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That will remain after me?

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That will remain after me?
An uneven flick of your on crumpled paper,
Poison frenzy, bitterness prowess,
A soft-spoken muuuuito outgoing days.

Endless sink without words —
Point, point, dashes, comma.
Snow, that falling down, here same will melt.
Sequence of telephone calls.

Of pearls hemisphere ?innaeiuo pages,
It's a pale — Nightfall empty transitions.
Intoxicating rustle of freedom
In endless shurshane wheels.

That pick up volumes K I with a in an obscure path?
Memory with rich hand with the coffee with a taint of,
Bezotchetnoe sense of by air,
Smells the ashes, propel thumping.

Beholds raid lights,
Entire ennui outgoing summer,
Tenderness eye your, of Gray color of.
Defeatist closed doors.

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Where same trio of Hebrew: Sentimentality?
Where same hands scene good?
Where same feelings rifmovannykh stanzas?
Hmm. Propisana only Banality of)

Kidding.) But only partly. Written as always of well-, skillfully, but only partly. Because in of it's kinda draughty sense some egoism. Hero (leading character) clearly lacked osmotreniya loop. He (she) not saw in life nothing interesting things for themselves, only melkanie this life past. Sequence of individual hyphenated, cross hardly not in a single hodgepodge of.
Very profoundly sad this. ;)

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Reks wrote:

bidens individual hyphenated, cross hardly not in a single hodgepodge of.

Ahem. Clearly has, indeed, there is such.)) Nu, not managed, alas, air castles see. But gray Banality of with head are receiving.)

Reks wrote:

Because in of it's kinda draughty sense some egoism.

And here is about egoism, you all-??? not quite rights.) I. Honestly say, been mulling quite about other and not egoism tried to communicate. Means — not that's ever gonna happen. A pity.

Last edited by Anita (Nov 27 2015 12:28:02)

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Anita, when man almost not mocks individual hyphenated around themselves, his the world closes the circuit only on it really. And that this, if not echoes egoism?)
But in a whole of course same you as always on perform well. I same simply have been arguing optimistically of semantic overstretched art. :)

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