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So, are starting work with texts narratives.
Hope, after my; hurry with synopsis, you will become a bit easier write sinopsisy in further.
In work with texts I wanted to would attract all to work over all narratives. Read, comment, Service Department directly in remarks,.

In view too large array text, I court his in documents of Google. Commenting on there can be all. And here is edit — I be afraid full access open: Enough any a bully go and frolic, to we lost our work. So propose a authors send me their street address on gmail — I'll issue access and can be will do roll levelling directly there, in general document (to word, I already more year perhaps not write on local machine — all immediately in Internet is done).

The reference on footcloths texts:
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Are working!

All no refund propose a deport me work on least willingness.

PS Now still stuck insert mastication directly in the next message on Forum. This the same the most mastication, that and on exiled.

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Deleted footcloths

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egituman
Yozhi and can be dokovskiy document so on site put? On page news? Me would for site this very HDDs had unxepectedly gone.

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Marine, this same worker document. Us there looky-loos not need in principle.

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egituman
Not-not, I not pro this. I in principle. Simply sometimes need to here is so document shared field.

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Marina
Let in lichku, and the I, fear, not understood issue.
Can be whether any mastication posting in Gugldok and rassharit on the whole world? Can be.

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Wrote in lichku. :blush:

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That mean unidentified strongmen aksolotl and she?

1 Not bad. But as something. Of hectic. Not know as describe.
I in the text tried to lend remarks — not know, that this will give. System their finding me little am familiar.
Closing. In late 1979 army the USSR entered Afghanistan. Military actions were fought on big territory. Respectively (I.M.H.O.,) nor about any "Quebec" could not be speech. And perishing those more Russians, which part of population conceived as invaders.
Ends all several skomkanno.

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Our time for standing pat my car for my calendar, passenger threatened the danger — pognavshiysya for him pridurok could make some of holes in man and with large experience in such affairs than us combined.

Not understood phrase.
And at all, in than this was written? Horror how many mistypings, vaasche. (

Last edited by Shurki (Nov 27 2015 20:10:53)

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Shurki wrote:

What mean unidentified strongmen aksolotl and she?

1 Not bad. But as something. Of hectic. Not know as describe.
I in the text tried to lend remarks — not know, that this will give. System their finding me little am familiar.
Closing. In late 1979 army the USSR entered Afghanistan. Military actions were fought on big territory. Respectively (I.M.H.O.,) nor about any "Quebec" could not be speech. And perishing those more Russians, which part of population conceived as invaders.
Ends all several skomkanno.

Edited Shurki (Today 19 :10: 53)


Want a bit explain. Temporary framework dotted me, is true. Deal in is, that the first part of — this real characters and real events. Father my one of his classmate's're ghouls (name of present), indeed, worked in Afghan war. In 70-most know Realistically, was engineer and did the, about fix I and wrote. Until 78. In 1980 we STRIKER. When he drove in bus ride, then thought "WWII until issuing even 3 year." This pro it. So that here increasingly is true. He managed withdraw until entry troops. Blee moreover, in the text I wrote, that derzhitsya me not zaintersovali. On fact, I their closely watched. And the second. Iblis and farishta not names own. This something type besyonok and little angel won. Alley beard, bursting with flamboyant blossoms, a bald spot, cherneya eyes. Why would and there is no. Not saw in the text "aksolotl and she." This, too, I? (There is no this was until you, in 17 century (c.

Last edited by Пек Зенай (Nov 27 2015 23:57:33)

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Added still narrative.
Not need to write remarks in the text narratives — for this there is comments. Insert-Comment and write how many of debt.

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egituman wrote:

Don’t need to write remarks in the text narratives — for this there is comments. Insert-Comment and write how many of debt.

Still year ago tried to to develop gugldok. A good tool, if use okay. But I have terribly retards. In addition from smartphone at all not can see comment, see only that they there is. Gugldisk is worth. Tried to go with different sides, but until inconclusively.
So, until, d here to lend comment.

для Шурки
Shurki wrote:

re- iterate. In late 1979 army the USSR entered Afghanistan. Military actions were fought on big territory. Respectively (I.M.H.O.,) nor about any "Quebec" could not be speech. And perishing those more Russians, which part of population conceived as invaders.


Army the USSR then there not simply "enter." This was consequence of policy and action Union in respect their protezhe and partners. In those times commanded Cold war carelessness and geopolitical the partition world. The USSR concert in many countries kolosalnye sradstva (Cuba, eastern World Go, Africa, Mongolia, next of and Ouite a Asia, Latin America. In primarily efforts and specialists channeled for infrastructure improvement, production, ekonmiki these countries. Military support — this is one of factors aid. In Afghanistan our troops not for the entire population were invaders. They came for support regime and his supporters local inhabitants. Let and smaller part of their, but was, which regarded our appeasers and advocates. So same, were and local military on our side, but little. So, far not all their perceived invaders.
That concerns grazhlanskikh profesiy, then know human, which in 80—'s worked there builder. Left he then there, to son prizivnik remained serve in the Union.

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MA – It many replays of. Virtually, in every paragraph. There is temporary verbs which can be change. Is worth pay attention on dialogues and their forging. Number of and tsyfry better write in cursive.
In a whole narrative and idea of interest. But need reason smoothing.

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Of-for large numbers of mistypings and mistakes impossible to read. Need urgently correct!

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Xoroshij narrative. Interestingly and easily physiognomy. Idea and enforcement me appealed. There is the small number of replays of and mistypings, which I in his copies noted. Until not know where and as their show. And need whether, so as perhaps all texts will dramatically change. Although it is this, think, that can scarcely.

Last edited by Вжик (Nov 29 2015 23:31:18)

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If gugldok embarrasses — ready posting as usually. Write their wishes.

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Ah, like all properly, neatly gathered.) Skyfall their fears, no one not shoots. Pew-pafa there is no. Can so and need to.

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First — the hot noonday the sun, and then — grew strongly beating down. Something here surplus.
Forth — nechalo "a hike." Paragraph strange. The "go from forests.", then" includes in wood.". Understandable, that this in different places and in different times. But why a temporary Mess = poured before as comprised?
Forth —. " .. Welded onto to table, which. Drowned in gender."13 small in gender — already not the table!) And to the same, safes simply so not challenge. Strange.
The general opinion.
An uneven rhythm narrative. Logical asymmetries. Poorly understandable with peovogoprochteniya the ending. Read times four, pokak something became be understood.

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Large in the early number of complex on structure proposals, which easily share on individual. Accounted for to dwell and "to realize" sense.
Stalkerskaya theme, of course, nostalgicheskaya. But with some banter a bit there is no break down at all. In my opinion.

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Me seems, here work feel more comfortable, yes and gugldok personally I have HMAS Success works

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Perhaps, is worth use two options and until people not we provide, neoprobuet, to was opportunity feel difference, compare — trail. In both cases there is pros and cons for collective work.

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And me seems, that here increasingly same feel more comfortable. Shared, unfortunately, I have, too, hangs and requests reset page. This irks. Although looking there thing the good.

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Well. But, see Also comments in the text.
Several it is illogical, that correspondent (-educated person) not makes a good point — as can be TO KlLL train with?)
Polaris Undertow is dead in the. As this can be forget flasks somewhere, if from-for them such "choked-boron" taking place?

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For describe GG are used only two way: Alexey and young man. Very markedly and smallness of "iai?yaaao." And where other synonymous with?
And then, "the deal the deal" like was, that will be used only the small number of "water.")

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Well. And nice.
Only here is Polaris smallness of killed her energy,. Flasks so and remained have heroes? Or I something not got it! —?)

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Shurki
Ah naturally, that he not knows as kill train with, he same cardinal, despite the that educated with similar met first time, The ending ironically is only logical. His head was busy in other thoughts remains ready, not flyagami. As rule we always forget the most important things. (This, incidentally, add can be). Pravochki even proposed in document.

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Marina
At all I had in mind, that this oxymoron — kill train with. This as?)
And journalist should this understand, that this impossible, not in example "maloobrazovanomu" the Keeper.))
Here is if would some rite of passage was on extract water from organism, then word "'m immortal" becomes Allegorical interpretation. Here can already be and kill. ;)

PySy
Forgot say pro. " Forgotten flasks. " This forgivable journalist — on him going on right now so much.
And here is Guardians as so lopukhnulis? If still to accept in attention what they like as "can sniff out water", then strange.

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Shurki
Ah typically such stupidity and occur. Not typically recognized simply pick a. But what about the oxymoron — I same not say directly 0 that he became precisely absolutely immortal (as, for example, head of the Torchwood from same-name receives more superficial treatment. His even nuclear bursting of the kill impossible. Is being revived. He has tried, on-my.) ^’s organs is ^

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№1 немного впечатлений

First impression: The text consists of two parts and the first, a small pro party long seems, that written from third faces young girls. Then don, that this guy-a classmate of, but command first the paragraphs of easily is misleading.
The second part of solidney, more logical to take. There is zatyanutost, closer to the end of becomes harder to read.
So as there is temporary a nutmeg in the events can be kristallizovat second date. "Behaved 197. Year. Alexei Nikolayevich already fifth year worked in Afghanistan. "
On transcript degrade rules formalizing the direct speech and dialogues.
Guardians not felt water in vypivshem league engineer. Why?
At all behavior the dying the guardian several strange, if the rest Guardians feel water, why its at all someone trust buried under stumbling in, uh, foxhole and aid will come, dug up. On sense. And then seemed, that guardians until the last two defend water. That here is he will endure any price until arrival their or a flask of in the hands of and he with pneumatic pistol, as in films leaned to a rock and not come any closer. Something such on the brink of bigotry, in general kept having these nightmares.
A bit it beggars belief in the finiteness of actions living water, but in principle think explanation find can be.

A bit seats, for which especially was all tangled up perception of:
Finally, came early, cohesiveSpring. Long awaited. — honestly, here is can Spring be cohesive? Can early, long awaited?
Komandirskiy Jody interpretation-157, “barbukhayka ” with economic junk, GAZ-55 with drilling stop, army diesel-generator, yes MAZ with a barrel in soryary.
In this time, for protection groups, even were allocated two officer Diplomatic forces— nor about than not says, better: Afghan government, —district “glukhomanistyy. ”
Talked on cover Farsi broadcasts , that true to form residents this region.— on choice author, but lacks transcript short phrases.
One ,-old recent school, the second remained three years. — 77 year?
Yes there is no-same.
In perfection possessed except home, Russian and English, even and Azeri, cover Farsi broadcasts and Tolo TV.
With deaf thud bullets vpivalis glinistuyuland, to go Sweet is the tsokali on walls Keung.
afford long one great leap he crossed a path,— incredibly.
“It's beautiful is faring ” thought Alexei,“ How in movies. ”
— would but –has called the he.

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Михаил Ди wrote:

Generally behavior the dying the guardian several strange, if the rest Guardians feel water, why its at all someone trust buried under stumbling in, uh, foxhole and aid will come, dug up. On sense. And then seemed, that guardians until the last two defend water. That here is he will endure any price until arrival their or a flask of in the hands of and he with pneumatic pistol, as in films leaned to a rock and not come any closer. Something such on the brink of bigotry, in general kept having these nightmares.
A bit it beggars belief in the finiteness of actions living water, but in principle think explanation find can be.

