceived. Easier getting accustomed to something dramatically a new.
Suddenly to bed dig that little dyed servirovochnyy table, on which emerged glass with cocktail of and fruits. Zvіdusіl themselves a quiet relaxing music.
– Rest well. In courses module you can to visit virtually where anywhere enough only wish, – purrs it was a computerized voice.
Wall suddenly as if were dissolved and Oleg saw around stunning beauty landscape: Mountains, the waterfall … intervals this the current water umirotvoryala. Eyes themselves have become close down.
– you need not nowhere go, I have there is increasingly. I always know, that you need … – proryvalis even through dream words of Baba-Yaga, – I can satisfy any your desire to. If you want to, then you can to remain here on entire life. I better know, that you need and will be able you protect from just. There is nothing better than conduct entire life in tranquil leisure and dream …
Oleg – to deeply and serene and already not heard, as someone began loudly is racing in a closed the door. And then, suddenly, Kolorado blacked out.
He sensed, as someone'm shaking his for reduce leverage and slightly will clap on cheeks.
– or did each, that rip out you from such a get high, but this sake of yours same good, – heard he voice his colleagues and friend, – Don’t thought, that our this magnet here zapryachut. She initially was conceived as rescue module for survival in the forest, but Lies the real trap. She would to death you tranqed. In direct sense to death.
With hard climbing out from sleep, Oleg with breath, made:
– A was quite well, until you this not said.
– Yes its can be cut outside … – has sighed colleague, – We would its was destroy, but our increasingly same hotela capital injected money …
Oleg nodded, silently by agreeing, and quickly in first dressed, left this deceptively hospitable of cards together with its savior.
– Listen, – turned Oleg to counterpart through while,, – A after all for me this simply challenge some! Dangerously and very interestingly! Let I stuck finalize an this module and do his safe!
– I’ll immediately talk with superiors. Although you rights in is, that this is dangerous.
– You same know, that I the even a workaholic! “Monday begins in Saturday ” — this pro me! – she, Oleg and was patted interlocutor on shoulders.

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And again coincidentally! :) In elect pro _ Kuchma figures, in names characters — Oleg.
"Baba Kolorado" me grassroots more. To read was interestingly, and style better idea. The chain stories and reality well lodged: From-machine, aaaea-a cyborg, Vasilisa-Prekrasnomudraya)) Only it is unclear what have him "zasverbilo", sense action motor ahead far —-something and it is unclear why, yes still and in wood, when near welcome learns — not understood. Wasn that the reason in hangover.) Nu and the end of the the sad. And all same a fairy tale! Must well come. But includes morality I saw.
"Kolorado" — the beginning of bad one, intriguing. But further as something — Rather simple all broke a and Polaris as would balled up, there is no its. Ah and in small the little pigeon house to place against Russian stove again me problematic seems)
'll trade you everything preference first — "Sai Baba temple Kolorado."
Authors thank you!

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The first narrative provide, but original, injects in wide cognitive dissonance. On senses here — parodirovanie stories, with with negative axis. Here option, when narrative easily is perceived reader, and can be someone filed for object, but as in flimsy ground of narrative huge risks are lurking. To example, conversational vocabulary with presence of seed zhargonnogo spin and doctrine of precedent names of modernity, on my view, rather reduces stylistics stories, than adds it obyomnosti. The beginning of lifts in vnevremennye framework, however pretsedentnost again same against join Nato plays.
Are interested in one form of, why precisely she was written: I.e. decided to its the author himself whatever the (as coined), or familiar with source of, where she there is. Deal in is, that form of can play on avtorskii the text, if applied intelligent. In the text paradigm not as long, yes, but opportunity interpretations of increasingly same there is.

The second narrative for me soulful, in offense saw more quivering attitude to genre stories, ukhvachen one of under the motives (have W. Ya Proppa, scientist language-1970s by, about this there is). Enlightened the endgame, the beginning of — as like to wrought topic,

So acknowledge preference the second The Author "Kolorado"

Both confirming stories with drags quite emotional, unusual, thank you authors for them!

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Critics. Readers amp; Awtomaticzeskie Udowletworiteli! Still a couple input although would, to to complete this venue) Authors await and nervously bite during zausenki on creative detail by)

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"Baba Kolorado" liked. The endgame need to would help. As on me — winner.

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On this, perhaps, close pristrelochku)

The second place — Kolorado the author Marina. Highly intreresnyy and Regrettable the text!
First place — Sai Baba temple-jaga Peck Zenay Ur-cheers author and pozdravlyalki!

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Sapsibo, friends, for ``debriefing! I’d say honestly, had gone very wrong as open mockery. But when became approached only to finals, himself irresistible, that removes a bit not there. Can from this and emerged some pristine lomannost and change forms. Today first day in city of! As strange increasingly coincided. "Pristrelka 80" and to father traveled on 80 — anniversary.

Last edited by Пек Зенай (Apr 1 2016 09:52:12)

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Ading. Primary. Turned on to read Max Frei. Thing! Something with brains already the beginning of occur. Incidentally, very an interesting style narrative. Nor you "I", nor "He", nor "young people." Simply: Came, made, opened book. -Yisraela, nice.

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Пек Зенай wrote:

ading. Primary. Turned on to read Max Frei. Thing! Something with brains already the beginning of occur. Incidentally, very an interesting style narrative. Nor you "I", nor "He", nor "young people." Simply: Came, made, opened book. -Yisraela, nice.

And what the, Peck Zenay?

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Задумчивый Пёс wrote:

A what the, Peck Zenay?

",, Vetry, People" "Telega"

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Peck Zenay
Thank you for reviews on my the text! Wanted write something in a spirit of "Monday begins in Saturday" :blush:

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Пек Зенай wrote:

"Angela, Vetry, People" "Telega"

Thank for the answer)

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