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Me would advice, as my "synopsis" do better idea, so as know, that some in-than overreacted a tad.
“I don’t would advice, as my" more "do better idea, so as know, that some in-than overreacted a tad.
I would asked — as need to correct? T. E. Than start, and than to end? We same not see (ah, I on extremely least until) just global project.
On its scored I, of course, "overreacted a tad." Its easily seek to adjust underneath that anywhere. Here is only underneath that?
And here is an idea, though. Can everyone specifically to issue time actions, and even terrain of?
Need to as something the entire the current chaos lay down their although would in sequence. And there already look, what details forest hills especially strongly, where that add etc.
Perhaps, makes sense hook up evolution of themselves bottles. For example, under first headline-action soft or weak, further on increasing. Or same, under using (storage results) bottles, have holder makes emerge any flashbacks from someone else's life (previous holder), Slumbers, deja vu. Common motives are needed.
Can be on the principle of Jorma In late each history flasks enter hands next GG. And forth history with description as flasks contributed on his life.
Agree with Loki and Marina. Need to all as something to one denominator lead, can, ask sequence. And then already sinopsisy write.
There is no, friends. I believe, increasingly was said correctly, initially.
1. We we're pooling Sina's physics.
2. Of Areopagus their views.
3. After this is installing dates actions confirming stories with and receive a ", in dependence from unification submitted sinov.
4. Under need authors directives are recommendations as spinning pieces of an to counterbalancing former, or the ending for the subsequent. Type: One narrative ends "And a canteen was's definitely buried on edge of the forests in the years 1917 year" and the next begins "contaminated dug out of okopiv in 1941 on edge of the forests fighter has found your canteen."
For example, under first headline-action soft or weak, further on increasing. Or same, under using (storage results) bottles, have holder makes emerge any flashbacks from someone else's life (previous holder), Slumbers, deja vu. Common motives are needed.
And me sometime, that action "hooch" in flyagakh deal purely individual. Different number of, the situation, perception of. Those and more interesting glance on situation.
Peck Zenay
-compulsive then will. Have us and so disparate characters, different times, different characters. Need to something the general, because freedom where Four Uns head on and without moreover abound. Sinopsisy this have shown — stagger our waves such, that, holistic work of literature this even and not reeks.
3. After this is installing dates actions confirming stories with and receive a ", in dependence from unification submitted sinov.
4. Under need authors directives are recommendations as spinning pieces of an to counterbalancing former, or the ending for the subsequent. Type: One narrative ends "And a canteen was's definitely buried on edge of the forests in the years 1917 year" and the next begins "contaminated dug out of okopiv in 1941 on edge of the forests fighter has found your canteen."
As option. Thought healthy.
Peck Zenay
-compulsive then will. Have us and so disparate characters, different times, different characters.
Twenty-bucks. "Each time, when she is mired to a new the storeowner, has played out a small history, and 20-dollar banknote almost“ see beautiful ” links in his unending odissee small history destitute, children, burglars, teenagers, bridegroom and bride’s. "(Inlets) -- I don’t seems, we, too, in able create something such same. I its option sent. This will be even interestingly "spinning" his to another.
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Let us are start directly here work.
I write require without authorship, write, that not likes — the author modify the and sends in lichku.
Sinopsisy I take just pick one at random.
So, after the prologue action conveyed in our days. Afghanistan. Go fighting against Taliban. In this country Comes military journalist from Russia. During training report his film crew group firmly under shelling of and found to a cave, where they discovered leftovers from the Sir Edwina. He was assassinated. (Assasinami, the patrons of the Lake). Wandering around the the cave, they see, that something metallic glitters in earth, and's dug up two flasks. Suggest, that their had to bury the murdered. So flasks find themselves have journalist.
One a canteen was empty, and in the other were the remnants of some the strange fluid. (Water from Lake). On the evening this days already in camp they sat have a fire, drank, and journalist on dispute drinks the remnants of this water from flasks and, in opting with pyanu, that she special values not represents, Gold Fancies uneaten its in bushes. For it same followed and the second a canteen, which was until this in your bag near. On the morning the canteens finds operator and, soobraziv, that old the canteens by themselves can cost good money, to clean out all their itself. In your canteen with water from Lake remained only several drops fluid. He drives it out their to dealer's showroom and the on mind milk suppliers understands their true price. He knew legend about the lake and his khranitelyakh. He kills the and decides 07.00am — 03.00am daily your canteen with the latest drops reach for the tumble, but so rushing, that on path in desert he of Iraqis in a car crash a. Flasks remain lie on the global the seat next machines.
Journalist becomes immortal, but not knows this. For him someone is beginning to to hunt. His a bit are hurting and sore of quickly through this and here he understands, that with him something not so. He tries to to know, who on him has attacked, but avail. Through a few days his are prone to being kidnapped. The kidnapper look like on Taliban, but not of them. On them decry the Taliban and Alexey tantalizing to his the kidnapper life. The asks, why he not killed his and not escaped, on that journalist replies, that murder of the greatest sin, and he not wants his borrow on its soul. The kidnapper says, that now he his debtor and owes preserve him life. He one of modern guardians Lake. He talks the his to the lake and explains, that it the only chance for him to remain in survivors. If journalist, will have made contact with water Lake, not will periodically its to drink in a certain dose, then he’d die. On road the kidnapper suddenly of Iraqis.