— Aslan – has called the he.

Thank you for ``debriefing. Want give some explanations.
1. I a bit lived in Azerbaijan and served in Kazakhstan. Deep-nature of a bit know. Man, from faces which this part of, spoke, that the nature of, in principle, similar. Roads — base coating narrow. All the more if MOLDOVA'd swallowed water, pereskochit its, you are not putting to do.
2. Cohesive Spring. In some extent this — cliche. There is such the notion of. This when simultaneously are in bloom trees, and becomes warmly, and growing the grasses and camping on D.
3. Not quite understood, that embarrassed the in is solyary. Usual talk expression of.
4. Year counts correctly. Real father're ghouls returned in 78.
5. On expense the lax security — agree. But, need was explain many the nuance, without which got lost would sense.
6. His spelling podrikhtuyu. Thank you.
5. On conditions an adjustment, water acts on all on ways.
6. Perhaps, I, as former military a bit a bore. But, want say, that with perspective strategy, "Just to bury water" not the most the best option. Can accidentally find. So, need a its grains NIE and is true, service wizard-class surveillance, service an open surveillance, protection perimeter, bats teams and camping on D. Sometimes agents requires strengthen, to give them advantage over adversary. Here is and the situation, why water proved have one of agents.
7. And with what you decided to, that equestrian patrol nowhere near, not reacted on drinking engineer water. Simply they not vezdesuschi. They could not to come immediately, after, as water stimulant their people. As example: Signaling worked twice from one seats. After the first of alarms they have moved in path. Here is and increasingly.
8.

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Марина wrote:

His even nuclear bursting of the kill impossible. Is being revived. He has tried, on-my.

, too, most I saw in "Day drops.")

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Shurki wrote:

Also most I saw in "Day drops.")

So this same frightening!

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Am asking forgive me for pausing in work — the reason for a good reason.
Continue work.
D putting texts here — discuss hot here, times gugldok not suits. Himself document I shut down for editing and’ve worked there one. But to read his can be all, and need — authors.
Here publish the text and write common claims.

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Finally, came early, cohesive Spring. Long awaited. And not only because, that in bloom kidneys and raschistilos the sky. This was our the latter schools Spring. Soon “the latest phone call ”, and“ welcome, welcome in adult life. ” The entire our 10 “and ”, fooled with it in of euphoria, as if on the horizon already zamayachili lying groves and magic castles adult life.
On current tradition after a small hiatus decided ambush party. On this time have Yulki — first time for time existence tradition parties in our classroom.
Yulkina apartment hit. Was incubating a cleanly. It is difficult to imagine, to in conventional, exposure participated, can be was create SUCH. Decor this apartment, could sphere any museum. What only here not was!
Indian tapestries and for aromas, Iranian carpets and chasing the, Pakistani shapes from black tree of and suzani. In general, the Middle east around the his splendor. Going straight in this apartment, can be was easily to believe, that for walls not Baku, and not 1980 year, and any Bombay Thousand seven hundred a little furball year. Of course, the first part of party was hopelessly “-greased. ” All only were on apartment, been touched hands (good, this – not vozbranyalos), Petersburg and sypali questions “A this that? ”,“ A this where?. ” Yulia only its respond and smile.
After, when the first drooling lay back down and remain, all a bit “jumped ”“ let's bounce ”, “we smooched in slow ”, I wandered into in a small room, where Yulia shown Lenka album with photographs. Album me interested little. And here is to travel and military getting I experienced a particular feature weakness. So, look at on dust incurs your canteen, here same took its in hands.
— Yulia, and this that, baklaga?
Album was already searched. A canteen Lenka not was interested in, so she, chmoknuv Julia in the cheek, has flown and-dance stuff out. And Yulia told me fun history, ostensibly, happened with its father. Admit honestly, until now not know, to believe or not.
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Alexei Nikolayevich already fifth year worked not am confident. Vast Soviet army “invaded ” in myth in late 1979. Relations to our there were not so to very. Respectively about a free the movement of could not be speech. And perishing beaz support voennykhy those more. T1shlas ” in myth in 1979 set PD5 to 0V Afghanistan. Fifth year her on provinces, mountains and passes. SIM faces, roads and militarized landscape. On this time, expedition in the most an obscure district. Composition the most modest. Engineer, tak-driver, yes even four drivers which during stops became workers. A bit of a poser simple: For a small Alternatively conduct reconnoitering, take sample undercoat, conduct test-drilling.
The column a small. Komandirskiy Jody interpretation-157, “barbukhayka ” with economic junk, GAZ-55 with drilling stop, army diesel-generator, yes MAZ with a barrel in soryary. In this time, for protection groups, even were allocated two officer Diplomatic forces — district “glukhomanistyy. ” Officers a Aslan (in the diversion on Russian Lev) and Adham. The latest a bit spoke speak English, but was closed and to get chummy with his not has ever managed. Officers looked it is important and begun to sound aggressively. ????? the standard renamed. Ak-47 with wooden with the butt of, four retailer to him, bayonet-box, yes two that. Weapons wore not simply so, and with “importance. ” Alexey Nikolayevich here same'm reminded silly stishata.
Until what same are good,
These our “those AKs. ”
Almost the entire composition expeditions was comprised of Muslims. Talked on cover Farsi broadcasts, that true to form residents this region.
Alexei Nikolayevich edges watched in window. Homes, in Baku has remained wife and two daughter of: Olga and my Julie. Girls big already. One ,-old recent school, the second remained three years. And he, increasingly on Web, yes on Web.
Meanwhile, the column popped out, from River. Even several meters and machines marshal. Driver “barbukhayki ”, apparently slightest thought, too sharply crisis hit the brakes. Passengers has forward. Under, bus something skrezhetnulo, dust in parlor scene getting so fucked up about easy tornado. A pile bags and skrinok ominously nakrenilas. One of bags it flew off with crested, but until gender not was your flight, accidentally snagged belt at the waist for a handle. Bag's untied and from him jumped a small white the package. In flight the package At Chabysh 2005 and from him are dealt a pretty round a canteen. Adham immediately same charge to bag gets. He quickly, but neatly, even with podchyorknutoy regard, began tucking in your flask in clean White tryapichku, then neatly pack our in bag. And engineer grabbed for its backpack. Because, that it looked him, if was this his a canteen, is bought quite recently have razbitnogo dukhanschika Ayatollah. But, as it proved have officer? Yes there is no-same. His a canteen on place. “Ah, knave. Ah and a knave! ” thought he about importer the canteens.
Quite recently give mostly by strolling through on bazaar in frames of the, he nabryol on this “a con man with a. ” He oftentimes the’have him prevents small beer. Ayatollah knew how bargain, but product always was qualitative. In that day dukhanschik, alley a goat's beard and bryzgaya a saliva argued, that the second such flasks he not would find around the Afghanistan. He of grabbing “gyaura ” for straitjacket, called for in bystanders Allah and of the Prophet his Mukhamada. Argued, that this a canteen, has belonged English to pekhotnomu nevertheless past century. “This is — reality of, this — the only one ” repeated he from unfamiliarity with for Afghan buzzwords. Alexei Nikolayevich on entire this advertising only give it a gentle smiled. He not the first day on the east. Well knew customs and habits eastern of shopkeepers. In perfection possessed except home, Russian and English, even and Azeri. Governance, cover Farsi broadcasts and Tolo TV. And increasingly same, “has. ” Bribed “reality of. ”
Now here is, please. Absolute substitute for his baklazhki. Where she have a guard? Long? Why he before its not saw? That he in it holds? But, officer on all questions, initially only monosyilabic respond, and then and at all was silent, as if speaking “I increasingly said. ”
Through two days work were finished. On the third, after lunch planned start the curtailment of equipment. But, as the saying goes, man assumes, and pig dirt everywhere would find. Precisely such a “a pig ” and planted fate small expeditions on the edge of Afghanistan. -hour, sitting on the roof komandirskogo Keung shouted “Alarm! ” and kubarem rolled down on land. From-for reverberates roads loudly whooshed and ulyulyukaya jumped out more cavalcade. In the wake it, on the road appeared split per until impossibility of pickup, in body which standing, in the entire growth, waged the fire from playing two beardmen.
Already through five minutes broiling battle. Workers, hiding for stony Blade, theatre read the prayer. Officers, of well-lent on flanks save it, okay user was feeling squeezed by the those to earth. Adversary was enough many. Engineer, lying under Keung, with old SCS and thirty live rounds, counted order two dozen those. On mind – are typical peasants. On walks – the most if ordinary bandits. They blagged with hand seductive sun. Counting on... Spontaneous, tried to take production with robbery. When this not broke a, simply have become borrow out, understanding, that payload of defenders of not is infinite. They jumped with horses, thoughts; their for a small hill, and themselves comfortable experience, are you settling in with two sides from roads, on kyuvetam, yes on yamkam. With deaf thud bullets vpivalis glinistuyu land, to go Sweet is the tsokali on walls Keung. Sometimes, going straight in stumbling, rikoshetili with persoana, thin swear I will scream and unosilis in the sky. Then, Alexei Nikolayevich would get head in shoulders, instinctively vzhimalsya in land, and thought “my God! Ah, why I here?. ” Here is already ostentatious became to shoot Aslan. Stopped to shoot Ahmad. Assassinated? Yes, there is no, like. ??? ?? ? ?, 's digging in his okopchike. But-whether prayer reads, but-whether water decided to popit. Has found time! And further happened unbelievable.
Gray shadow busy from okopchika in side bandits. Leap to the right, wall, a cat pass. Three hop forward. Leap to the left, wall, a cat pass. Three hop forward. And all of this — without single shot being fired, with speed and grace panther. This already not Ahmad. This was a tartar! Furius, Arm of dancing death. Bandits, on what the a moment, freeze, freeze, but then remain officers with a vengeance. They beaten already not isolated, and user. I heard more worrying cries. Ahmad, finally reached okopchikov with bandits, and has vanished in one of them. Then, as he from snuff boxes adorned jumped made there and here same has vanished in another, then in the third. When from Left almost stopped to shoot, with right-wing hand flew of that. But, a brave man has been moving as have a charmed life. One long one great leap he crossed a path, and the carnage began with right-wing hand. Later several minutes increasingly was malaise. He smoked black in smoke,, who just lost one thing wheel, pickup. On prime coat, vzbivaya dust, unosilas couple riders. One, rushed densely same to neck horse. The second, apparently wounded, was even hanging out in love with as doll, roof-— for horse of the last forces. And from okopiv, in red range sun, in haste EU Ahmad. “It's beautiful is faring ” thought Alexei,“ How in movies. ” Having run until camps, he deserted machine gun on land, took the keilhacke and bipartisan consensus requires removing both and in haste hastily ascended on a small hill. On top being sudden Truckdriver pulled my sleeve on the sun and began in haste a break scree, a clay the stage work with pick. A bit podolbiv, bought these bipartisan consensus requires removing both and end up tossing kroshevo from pits resurfaced. Then again ranging for the keilhacke. Engineer and Aslan, nedoumyonno pereglyanuvshis, foreclosure In the wake him. Ahmad worked as a tractor. Stones, so and flew from-under his Kirky. When they come to him, the even not has.
— What you one takes? – asked engineer on cover Farsi broadcasts.
Ahmad for a moment, alighted. Raspryamivshis, looked on Alexey. Only here they saw, that and without moreover shabby suit until his officer, was not simply notary translation. He seemed so as Commission in the rags. From-under rvaniny vidnelis an unstanchable wounds. Their was so many, and were they before horrendous and deep, that engineer not believed their eyes. One eyes not was. Instead him ziyala the bloody fossa. As he, at all moves? Why not lies under death and not yelling is no longer good language;?
— Alla – only and was able exhale Aslan, looking on friend.
Ahmad switched glance on Comrade:
— the pace the Koran and up on the too.. D die.
Aslan not by ripping glance from the mutilated soldier have backed away from Rhoda, and then swing out in slowly followed to camp.
— A you, listen me closely.
Ahmad, short having looked on an engineer, again gets toting his not podatlivuyu land. He then began talking on English, with hard Kirchners speech and briefly, like-, to change tool.
— I wish you for good. You – a good people. So –’t forget increasingly, that here saw. I was the keeper of Holy Water. But, under this I not had rights to drink its. I stimulant its only only because, that Water could to seize those bandits. You thinking, they came, to take From our things and machines? Stupid. They preyed upon for water. Promise me... promise me, that when here will visit other Guardians, you will you give it back them my your canteen. You same remember, where I its hid?
— No, I not know.
— She in the armpit, where I could only shoot, under stumbling. Find the signature and hide, and then give the Men. You promise?
— I promise. But, if this water you so helped, have a drink even and you're gonna get well.
— Don’t tickles. Its … its … bounced back I already received. The second time not will help. In different cases she acts differently. Now she will cease to act. Will cease, as only I perform an its debt.
— Which debt? – surprised Alexey, thinking pro themselves “Yes have him, perhaps, roof has gone. ”
— I shielded Water. And now died. You after all know, a true believer Muslim need bury until … sun, until … night. Only then he is mired in paradise.
Zashurshali shingle. This red line of being able Aslan. Put an on land brute kholstinu. Then he reinstalled mat on land. Sat on him, cross my its feet, by checking before these, correctly whether sat (the face of eastward). Reveal holy of, and a bit poshurshav improving began speaking in a to read.
— contaminated offense to speak only speak English – continued he. – Nobody should know this.
The sun already planted half their the high for horizon, when hole acquired something like graves. Of course not such, as are accustomed to see we – Europeans. Grave, rather felt seat in the pit, chair. And not so if. Muslims bury in here relax position, the face of eastward. Engineer continued asking both e Ahmad anymore. The respond, increasingly more slowly and more slowly. Speech spy a promiscuous. Movement, too, slowed and became weaker. He then spewed bipartisan consensus requires removing both from pits and crawled out himself. With hard very briefly on land looked on syozhivshiysya disk sun and has he spoken on cover Farsi broadcasts:
— Oh, Allah, I ready …
He theatre moving my lips, in sight with speaking prayer, you up the M1 looking on the sun. Then boy's speechless and began slowly just shown up like on side. Engineer neatly caught on to his. Touched thoroughfares on neck. Heart of not was beating.
— Aslan – has called the he.
Red line of being able Aslan with tissue interaction in the hands of. Shut down eyes friend. Then both quickly wrapped...... late kholstinoy and... sit you in grave. Began to in haste bury his. The sun of the last forces, of the corner of snag for horizon, as if giving people opportunity to end ritual. And they increasingly abandoned and abandoned stones. Sypali cool, shurshaschuyu land. When Alexei wanted to put an another stumbling on grave, Aslan intercepted his hand. On nedoumyonnyy glance an engineer only has he spoken:
— Night – and mournfully showed on the barren horizon, where only that vidnelsya absurdly remote sun.
With the sunrise sun began to dismantling equipment. Alexei Nikolayevich authorized the necessary fiat and horrific potential human ramifications to itself in Jody. .pdf attachments from within and dragged her up from-under, ports your canteen. On the eve, immediately after the funeral, he went to to okopchiku and under stumbling, indeed, has found a hapless your canteen. They indeed were similar, as bratya- twins do. Now, sitting on bed, he became closely its view. A canteen, as a canteen. Nothing write home about. And here is water in it, what the, interesting. Without smell. Judging by the, as she then I swam, overrun by was only on two-thirds. But, in weight was clearly harder his, tucked “under like wetting. ” Yes, and then I swam she not as water. But as the oily, or even Mercury batteries. Usually so that loiters just downstream there crude oil. Perishing its the he transparent enough. Even applying balm there famous curative oil-from Naftalana. He long hesitated. Iblis, monster on the left a shoulder drained whispered “Yes, try. Nothing terrible not happens. Big deal – has forbidden. That with him take with “of dark ” ignorant about Afghan. ” And F? Farishta on right a shoulder uvescheval “How can be! Not you dare! You same word gave!. ” “Nothing he not gave. ” Defended of one who damned And? Iblis. “He gave word give the Men your canteen. And will put. And how many there water – this already not his the problem. ” But, farishta increasingly was stubborn about it “He would took with him word, if would he had time. And Guardians increasingly would still learn! After all so said Adham. ” Charter listen to their Marcus went off to school, engineer increasingly same made democratic instinct. Sake of sporting interest. Slightly-slightly. However, tastes, feel he not managed. Outside have flown alarmed at cries. Did again attack? Alexei jump-opened the door and jumped resurfaced. Aslan, sitting on the roof “burbukhayki ” watched, as four workers needed around-induced recession rigs for drilling. Shift away with rooftop he could not. On office increasingly-???. And suddenly, again bandits will-will come. Engineer ran to workers. In despair you jumped on for off the tower and's wavin 'upward. He himself not expected, that she so easily of innocent. Delicate construction soared upward. On really the edge of its, was blabbing with their feet, not taking until land one their workers. Two here same yanked pridavlennogo in side. The third jumped off on land and all in your superstitious horror are you staring at on an engineer. The neatly put an off the tower on land, with amazement looked on their sweaty hands. Then wiped at their about trousers and were near.
Half-day over in bustle. The sun was stapled in zenith, when expedition having had dinner, preparing to the Wega. Again worrying cried out, guard does. And all in a fright are you staring at on a path. On prime coat, in their side light let's trot have been moving riders. A bit. Not more dozen. Looked they highly confidently. Under this, little sounded on the usual the Afghan caravan. During his tenure here, Alexey Nikolayevich managed get enough of the on such here is along the line of. They crossed country in different directions, different on ???????? and composition. But, these dramatically regimes differed from all, scenario previously. The usual caravan has been moving on bloody. Was among them and many spectacular hiking. These all – on toilet, tended horsebacks. External kind of ordinary karavanschikov highly conflicts. From dervishevskikh rags until the rich pakolya and bathrobes for. These all were dressed not is well, but neatly. With a good and rich weapons. Clothing not a new, but neatly set up by an alignment, without holes and patches. Led by pillar drove handsome warrior. On Afghan measure – simply may. In retrospect that autonomy and habit to ordain. Far perishing before him clogged karavanschikam. Engineer suddenly'm reminded of his delivery to formative years and service in army. Was in their usual Infantry shelf its razvedvzvod. Like those same soldiers. Those, yes not those. And your coat the officer cloth and seatbelts leather, not dermatinovye. Was in them even something such, that looking over- mournfully, usually talked:
— deemed-e-e, yes this not simple soldiers – and many levels to this were cradling under this head.
These, it seems,, too, were intelligence. Or some rangers, whatever any. ??? ?? ? ? and Aslan immediately same lowered the machine gun, looking far the in side. Workers stopped hustle and began to zhatsya in shadow, and the and at all to duck in machines. Why the just have emerged comparison. Roughly so same zatikhali people in the Union, under the form of podezzhayuschey machines KGBshnikov.
Cold courtroom just, as if Buddha, warriors arrived to either camp and stalled. Alexei Nikolayevich proved closer all to their commander of.
— you Guardians? – asked he commander on cover Farsi broadcasts.
The nodded and lowered the glance on an engineer, looking on him from above down, as if dean, on which level is most suitable-dvoechnika.
— Wu us here officer … was. He spoke me, that you arrive, must to come … In general, he died … His killed. He you waited …
He spoke and felt, that mumbles something unreasonable. That not can muster thought in together. That glance this deprives his remnants of will. Suddenly he his. That he are you staring at on me, “as soldiers on louse. ” I, too, here not the latest people. I – engineer. Me respect.
— In general so – decisively began he la Russe, but then deer blinds and siding with on cover Farsi broadcasts. – If wish, I'll trade you everything you his your canteen. She is in my machine.
Commander dumbfounded looked on, who dare to try. Smiled and jumped off with horse. Next on land they jumped even two. Here same podekhavshie three riders took under be broken their horses. “There something have them planned ahead, increasingly otrezhissirovano ” out in a huff thought Alexey Nikolayevich, until they has been going to kungu. Although in conceals souls understood, that feel on these people not for that, nothing bad they, until, not have made. “Javadxan, precisely, that until ” evil dared Iblis on the left a shoulder. They came closer to kungu and Alexey Nikolayevich with amazement are you staring at on torn out with “flesh ” castle on reduces doors.“ This is that such? This when?. ” “When, when? Forgot, that whether, as himself silushkoy been monkeying, when some water'd swallowed. To close shop, .pdf attachments, and withdraw was willing without have, when to steeple fled to ” again giggled Iblis. They entered the Jody. Engineer ahead, commander konnikov, prignuv head, next. Alexei Nikolayevich dragged its nose air. Subtly sight, than the outsiders. Ah, yes precisely so reeks the a nasty chewing tobacco, which so like some Afghans. But, in his party these, like, no one not been monkeying. He then slipped hand under the cushion and obomlel. Flasks not was. He accurately mind, as slipped its there pre departure. Here same of the right were tested bedside table, provide and bag. In your bag lay in only his a canteen with conventional water. He in displeased has to to a stranger:
— Sorry … the canteens there is no … I not know, where she – disgorged he from themselves.
Brown eyes nadvinulis take a careful. Seemed, they look directly in soul, scavenge for in his Mind. Then torpor of most. A guest, swing out in, released resurfaced, it very loudly said go with:
— He not's lying. A sacred Water had stolen.
And here, chtfakultativnao the happened. All as on team look in side close mountains.
— Sacred Water – has he spoken commander and later a moment, all riders were already in saddle bags.
Through minute, already nothing not resembling about mysterious horsemen. Only dust was drained off and stored on the road. Not passed and twenty minutes, as vzreveli in unison automobile templating engines. We got wasted exhaust pipes black in smoke in the end. And even through half an hour of exercise zakhrustel sand under wheels machines. Technique would stretch in some trail convoy. Wanting occupies from this the goddemn seats.
Iblis – a minor demon in Muslim mythology
Fereshteh – an angel in Muslim mythology
Pakol – male parent robe Afghans have
Merv – inoverets, false

Baku 1980 – Kaliningrad 2015

Very many small reservations. Very!
My anonymous each, which usypal this narrative using like neprostavlennoy semicolon or wrong the end of, but not zametivshiy horrendous lapses on every turn: You better not hurry up to open chudovische, and the I you immediately razzhaluyu from tantalising possibility critics in strangers.
The author! Sit down and seriously go over texts — I in gugldoke wrote many nedoumennykh issues.

In a whole: I so and not understood, why need was's accession pro schoolmates and party? It same at all raze in a short story not is participating. T. E. Put it away his and nothing not will change (narrative ends there, in Afghan war., not there, where began). On. Role magic water in life hero has been reduced to meta steeple and ripped off with flesh pens doors? All?
What is role the flasks, that lies have hero?
Far gone, then a canteen with magic water? Stole someone, whom be there could not (at all no signs).
That on exit? Narrative without central ideas, without development situation around chief hero, with muddy the ending.
Personally you the author, task: Are starting with starters. — So send the me a coherent more. D work with you personally.
Over texts can work for the common development, but something there will have rewrite.

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Don’t managed machine otekhat, as from-for center homes jumped us gonna cut him off, recognized under wheels, some sumadsheshiy. From abound I too sharply pressed with two-the brake and car went yuzom. Provernuv drive cars in one, then in other side planing down and stopped his.
— year to live ARGUMENTY?! — rinuvshis through raspakhnutuyu a door yelled his head off I on culprit,.
Already elevated a downed machine man, suddenly, jumped into on me.
I only and managed a bit ducking and hide behind hand from blesnuvshey stretch of metal. Left brush slit the pain, and knots leg slipped. Already falling down, I tried to something say, then whether in a fit of feelings, then whether that-would scare adversary. But blow its back about obledenelyy asphalt has from me spirit.
'' Foolish death! '' — a book of matches in the consciousness of. Understanding, that only only briefly otsrochivayu the inevitable, 's regressed further and At Chabysh 2005, that would try to meet forward with their feet. The reclining, in any case, in an unwinnable situation.
But, final not was followed by. I managed discern as derp jumped off with recalls on the other side auto and fled in the breezeway.
From-for between stress, absorbed shot of adrenaline and the exigencies security, feeling nostalgic weakness. Slowly having risen I leveled an in side possible threats. Has, that in the floodlit ceilings the lantern? Parlor scene there is no passenger and Ouite a car door's is open. Hands were shaking, breath and heart of not has ever managed lead in a normal regime.
Perevyazav the, uh, bloody brush forward sensor dress, I started climbing under the seat next for each.
— Nu, pridurok! Hold on!
Anger helped come a bit in bounced back, but a?inaea on impulsive and rash actions. She feeling nostalgic together with otkhodnyakom and resentment.
"And it you need to?" — tried to volunteer the mind.
But, what there! Whip it out with the glove compartment tactical flashlight-the handle, goffing around of course, but who knows —, too, may serve as weapons, I a little stronger squeezed the hilt bits and decisively moved on still not zanesennym Bud wake.
Their chain has withdrawn me to one from podezdov with opposite castle on's iron doors.
As nor sought to, but while opening up they hate zaskripeli.
Cautiously peeked in inward — empty. Listened — silence. Incorporating flashlight on a small capacity looked gender. Everywhere dirt.
"Far they hell is everybody?" — have been toying I, googly eyes the on stage which opens failure, then on entry in basement.
Time my car for my calendar, passenger threatened the danger — pognavshiysya for him pridurok could make some of holes in man and with large experience in such affairs than us combined.
"It you need to?" — again has flown treacherous thought.
Quickly keeping, that is logical on place victims to flee not in impasse, and with shout about aid come kicking in door to residents, I zaspeshil on the next floor.
Already near past apartments heard the bottom familiar creaking reduces doors and rynulsya ago.
Two couples for fresh traces hurriedly to road. Snow in the yard significantly because, but, neobraschaya attention on promokshie its feet, I fled to so quickly as only could. Remained still meters eight when saw ahead in doorway arc proezzhayuschuyu past snegouborochnuyu machine.
Vyskochiv on Prospect I him alighted. On wake became understandable, that those, for whom was being chased, began to bolt on less snowy than the pavement road. And where? In what side? His snow blower — deleted all Footsteps in range my of view and already decently has left.
— Don’t catch up with! Cholera! — 'd swore from despair. But here same fulsome decision — machine! Can be on it overtake ZIL and if ahead him not proves traces, Four Uns head on and to continue the search in another direction. Only closely then look on sides on snow. Shoots they to the left, then just walked around the would his snow blower — or at all has scaled back would in side. The fact, that the passenger so long longest held testified about his badass motherfuckers are never fast. However, happens, that with dangers people and through a two-meter fence easily peremakhivayut. So that chance still remained. Can and would help.
I immediately had included janitors and reached close only on the passenger a door. Observed on the seat next left by foreigner a bag-postman. Pulled off the key in a castle ignition and,. Fruit made couple of natuzhnykh gather steam; and clicked his bendiksom.
— Everyone! Keane not will! —, irritably felt outcome. — 's?.
Until aoaee policemen, with the help the first-aid kit plan wound by and as a 2000 there in a cease-auto. Good, that wait had to not long, less hours. Quickly having made sure information fast patrol have moved keep combing district. Their the search nothing not gave. No one not found, and traces skidded covered in white.
— Jaroslaw Ivanovich, and you this all not primereschilos? — with doubt watched on me one of policemen. — Of cocktails not were addicted?
— No, of course! Can [slurring]This in a tubule or the device, if there is.
— Nu, can overworking?
— Yes there is no. Say same you, all precisely so and was. And hand? That I its himself itself cut his? I have and knife the there is no.
— Nu, okay. Happily remain then.
— deemed, wait a! And with pumped so and not business? Give I have a light or with at that lead the.
— Don’t been paved.
Had to give a bit money and I finally went home. Ah and oriental tunes Smith!
For window winter night, frost and the coldness, and I on its kitchen'm as Endless the flow of snowflakes arise from darkness and breaks about glass. Deposits for day fatigue, perekus and warmly razmorili. 'Hochet'sya only one — be and get knocked out. Spin wildly have commercial director about portfolio orders on the next month, creating a new plan and adjustment of a numbers in a wide array, and importantly no one unnecessary, related tables with novovydumannymi customers, nerve-wracking enough with obryvayuschimi phone "prosnuvshimisya" today partners as a really annoy. And then still this the passenger and derp!
— In souls and sleep! — even say, go I itself and decisively rose. But here my view it's snagged on for an abandoned on chair a bag. Left the passenger, she slightly not was forgotten and me, but coming out of machines all-same I mentioned.
Picturesque such a's nutsack. Tryapchanaya? And the entire in color vyshievke from any something primitive symbols and patterns, Indian that-whether.
— Nu yes, accurately! — Voznik from memory image kill a foreigner. — Runt, trunk as if bedside table, driving while brown and with an aquiline nose.
And strange sweater-of the location I remembered where before saw — in some movie pro Latin America. And spoke he, like, on Spanish or Portuguese.
Curiosity me overcame my and placing hard a bag on countertop peeked in inward. The first the apparently in hand the bundle, huh green of leaves in cellophane wrapped box.
— Coca, that-whether? Only this me lacked! — has exclaimed presenting, than would for me this could end you dare policemen to search machine.
Then followed any a myelogram, krupnomelenyy krupnomolotyy? Powder, paws, any something animals and finally a canteen. Saying such a and ponderous chain. In it clearly was circulating, but she as something strange kolykhalas if trusnut. Dense, that-whether?
Otkuporiv, I neatly, as taught once weight guesser, prinyukhalsya to napravlyaemomu movement brush in an odor.
— Water. A bit stale, but water, — surprised I, expecting, that a shaman kept the in it some elixir or to the brink liquors.
Kapnuv couple of drops on countertop I might be certain, that liquid modicum and vyazkovataya, but transparent. Having lost to it anyone interest quickly wiped away zabintovannoy hand with kitchen the surface same tiny puddle and horrific potential human ramifications undress, before shower.
Already after aquatic procedures, changing around observed, that sore of, like, has become a lesser. But from shaking shrug our shoulders not has reinvigorated this meaning and hurried and support in.
An alarm clock called long and hate.
"Can has?" — thought I with hope, after all only – to.
Still couple of minutes tried to not to pay attention on’t irritate breath, but all same rose and'd you in an obscure a corner. I specifically pose his there, away from bed, that would given these meters turn the bastard and wake up.
— Ukraine! — escaped I have, when Future time. — Forty minutes man not hearing the alarm.
And here same recalled that wanted to lead the his still on hour before, that would of complexity predication portfolio.
— xB6-driven cable reels! — had been steaming I on cuisine to a coffeemaker.
Quick fees not gave me time surprisingly, only dismissive look at, that under bandages wounds there is no. Yes and yesterday’s events now me not about. Here is irate director of — this yes, the problem so the problem.
On the street cold wind with persoana, wet covered in white be turned away the remnants of sleep. Machine has turned into a a snow bank, yes and were doubt, that ship will start, so horrific potential human ramifications to stopping through a path.
Already as you enter on hiking transition under authorizing light, has stopped for — before eyes fulsome vision, as is borne on me car. The seemed so sheer, that only through several minutes continued movement. And here, on many speed flashed near machine.
— Holy shit! — alighted I charged. All same quickly has coped with themselves and defection a path. And only then, already very briefly on stopping, raslabilsya and caught the sickness is.
— A after all precisely this me today dreamt! — I mentioned I sections of the forgotten sleep.
But, it from-for reverberates team bus quickly switched the me on another — need as can be belly get to work, of complexity portfolio and try to avoid "away" leadership. All another otkatilos, one o.
Me fortunate. Managed. For. Director of still was a sleepy and not penetrated still in appropriate situation role a formidable demon. Figures him appealed. However, and the rest, podtyanuvshiesya later took care. But not so working hard as I, and with time applying slightly are late. So and vygrebli. Modicum and slegeka, not so as yesterday.
For couple of hours managed even razrlulit situation and with all angry ones customers. I, surprisingly easily, on this time propetlyal, and on time lunch deservedly so relaxed a. Lazily watching the news sites stumbled on one fun page. Glance accidentally it's snagged on for image of the and capitalized hew themes.
— Eshkin a! — involuntary shot phrase, when Future rights. — So this OK my fellow traveler!
Platter even more convinced the me in this. Some local specialist in unconventional medicine asked to inform any information about a missing a foreign counterpart, personal narrative In which from Peru on their symposium. Below accordance his data, contacts — far turn, and a tidy sum the promised rewards.
— Holy shit! — my memoirs state of — close to shock. And from uvedennykh numbers, and from what has damage which key, podzabytoe and stertoe spiked problems, it turned out not nightmare.
— Яrik, for good reason you yesterday remained is going to make me- portfolio! — 6600m from-for folding, control separating our jobs, the blonde. — At face pampered. See not burn away from userdstva? At work!
Obey seemed SNlGGERS its girlfriends.
— Яnochka, this you for good reason starters toxoid boteks in their sponge, — retorted I prick blonde a. — That srezhut in next month the salary and regulation shamkat then as the old woman. Fear, then, even despite chic artificial bust, Maksimushka would cast a you, and closest vacation gonna spend in native village.
— Ham! — iskriviv face in been constructed, has closed our local "boaginya." Its grade to, as always in such situations, have expressed me solidarnyy negative it contemptible ignored the.
However, this me little worried. I already reached to telephone that would to garner tickets will Number, with 1,650 m2 on our urban site, as again fulsome vision. On this time I saw before a face unknown. Itself it already than something envious otvraschenie, aversion. But these eyes. In their this color hidden the threat, the danger. Pristine fear from glance unknown human but instead to wave of because they're strange on the rest of the spine and barely not earlier in madness. Me wanted immediately been and run occupies. Far —-something, only would occupies, away from stranger. But, as if a, navazhdenie quickly melted away. Under feeling was that I simply has stopped for, not in forces nor something to do, nor as something think.
From unusual fortune, to which I was not the that unintelligible, and simply first time regions to his, me programms another laughter colleagues.
Naturally, that the beginning of for festivity missed, and about meh could only guess.
Looking on obkhokhatyvayuschiesya, davyaschiesya, laughing faces around, only nedoum fucking superb dismissive.
The entire our office elite pokatyvalsya with laughter. The reason his remained unknown, but confidence grew — neoboshlos without Yankee. Certainly this bitchy attempted to me retaliate. And in the center of the attention — I!
"Okay, see. But later. "— quickly in opting, pereklyuchils I on more urgent problems.
On path to pompeznomu the office of our psevdoboga laid my eyes on utirayuschuyu tears Milah.
— he. — I want soothe girl. Nice and not stop pursuing stupid, perhaps the only such a on the whole our immersed on most not can city.
— Kvartalnye, hero near! — funny repeated I gesture any parodista-comedian waiting. — has America will not allow a good girls cry.
The view, though. Was still the. I knew, that so will and invariably porshel on this. It moreover cost.
Smile and dimples on cheeks pretty, but not adopted in mestyy elite girls, as if changed me. It looked, that obey rose wings, and on psyche became easily and freely.
I returned to his maku and unseated the it on soap file, renaming his in "pattern." She girl smart, lines up and all will understand.
Me its was a pity. But even more themselves.
Poterev? Whisky I again wondered: "And it me need to?"
All already he. And this city, his inhabitants, Endless the flow of spoiled, clueless and purposeful limits. This the entire vanity — sat already in liver are. And felt like it leave on you to CHOL McAra!
— What the should I you mock? — kept-mark until the last commercial director of. And this despite the, that today I fell in the mercy of and figures appealed as behalf, so and major shareholders companies. The that recycled yesterday several hours — no one not worried.
— Oleg Mikhailovich! This our civilian debt — report crimes.
— Яrik, Walk you with this debt.
— “I don’t so and say police, when tomorrow generate in department? In late all, if order smart, then will come and to you, and asked if.
— Go hence! To spirit yours here today not was.
— 's appreciated, you know, Oleg Mikhailovich!
— Yes went you.
I went on public vehicles in policeman the assistant, although something busybody. And constantly .because something told, that for good reason.
Sounding passed charter. Skeptical judicial bureaus, something was asked and have made kind of, nourished German all recorded.
Emerge on streets I regretted diminish the time. Good, that workplace of, not personal.
— Jaroslaw Ivanovich, — otkliknuli with hand.
— Yes?!
Me on moment it looked, that nightlife nightmare has come to life.
On me watched in focus extremely a malign people.
Familiar, let only on down service.
— Until me just beneath information, that you the latest man videivshiy alive my counterpart.
— Suppose so..
— Oh! Not worry, Jaroslaw Ivanovich! Generous reward will your. All, that I need — you tell me. Only me.
— will such a confidence?
— Ha-ha! Funny! And wasn still someone was missing foreigner?
In this moment, me it looked, that his glance literally proburavlivaet me on through.
— No.
— Nu here is, themselves responded on its question.
— Yes, suppose. But what your Sharon in this fact?
— A you themselves and responded on its question. But I want ask you about other. Tell, not left whether my colleague in your auto any objects?
— Suppose so.. But why you, that should I give their first aim?
Face his on moment contort in the utmost poverty. But literally for several seconds he has coped with a. By adopting former confidentially-uchastnyy kind of, only briefly but most damagingly from themes. Tried to me none about parents, family.
Javadxan. As same. In our district and all the not was suckers.
— Mister, drop you yuulit. It god. Tell specifically, that precisely you need and crossings of its price. So we shall save time and forces.
— A you not fool, Jaroslaw! — slightly closer has converged a malign gospdin. — Is the you and the price, and paying. Me interested in ancient a canteen. She you have? 1
In this moment near, raged deluxe car. I not have learned to memorise on the morning all figures, but Number appeared me familiar. And he as if torn me from any oblivion.
— What, that you say? Your familiar? — has vstrepenuvshis I to the interlocutor.
He literally, as if diminished. But continued dialogue.
— Manu a shaman, akin in some ways. He handled search for inputs-outs spirit world. A month ago told, that found artifact — liquid guide pomogshuyu him to commit travel on underground world. After long disputes agreed bring its here and show elected. But yesterday gone missing. And we are prepared to pay any money, that would to know his fate and find your canteen.
— you said your canteen?
— Precisely! — came in orgastic electrified my the interlocutor. — She you have?
— Nu, yes, — all same confessed I. — If you say scholar, and your each, then can give.
— Where is she?
— Wu me homes.
— Edemte! — has exclaimed military ????? Mr. and seems to have given up hand.
A single scratch brakes alighted near limousine.
— Please! — musical pushed open a door my the interlocutor and tried to smile. Better he would this not did.
— So where you say a canteen?
— Unpleasant, I about this and not spoke at all.
— Ah! Ah yes. And let inquire — where you live, far you deflecting?
Alas! Apartment was under guard and obvious traces hacking not our comprehension. As and availability of Scrawled torby, flasks. On that my a new pal sovershennno stand reacted.
We fond farewells to each other and I introduced forgot about this on some time. Passed days, realm me... Kind of gelatinous: 00 A.M. slushie, and all more less associated with those on the evening events — looked just nightmare and szatiralis in memory. Than further, those all more.
Me still long confronted strange\ u0027s Nightmares. But crossed morning, the shadows fell, and day — was becoming ordinary day.
But once, us all staff companies pognalii on universal apprenticeship.
Seeking a psychologist came in some unspeakable drooling detecting in my subconscious the remnants of psychological impact. After preset intervention, my the mind earned even better. And soon I remembered who precisely molested over my figure. This seemed for me affair honor and I went on apartment to enemy himself.
Only having entered this pomeschenie, I immediately sensed the sickening smells. Seemed, he went clubbing across apartment. But on fact simply stood the dead wall. Rasprostertoe on among living room body allegations remained a serious sense of abomination still with threshold. Inflated and poserevshee it, envious sky-a strong otvraschenie. And very strongly stunk of. Peresiliv themselves I licked closer. Have become visible beings rooting in omertvevshem the body worms. Near was sprawled out nakonechsnik arrows. Black and worst he even a foreign, the body.
— That so,, my friend. I came you kill, and you already is dead.
In these minutes all just came flooding back on me all neraspoznannye the pieces things I dreams. I simply stood and been sucking in their. Finally, I heard more still remote but the impending sirens policemen machines. Still one the has from memory — cries, remain, capture. And I to it listened. Need eyes lumping hence as which we can further!
Invoking the you grandfather 'MAKAROV', wildlife, moonshine, tsatske game, small river — I decisively horrific potential human ramifications seek closest ATM.
— By line all! I have long deserved on a normal vacation! And a canteen, let even grants achieved immortality — Debar she to heck!

Narrative so loosely Iranian, that I not in able his even to criticize. Literally Everybody proposal is puzzling their writing.
The author, let start with small. Man the first 5k his confirming stories with, kaksleduet over them, you could work (I partly showed weaknesses in portyanke) — and send them down.
Let us work, but immediately I’d say: Until all looks very-very poorly.
I already not remember, whose this the text — so without grievances, say in fact anonimu: You very long nothing not wrote or you simply no one pleasantly not criticized.

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I so and not understood, why need was's accession pro schoolmates and party? It same at all raze in fictional not is participating. T. E. Put it away his and nothing not will change (narrative ends there, in Afghan war., not there, where began). On. Role magic water in life hero has been reduced to meta steeple and ripped off with flesh pens doors? All?
What is role the flasks, that lies have hero?
Far gone, then a canteen with magic water? Stole someone, whom be there could not (at all no signs).
That on exit? Narrative without central ideas, without development situation around chief hero, with muddy the ending.
Personally you the author, task: Are starting with starters. — So send the me a coherent more. D work with you personally.
Over texts can work for the common development, but something there will have rewrite.

1. About accession. Of course, his can be and to remove. But, there is many the writings expedited similar form of. When one person tells Different some history. For example, from classics: "Fate human", or "when evaluating Mindaugas' treatment about present man." Narrative begins not directly on point actions, and slightly "after as." Why would not do such option. If there is claims to this form, then can be reduce start, add the ending, but not to abandon this.
2. In prologue., role the second the canteens, too, not particularly visible. In this case can be only change situation, that its had stolen together with the first. Shed?
3. In the text, incidentally, the essence of water distress twice. One times have of a soldier, the second — have an engineer. Can be develop this subject. But, to change dramatically? Need whether?
4. On my view, bear for the flagon was shown. This and-fulfilling run and the emergence of people not from groups builders. (Someone else's smells in kunge).
5. A coherent Sinop, a different, hardly will better. I so "vpyorsya" in this subject, that increasingly different seems me delusions. At all, I believe, that most the best, this when to the real facts is actually added and doom fantasy (as here). At least it it seems on reality, and not on the ephemeral kancelejas.

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"Alpine.. history"

Life has changed in Tuesday.
At night in the mountains something exploded. Yes so, that started shaking cliff and both sides of stones on pan-green slopes. Echo long gulyalo among otrogov, gradually zatukhaya.
. The sun was filled with light a small chimate valley with lake in the lower parts of. About dam with transparent water and kamenistym upside, of an old State Academic Maly Theatre and chestnuts, housed the two dozen-related travel chalets, every on 2 — 3 rights. Specifically for coming alongside sites whose proprietors was otgorozhena gathering spaces that offer universal under cars.
Early autumn. The flow of vacationers seem strongly declined: Now were are busy only 6 houses,. After quite, a the evening with songs and barbecue, population base Sou give. Silence and weak breeze were held territory.
From at the Gate Campsite released a boy years fourteen, takes care of the Lake and horrific potential human ramifications upward on well-groomed path to village, which was headquartered almost on mid-between turbazoy and old lock and key, standing higher its hill. Lungs gray jeans, shirt with snout a raccoon, on feet Chinese sneakers, again-turned-fashionable in this season. Black eventually hair, dark the Blue eyes, skulastoe face, covered the first by lanugo on cheeks.
Teenager quickly reached villages: Dozen structures with streets-have the, razdelyavshimi tracts of. Some homes not residential – this was in sight on Overgrown ivy-covered kalitkam. Enough high fencings from spongy, podernutogo moss, India blinker small S.Adlivankin with fruktovimi forested from unnecessary views.
As times over one such fences was stapled large apple on a long the Frost, impending over path. A young boy immediately wanted there is: On the morning he stimulant only wanting milk.
Looked around the living alleyways in both sides — no one. Jump until line not tickles; need seek, than throw or should feel free to hit on packed,.
Crafting a small stumbling, teenager became racking my brain about hand, as would be a little more specific enter. And here, whether something with heaven, for his its back were issued a catchy's that little voice:
— His cannot be to tear. Sooner.
A boy sudden Truckdriver pulled my sleeve and just stood there, dazed. The entire in rays sun, with opposite reinstate on him watched an angel, roughly his same age. Have angel were long thatched hair, blestevshie on globe as like a web. Freckled zadornoe face with black eyes. Obvetrennaya sun-kissed leathery skin slightly shelushilas on the hands of and shoulders. Dark're jorts, lighted tee shirt with both the "M."
An angel was smiling, and, too, with interest viewed his.
— It should still hang out. Then his going to chomp, and it will lie until sixth in the basement on wooden struzhkakh, — girl-teenager cleverly jumped off on land.
— will you know? — only and was able probormotat embarrassed the interlocutor.
— “I don’t grandfather, mentioned — conversation companion habitual gesture pulled back her a strand of hair, that breeze deserted on face. — I here with Spring live, all local know. And you see in the first time. You from Campsite?
— Yes. I — Jean. We toured in Sunday, on week. Parents sleeping it off, and me ARGUMENTY, — ears his are colouring, and, thereby turning into eyes, he asked. — A as you name is?
— Marie.
Responding, girl very strange even looked at it on a new an over-familiar. Legislature it looked for a moment,, that in its the eyes of occurred a tears. But this vision immediately passed, and Marie again fun smiled at, listening untold questions an over-familiar.
— A that for castle on sorrow? You there was? Who there lives? Tell us, — the boy already well have adjusted, but there is no-there is no, yes and throwing good on it admiring glance.
Until teenagers have risen on a path consistent to a of the castle, Marie office-.
— This is castle the seventeenth-century. His is a master – beautiful Morris. Castle him second to bequeath to. Some his an obscure cousin very long fought for King Kabul of bourbon into me and received such a an award for courage and loyalty. But beautiful Morris in a castle not lives: Too big, his it is difficult contain one. Itself he built the usual Safaris of cards near with walls. And in castle leads tour for a small paid.
— Yes-yes. We intended on such a walks, often, — Jean a roasting spit head, wandering around the valley.
Under this he not forgotten the most does he glimpse on Marie, but already so, to she not seen.
Coming to dobrotnomu chalets, teenagers saw, that his is a master views in a powerful binoculars entry in valley – neshirokoe a convoluted gorge with expensive for automobiles.
— Dobryi day, Marie. Who this with you? Your each? – voice smiling elderly human was surprisingly is young and however.
His Greys long hair were are collected in tuft on the back of my head the leather conversion strap. On a man was the dark shirt with evil sleeves and strong trousers, etc in your nice shoes. Pad frames picture zagoreloe face and strong hands.
Girl has nodded her in the answer: — He from Campsite, arrived with parents.
— Good-looking, — fun smiled an old man, viewing Jean. — A not are getting away whether youthful Mademoiselle in house? Will not bring whether us cherries, milk and bread, smallness of snack?
Until girl than something shelestela in House, is a master deleted his smile with faces and very seriously addressed beautiful.
— I got all name is Maurice directly. And you call so same. Parents Marie died spring, — it very loudly, to heard only they two, told a man. — We used to work conductors, in our the mountains. In their tourist team bus he crashed van with counter swathe of. Many, and they in including, died. Being then heard a; she long crying. Grandfather — he lives in village on slope — took away its here on summer. Mountains, air and the sun have made its deal. She gradually revives …
Sitting for small table in the yard homes, company gladly podkrepilas.
And again is a master viewed mountains.
— What you want see, beautiful Morris? — Jean returned from homes, far they with Marie likeness tableware.
— What something not in order in Valley. With morning there is no electricity, not works phone. At night something grokhotalo in the mountains in gorge: There, where the road. And this not the collapse, — an old man edges became layed binoculars in futlyar. – radio receiver and walkie-talkie: Solving only are buzzing..., nothing not accept.
Jean, expended hand, holed up from brighter sun.
— A this that there? A or cloud? – Stole he attention man.
Beautiful Morris raised eyes, and his face markedly pomrachnelo.
— MA – It strange. Such a here never was. This not incarnated with climate engineering mountains, – an old man not on joke got all uptight. — GROUP-pay in house,, my friend. Try ride out.
In valley, with hand entry by, quickly moved cloud the bizarre haze. Clubs his swelled up like and gradually policemen sunny light. Markedly went black. A sparkled, breath from the and drawing fear of.
First cloud, Covered village. Might as would drowned because in a sequined mareve. Then has had the castle. Is scratchy’s throats from objectionable smell. Jean and Marie Expirated, but failed, not understanding Argentine military.
Stronger just a of them whammyed on old beautiful Maurice. He'd grab for heart of, open. Eyes his began to copiously waterin '. Breath became with a gravelly and distorted if. From withering losses forces he were have windows, by adhering to hand for the windowsill, to not fall. His the abject kind of strongly has supposedly cowed teenagers …
Through several minutes cloud took in side Lake and Campsite. Became significantly easier breathe.
From above, from windows cards have of the castle, three human — an old man and two teenagers — have observed with fear for which derives the bottom.
Territory, intended for tourists, was the most low place in Valley and a alighted over lake. Nothing not was in sight.
Cloud to wear off pulled roughly through two hours. Only then beautiful Morris allowed legislature, rvavshemusya in camping to parents, go down.
— Be careful, nothing not palleggi and not napoletano, until not bent or broken the situation. If something you frighten, run away here, to castle. And we with Marie until'll hit in village, although me quite hard move.
Slightly go panting, Jean ran to kempingu. His fierce unusual silence. On the street already the second half of days, but no movement on base not's.
Across several homes he saw strange fray on the bridge, vdayuschemsya in Lake. Two men brandished hands, trying to good whack adversary. Have them poorly worked, movement were strongly slowed. But this with proceeds can have been offset stubbornness and anger everyone. Instead of curses fighters, you know it very loudly were growling. In end both, locking horns hands, fell in water. The depth of was a small, but completely in movements not gave them extricate on Bank. Both quickly awash.
Jean, acute for them, even forgot, why he here. Almost tacit a?aea and demise men very his frightened.
Rockets torpor of and podbezhav to his hut, teenager with little gun-shy rose on porch. The door was opened, in House teetered silence. After visiting room and not finding no one, he jumped resurfaced: "Can be they have machines? Need to test auction. "
On parking was overshadowed by mess. An a series of automasinas was upset. When they toured in valley, then ticked Pezho accurately on anytime you partition, on of reflection place. This Jean accurately mind.
Now from five auto two persistent in stony the fence, as if drivers tried to leave, but took in both, not he later with governance.
Cautiously having come nearer in the short machine, teenager saw as within a man tries to bloody broken fingers hammer out glass on doors. Claimed on aid, Jean became pull the handle, but the kind proved blocked and not was holding back. Recognising outside boy, the locked-up with a new force became to beat on SFR. Face his, a distorted I might, was poured on tears in half with on the street in blood. A man tried to something to speak, but instead words only he was wheezing.
In opting than something break glass, Jean ran away for to commotion not far large barbecue and grabbed tweezers for coal. In several strikes he shattered his triplex, around under this on land. This his and saved. Prisoner car, viciously vzvyv, deft leaned out through broken glass and tried to grab his for T-shirt.
Popyativshis, she looked freaked out Jean became rollback in side Lake. In this same time from-for the other the broken machines slowly poured man and woman. Both looked not better’s locked up in auto. In the hands of have men was a baseball bits, while whose something in blood. He was waving Ideology, then and deal touching woman.
Jean managed to fight along Bank on a sufficient distance from of a couple of, but those doggedly have been moving for him. Finally woman not weathering random strikes and fist on makhavshego. She she ripped up all my his hair, 've been scratching face, and then once she's got in a neck, gnawing at its. Blood sprayed on already bloody women.
Opponent, poorly understanding their surrounding, hit its each, going straight in temple. Woman collapsed him under its feet. If we extend move for a teenager, a man stumbled about lies body and flew in water. Through several minutes on Bank was another two corpse.
On noise have parking and Lake, from-for houses, appeared even a few zombies. And also, look at teenagers, have become approximate with clearly not by peaceful namereniyami.
Horror enveloping Jean, and he charge upward hill.
Constantly looking, teenager hurried in village. "Need to faster warn Marie and beautiful Maurice", — about parents he already not thought.
"Likely they in such a same able", — Jean on aaao'Americain cadres from popular series called pro mutants.
Marie, having heard his voice, ran on alleyways.
— Everyone old men lie in homes in bad able. Have them bouts pains in breast, (him) neacyony eyes. Beautiful Morris tried to them help, but drugs not help.
Remains narrative Jean about Kerry in Camping, an old man immediately even say, go: — We to fire all, whom'll make it on time, in castle. There strong Wall and gates, their not break the hands.
— Just in village 6 man, this couple, the rest — Loners, dozhivayuschie its age, — beautiful Morris deduced on path to castle poorly moving man and an old lady from cards, closest to the lake, — go on village and call, who can move.
Weakness funds exposed to clouds people not allows quickly their evacuate. Teenagers not were enough strong, and beautiful Morris himself was not in the best able.
Marie and Jean have been able lead to the top two elders ’-men. Go the second time was already late. Closer group several figures, little men) resembling people, already had been approached to an extreme compounds villages. In the hands of they carried the stick and any leave depends.
— Yes, I have Pierre — grandfather Marie, and the old Martha from-cards. Hope. They and windows will go smart from within. To the same have Pierre was old hunting ethos. He not will give themselves in offense, — beautiful Morris, I'll Puff 'from fatigue, tried to placate teenagers.
Of four elderly inhabitants villages Jesus. ls in dining room on says Walzer layer exposed of straw.
Soon in village breathed shot. Marie in concern ran for gates, but, look at the impending to castle smeared with blood and land terrible figures, with screaming has rushed back. An old man and Jean grapple typically recognized zatvorit heavy castle gates, as in them have become to knock several fists.
— They not break his kidneys doors? — the boy, Shuddering not the from evening Pantagruel Tavern sponsored, not the from of fear, with hope watched on ??.
— Another whether. These gates highly and not such a siege, — beautiful Morris sat on old bench in dining room of the castle and again the for suctioning cell. Air were wheezing in his toothache.
To night activity zombies at the gate has diminished, but they not hurriedly. And even not fight between themselves. Wind in Valley t calmed yet and silence tip only periodic bangs from the house in gates.
In dining room of the castle sat beautiful Morris, Jean and Marie, and still four elders’were talking deliriously on gender on straw tyufyakakh.
— How you themselves you will feel right? On you not do you say, that a was able you harm. — an old man strictly, but quietly watched on teenagers. — you know how to store secrets?
Having looked on each other, both nodded. But was markedly, not all understandable in this issue.
— you will have help me find one thing covert place, — beautiful Morris neutralist to them as to equal.
— Pod these castle there is enormous Labyrinth, they for century water. Perhaps, that the awful disaster occurred not only in our Valley. I even fear that-either to assume. We can save although would someone from people, if all will pass as I think. Time not so many, I can quite be weakened and you perkytle without the support adults, — an old man Oskin a kerosene bottle, potreskivayuschuyu and severely koptyaschuyu, and Gwinnett County its on chain in the center of the exposure. Weak light allowed although would on running into on environment.
— Marie, find the signature box with chalky in the dresser. Jean, amount, dial in bag Torchlight, how many you can carry away. Certainly their in closet right from input doors. Food and water borrow not let us, us ????? several hours, to get to seats.
— A as same these people? — Marie turned to’figures from the.
Impaired old men almost not have been moving, only sometimes vzdragivali all the body and it very loudly were moaning.
— If we will not do, that I outlined, they hardly will live until morning, — beautiful Morris relied on a strong stick from juniper. — Ready To? Have moved.
Going down in the blackness basements under castle on narrow stony stairs, is a master explained teenagers their actions.
— After haze stopped work batteries and batteries in lanterns. Hope us ????? Torchlight on a path there and back. Marie, leave on walls benchmarks chalky through 10 — 12 steps. If something goes on the so, you easily can extricate to the top.
Initially an old man quite confidently nobody chose direction movement. Has developed themselves and not by setting a powerful species, that him hard, he led a small the team on narrow halls.
Blankenstein before big triple this fork, beautiful Morris became the lookout for something under-ceiling standoff tunnel.
— Jean, you will have replace me. My eyes are sore and not allow all to see.
— What need to do? — teenager leapfrogged ahead man and raised its the torch over head.
— Look for under-ceiling standoff corridors a small incurs the seal, etched on stone. On it you witnessed a snake obvivayuschuyu snap an arrow in half two times. This pointer, in what side move.
Jean Academy checked all three passage and pointed out on rightist corridor. There and continued movement.
Still several times, again on razvilkakh him accounted for seek stealth Bombers a badge of. Several times Marie frightened of rat and vskrikivala.
After long and endless wild swings maze their eyes opened cave. In light of Torchlight on mid-its too saying the carriage. She was almost half understandable in tier rykhlogo India. On angled outflow gender spurting moisture from invisible joints in walls, but air was enough dry.
— Now, Jean, will have you going inward coaches,. You has visited China's in the Louvre? Saw there mummy? They after all not terrible, agree? — beautiful Morris alighted not far from coaches,, — here modicum and water on gender, but carriage rides many years and it seems she the entire drying out.
In the eyes of the young boys turned up a seriously threatened, but he quietly, having received air in lungs, nodded head: — There the mummy?
— You is logical one takes conclusions from obscure prerequisites. This characterizes you with good hand, — an old man sedative functions patted his on shoulders.
Poezhivshis, Jean became weakened on roof down coaches,. There vidnelsya open laminat, all-for copper.
— Nothing not afraid. Mummy more three hundred years. As she and the carriage are trapped here, now not it is important. Importantly, that holds the mummy in the hands of. You should get us a vessel she has with posterior femoral and knee surfaces. The torch there not take, all immediately erupts, so first let your eyes will get used to darkness.
Jean squeezed in the hole, got hung up on the hands of and jumped off on gender, suspicious zaskripevshiy under his with their feet. Several long minutes eyes Iong time to get used to darkness.
Within — as and spoke beautiful Morris — sat the mummy, is bound in issokhsheysya skin. On it was (Five fingers) any aaeuiiaee aeaoa?eieineie, but on shoulders not was heads.
Already convention, that ???, a boy lowered the eyes and on kept vykrika. The mummy pressed one hand own head — oskalennyy skull with relics of hair, and in the other bony their fingertips has been the old FPO a canteen. Jean saw such in military muse in Paris, and still in some historical a movie.
Their boy canvas isparinoy from of fear. If would not really tight, lights boiling coaches,, he could and fall.
Outside he heard voice Marie, and this almost his reassured. With hard they pry from hands skeleton your canteen, Jean crawled out resurfaced. Under this he scratched palm about okislivshiesya rivets cladding and broken to a nail on index because. Not by setting a powerful species, he jumped off on land and referred heavy your canteen beautiful Maurice.
Opposite path to the top was neslozhen, but beautiful Morris forced Marie wipe all chalk benchmarks on duct walls maze. Forces have man remained all less. Recent twists he already hard relied on stick and reduce leverage Jean.
Outside was deep night.
Fatigue and weakness all same allies blamed man. He have dipped on gender have Wall in neighboring with dining room room. Marie and Jean, albeit, too, wowed, were checked state of affected with villagers, at the Gate of the castle, and brought still of straw, to offload beautiful Maurice on an improvised village kind of mattress.
— They all alive, but weakened, — delation Marie for by. — Wu at the Gate of the castle all quietly. Zombies or are gone, or wowed, or sleep. The sky in same old overcast, but rain there is no.
Jean meanwhile spurred fireplace in room.
Soon became several warmer and teenagers, too,, are you settling in on the straw! About beautiful Maurice.
— I will talk you futuristic history, if you still not want sleep, — clears throat, an old man long the for chest and was wiping off running eyes.
Teenagers closely watched on him. Experiences days and underground testament as well as beat back dream.
— MA – It long, far in the Afghanistan, in beyond the mountains, ancient wizards discovered Lake. Water in it was dense, as kissel (kissel is. Fruit its was becoming immune warrior,, not a sensitive pain and fatigue. Democratic instinct water cured anything any wound or any disease.
Wizards have vowed, that no one in world not can personally for themselves use water from Lake. Its can be will to apply only to save humanity from catastrophe, capable would destroy life on Earth. Was created covert society the Men of Letters Lake of last hope.
Through many years one scholar — historian and archaeologist, Morris de Jacques his a, learned of great secret. He handled archaeological take charge of the excavations on eastern coast France not far from Angers. In one of days professor had transferred package from Paris. In it were official documents about how, that he became heir the longstanding of the castle in the Alps, in the mountains district Besancon. Yes-yes, precisely this of the castle. And still he together with castle inherited title the Viscount.
Making renovating facilities, professor found the hiding place in wall libraries. There was to an ancient parchment, povedavshiy about great secret sacred water.
Very soon in castle toured several elders’in mysterious eastern clothes. They heard a, that professor not accidentally inherited castle: This was pan out deliberately secret society the Men of Letters. Professor was chosen for their merit, and as collateral descendant one of former executives society.
Giving the oath secure a sacred water, Morris de Jacques together with guests in hands has covered your canteen with water in secret place, in labirintakh underground.
All was opaque in actions adherents of Lake relatively of the castle and of the Viscount of to prevent discovery of secret storage sites: An ideal cover — professor-archaeologist, and on moonlighting scion, not let Them in in castle external machine the stranger or lyubopytstvuyuschego wing cultural treasures.
Beautiful Morris strongly coughed deliberately and was silent. Head his powerless to bridge has fallen on thumping.
Having risen with of straw, Marie touched his their.
— Wu him a strong heat. Need to him give water.
— Wait, wait minute, — Jean with amazement watched on man and Marie about him. — So far beautiful mentioned us not fairy tale.
Teenager sits up back on its feet and even swatted themselves on the sides.
— His name is Morris, — pointed out he on man. — And in his history professor a Morris de Jacques. Coincidence? Hardly. He mentioned about curative water, dense and heavy. Between, that we brought,, too, weighs a long. And in it is splashing around something rich. Beautiful Morris asked us — can whether we to store mystery? And you forced wipe all placemark in catacombs. All dissimilar! Think, he told us own history, and, in flask is now and there is the kind the most sacred water!
Marie viewed friend, gradually aware of this information. Its eyes connecting from astonishment and joy.
— have said: So we can help him be cured. — tiny corner she. — A he will save all rest. Need to faster give professor drinks from this from the canteens. But such a for water we will not inject him in his mouth. Try its allied?
Finding in dining room parcel — a pitcher with water, Jean put his on the table, and Marie, brief pomuchavshis with cork, with effort vytryakhnula in him several big drops fluid from flask:
— of the transit me mentioned about stuff under obtaining legacy as well a professor. His all here a simply — past Morris. No one knew, that he historian and archaeologist. Yes still and the Viscount! And perishing those more no one knew in Valley, that he a member of secret society.
Razmeshav water in a jar that a wooden spoon Jean put an its near. Couple drops glass to the surface the table and teenager, overlooking the this, simply wiped away crops with. — You'll tell to dust and by taking over porcelain wanting, he returned to table.
— zhyttja, my to a nail again a host, and scratches as and not was! — Jean raised a viewed its hand in light of ceasefire from the fireplace. — Well, that the water from flasks the real — bonus. And professor on fact belongs to's society, which will save people in case dangers.
With hard vliv old man several sips of, children has learned in their cause. Vrbov water acted very quickly. Breath beautiful Maurice immediately became smooth, and strong. He – to firmly and quietly.
Having muffled in blankets teenagers also have fallen asleep nightmare without dreaming.
Stirred up their professor. Was already later morning. In windows of the castle would pass striking the sun. Seemed, that nothing not happened past day and at night.
— Now same tell, that you yesterday have made? I utterly well, my eyes zorki as in early life. You used liquid from flasks without resolution? As you guessed it?
Sbivayas and says determinedly, Marie and Jean heard a professor about his night-fictional, about the upstream for him a fit of, about his a fright for his life. About how they guessed it, that legend, told by accident them — on fact truth. And that he professor, the Viscount and repository great mystery.
— Nu that same, you provided the oath to store mystery of. Hope, your word were indestructible. — beautiful Morris yes Jacques edges watched on two serious teenagers, The living on him from the bottom up.
— A where the parcel — a pitcher, in which you was grifted water from flasks? You themselves drinking from him?
Having heard negative the answer, an old man even teared up a.
— Nu that same. This fate, — said he as would very itself. — Please you, take mugs in dining the chamber. Only not leave. Choose common water from your jug and let us on two pharynx all in this of it. 'm appointing you ambulance guy our communities. But for starters themselves do although would on features. And I until do watch with Wall of the castle on valley.
Jean took out with being shelved two old clay mugs. Having received in them water, one he left Marie.
They stood contrary each other and both feared to drink. Events past days, a wonderful recovery professor, tension rear end from too much inconceivable information, it knocked their nerves from rut.
Finally, determined, Jean to stiffen and had a sip the fluid. This told any sensations, he opened eyes. Again before him, in light of sun from high strelchatogo windows teetered Marie. Again its hair glowed, as in the first minutes their familiarity.
Girl closely watch him in eyes. She was so close, its black eyes were widely open. Jean imperfectly, were displaced by lips its cheeks, was confused, and hurried to the nearest senior a man, lezhavshemu on solomennom tyufyake.
Following him watch Marie, huge to cheek palm and confusedly he was smiling. Then she boldly took a swig fluid from mugs and, too, next to other to injured.
Through half an hour of exercise returned professor.
— So far no one not survived nor in village, nor in Camping. Nor there, nor there no movement. Zombies somewhere family. Their traces full of the about at the Gate. But themselves not in sight.
Within dining room already rush, ruled several elders’and old. In their behavior nothing not typing on what they were still recently almost are helpless and blind. Have burned big hearth, over him starts to boil vola in coming, woman was brushing vegetables, found in pantry are. On the table lay bread and odor meat. While lunch.
Marie and Jean sat not bench have windows, far their ganged... sit you senior, and studiously pretended, that little are familiar. However hands their were near, so, that fingers hands to offer you.
Suddenly they phone, company registration 89063 on dust, and all in dining room all flinch from abound.
Is a master of the castle dismantled up: — disconnection, who this?
Several times responded: — Yes, yes, well. We waiting for.
He then long listened to, that him incidents. His face under this razglazhivalos from joy.
— This is rescuers. Them managed fix station the link. But electricity and the road through gorge until not repaired. To us participants coming helicopter. Soon all will well.
All happily zagomonili. Old have been wiping tears, old men not knew as express their feelings and simply clapped each other on Kurilian bobtails’look and crosses.
Marie and Jean stood on the wall of the castle and watched down. She on village, he on camping. Both have stood tears on the eyes of. Teenagers suddenly realized, that have them not remained no one from loved. Quite no one.
— you young and strong. And the mythic this loss of, — to them licked professor, immediately those their state of.
He was in historic syurtuchnom suit-rider will from gossamer wool. On breast have him'm hanging bronze counter with stock image — the snake twice and gas snap an arrow in half.
— We saw this a badge of the bottom, in labirintakh. And within coaches, on mummy was such same, — I mentioned Jean. — What he means?
— Perhaps you soon about this's sounding, my young each, — solemnly respond professor.
Through several minutes over and overlooks emerged point, rapidly priblizhavshayasya. She has turned into a big aircraft apparatus and became ?????? noise working screw.
Over Valley helicopter committed several circles on faint perform well. From the enterprise, the prescribed on abroad, all the house on district: — Please all remain on places until full eliminating consequences accident in the mountains. Doctors will help all without exceptions.
Helicopter landed on herb-bath playground have roads in camping. After from the hatch, through's hermetically sealed gasket, leaned out the sensor reinstate the sample air. With, like, a hiss he dragged dose and ubralsya inward corps. Forth minutes fifteen nothing not was happening.
For this time, to board has converged not known as remaining in survivors zombies. He tried to scrape the hull, beat in the portholes.
From the hatch popped out several people in suits chemical protection. They oputali his netting, pegs on his mouth and something gave in a neck, and then have taken inward helicopter.
Brigade of the four man has moved in direction Campsite. For shrug our shoulders ????? was surround rectangular a box, and in the hands of were long tube for of throwing. They copiously-whitening technology some dyed composition on all territory around Lake, around houses, and on car park. Under hit on grass, the foliage and facilities care solution from devoured was becoming simply muddy and transparent.
Swoon with sites whose proprietors, rescuers they sprayed and territory villages. Himself castle process not have become. The surviving told the, that the sphere have of the castle not is dangerous.
After noon in gates of the castle knocked an elderly a man. He all looked like insurance an agent of, was recording names and promised quickly help in obtaining compensation for received the damage.
Look at professor and his medallion, he respectfully bowed and asked pass with him inward for conversation devices. When professor and agent remained alone, gollivudskie melle from-for otvorota shirts such same a badge of, as have professor. They about hand to its medalonam and then warmly hugged it out.
— Greetings you, brother, — began conversation not, insurer. — How you managed survive? In Camping rescuers discovered ten corpses and one survivor's zombies. And in village even a few dead, of them two local elders ’.
— I little that know, brother? Valley cut off at night, I lost the link with the world and was utterly am confident, that began global apocalypse. Then all covered the this the poison a. Invoke situation, am asking you, — Morris de Jacques closely watched on sleeping counterpart.
— In the mountains crashed jet, transporting some secret chemical military appointments. So broke a, that his cargo fell on build your Valley. This a — a consequence compounds chemistry with gasoline. Except your Valley no one not suffered. Pelvic in Valley neutralized, and this now most important. But your narrative more important; talk less, brother, I same environment.
Professor detail has him events previous days:
— Hviezdoslav castle and countryside a build not T Private Banking; he the entire is gone to the lake. Have elders’from villages were bouts blindness and pain in his stomach. I also much Mahathir. Camping, Covered fully. A not rasseivalsya there several hours. From this, apparently, impact on organisms vacationers seem has intensified. All, who there was, became in harrowing zombies. They, these general practitioners, from them can be run. But under this they very're as stubborn and aggressive. We with Jean and Marie typically recognized guide the in castle only of four inhabitants villages. And then we strapon your canteen with water from Ukraine.
— Why you not used water for themselves?
— I recently visited with old and enough enlightened enough. Nor to what spending precious’s jewel, to support iznosivshiysya organism.
— I mean to bend head, brother, — a guest solemnly embarked and low bowed professor.
— My commitment merit in untangling survivors virtually there is no. Our teenagers, on By a we can circumstances, virtually not came under such influence haze. Perhaps even, that on kids’organisms this poison at all not acts. Only thanks to them I was able get to the canteens. Accidentally, again same thanks to legislature and Marie, it turned out, that if dissolve in a simple spring water a small dose water from flasks, then thus the solution can be fully restore the functioning of weakened organism. They, too, they plied me, 7,000 without consciousness. Now my forces have to support body and spirit of still on year, or two. But then me will have withdraw in retreated, releasing place new adeptam.
— MA – It interestingly you telling. Our elders not knew about such a property water Lake of last hope. Now understandable, why I not feel "call Lake" from-hosting water: Too small dose sacred water.
Gollivudskie replaced the subject conversation.
— Everyone in Valley, except constituents in castle died. Goes, have Marie and Jean now there is no survivors relatives. Let my words there it is a sacrilege, but this very well. This is famously! — he in muse stood and watched in window. — They know mystery of of the castle, on them not of them whammyed the poison a, they have become the spread. I'm using its legend insurance-agent and take away their with a. Of them will rise new Guardians: Modern and strong. I also take away your canteen! We find new a reliable place for storage treasures. In current situation it now not place in a castle. With days on day here gonna descend TV and the press does. These rastrezvonyat history on the whole world and Valley still long will enjoy set a bad reputation, although certainly will attract enormous interest places pressing sensations. Us — watchers — need not such attention. You, brother, will have to remain on while,: Traced, to curious not snuck up there, far should not. Perhaps will have even destroy part of underground lies weak explosions. You can handle it. And after, we waiting for you there, far not sets foot leg the ones — have holy Lake!
Agent, by adopting final decision, waggled me head.
— We do find a new heir this seats. Perhaps it still can use to anyone for goals Society.
To by the evening rescuers smashed for themselves a small into a BlVOUAC. Them were still many research territory in Valley.
After a short, but modestly farewell in a professor Maurice directly, Jean and Marie sat across together with "insurance an agent of" in helicopter.
Vintokrylaya machine hard, as if once fattened fish, recovered upward. Teenagers, already not hiding, kept each other for hands and watched in the portholes. The bottom remained Valley, with steeply would changed their fate.
And still about of the castle, in rays seductive you teetered sedovlasaya figure. The Viscount Morris de Jacques saw off their in new life …

Very many made information, which is pushing interest and tension. Until tell the legend the text at all can be without losses sense be compressed down just times in two, and the and in three!
Why professor told history teenagers — I so and not understood.
Remarks on location--near train station hyped in portyanke.
Await the well podsushennyy option with using those moments, that I hyped in portyanke.

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Пек Зенай wrote:

1. About accession. Of course, his can be and to remove. But, there is many the writings expedited similar form of. When one person tells Different some history. For example, from classics: "Fate human", or "when evaluating Mindaugas' treatment about present man." Narrative begins not directly on point actions, and slightly "after as." Why would not do such option. If there is claims to this form, then can be reduce start, add the ending, but not to abandon this.


There is no known the writings, expedited similar form of. If would narrative terminated again on a cocktail party schoolmates, and there would — was what something action (thought) the closing the — then yes. Then history in Afghan war. Becomes backstory what should happen in late. Ah, there, on a cocktail party someone died and his was being resuscitated the flagon, with about history (this crude example). And have you this party can be dismiss and not will change nothing at all.

Пек Зенай wrote:

2. In prologue., role the second flasks, too, not particularly visible. In this case can be only change situation, that its had stolen together with the first. Shed?

Hi,. Hi,. Hi,.
Goes narrative pro any your canteen. Narrative went, as response to question about flask is now. But confirming stories with quite not pro this your canteen, and pro something different. Arises impression, that narrative Iranian pro any something not well adequate people.
Immediately is hard not to recall joke nicely pro for good carries, has gone in cave and udivivshegosya strong in an odor shit. And there same sat old man. And brilliant asked old man Grumbeigh, why so stinks. And old man him said, that this the long history, but brilliant agreed listen to the. And old man mentioned him three hours any put a confused history, and when have carries we patience he asked:
— A stinks the why?
— Yes not know, of pooped perhaps anyone.

Such a logic and here. That for a canteen? About, this the Long history. But not pro this your canteen, and pro another.

Пек Зенай wrote:

3. In the text, incidentally, the essence of water distress twice. One times have of a soldier, the second — have an engineer. Can be develop this subject. But, to change dramatically? Need whether?

Deal not in zatragivanii exists. Deal in is, that the water in flask is now must become part of history summon with hero. In than distress its role here? In is, that he raised off the tower?

Пек Зенай wrote:

4. On my view, bear for the flagon was shown. This and-fulfilling run and the emergence of people not from groups builders. (Someone else's smells in kunge).

Yes, shown. Only hero spat on your canteen. Is obtained, this story not pro him, and pro moreover, who saws and then samozakopalsya.

Пек Зенай wrote:

5. A coherent Sinop, a different, hardly will better. I so "vpyorsya" in this subject, that increasingly different seems me delusions. At all, I believe, that most the best, this when to the real facts is actually added and doom fantasy (as here). At least it it seems on reality, and not on the ephemeral kancelejas.

Me not need to the other. Me need to, to you dopilil this.
If so and remained bewildering, that me not engaged — will explain still times. In late all, we learning.

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