Journalist remains one, and, hikes and on desert, “A on machine off on the antique dealer. When doctor its, then, to their surprise, he discovers the canteens. The canteens again have him. On drawing on flyagakh he understands, as find a road to the lake. Soobraziv what about the roads, he again Gold Fancies uneaten flasks in the sand and is faring to the lake. There he finds other guardians and remains among them.
When foraging among them, he learns mystery of Lake. It source of life on the planet. Journalist understands, that if going from this Valley, then little moreover that without water Lake he can die, about this secret sooner or later learn all, and she too is important for preserving world. So in late he accepts decision to remain among these modern guardians.
And flasks remaining lie in desert pick some passer-by unknown. "
Not likes:
— Rough peg to our time finding skeletons can reduce — these the most the author automatically excludes opportunity development events with flyagami until this moment. And all my wishes about how, that temporary an interval can be any from 19 century until our days — simply umnozheny on zero.
You can describe example milk suppliers not on the remains century ago, but on svezhenkom the corpse. As flasks have returned in myth — show and create not very is difficult, unlike first option.
— I asked not spending many water, to been lacking and other authors — why here list is almost all? Egoism some.
Hero of only slightly-slightly gulps and taste of him not likes.
— There friendship contacts from clan safeguard Lake not can be with ordinary people — otherwise, no mystery they not maintain. The fact, that he his still and to the lake is leading, causes question: As same they such good Lake the have saved for hundreds of years?
Ionou he his "heals a" skazki, but on fact is leading somewhere, to kill in African place.
Everything else — all the more unacceptably: If would keepers of Lake became who —-something, the entire secret long would end.
After how journalist again found flasks — rewrite the ending confirming stories with.
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Major heroes – guy (23 years) and girl (21 year). Both now tourists and seekers rural, special passion whom are any neglected facilities. In normal life – students physical Psychology. In Web find information about one building, in which until recently troops closed NDІ. Rumored to, for one – two years until opisyvaemykh events the building Institute was preserved and maintained, and the entire personnel in short notice evacuated, under this equipment and up documentation for the most part remained not (singsongy): Cuckoo. The, visited NDІ, tell in blogs, that in it were held various experiments, objects which until now are there. Faced from friendship sources, as enter inward, guys represent examine the building.
's popping up all over inward only possible way, which enjoyed The previously, guy and girl inspect the wreckage one room for the other, go in every health laboratory, in which can be enter and try to find what – any weird things. In one of laboratories under gunpoint various scientific appliances heroes discover and solve take itself srіbnu your canteen, which raze not fits in environmental environment. Double guys harvest documents, which, in their view, can be sell.
As only hero Takes your canteen in hands, from every exposure NDІ are doled out shelestyaschie sounds, similar on voices. In lab, in which alternatives a canteen, suddenly becomes markedly is. Guys are beginning feel whose – the presence. Soon they chop fear and in panic they prominently on the exit, taking with a your canteen.
Step out of the building and otbezhav to own machine, heroes stop translate spirit. Craving backtracking, guys a bit feel relaxed while. They open your canteen and discover vyazkuyu liquid, a similar on water, that guy decides try on taste of. Suddenly from moreover seats, through which heroes have left the building, go several people. People in black clothes soon note heroes and prominently to them. Guy and girl in an attempt flee prominently to machine and leave in closest village, urge the in ten kilometers from buildings NDІ.
Choose from persecutors, heroes are treated for help to local dwellers. Guys enter house local doctor, which in rush tell, that their who – the pursues. During conversation three come concluded that goal mysterious persecutors is the found a vessel. To secure themselves, heroes give your canteen a doctor, who volunteered burying its there, where no one can find.
Voices, which hear the main heroes in building NDІ – voices unknowns people, which their pursued. Obscure could not solve, that to do with boys, after all they helped them hear Zov. Mysterious seekers the canteens not heard Zov from – for moreover, that the building was reliably preserved and maintained. Not “After closing properly Passage, heroes gave opportunity I'm calling to leave the building. Doctor, which encounter heroes in village, worked in is really NDІ until his evacuation. He tells children about how, that a hasty conservation buildings could be then, to hide all traces flasks and entire resulting from experimentation information about it.
In the final heroes antistatic in machine and leave their homes of the village, under this on the check-out encounter black car, in which sit their persecutors. Car quietly travels past them. Doctor, on its machine airshed in antithetical to side. For him is beginning to to go after here the very black car.
Soon after, as heroes are returning home, they from its behalf of publish found documents and receive paycheck for contribution in science. Publishing remaining documents, heroes still long will be able to live in plenty, after all data research flasks and its the site were on truth fantastic. And hardly when – the heroes forget about 11 the the L.V..
— Why write precise age heroes? This same more! The building evacuated — equipment, docks and camping on D. Not's been touched and until now nerazgrableno — Ubykh, but an implausibly until fortune pirate. Where The (under than here The at all) know pro experiments?
— What for only possible path? Nonsense full. What still weird things? This same the usual institution! What sights any appliances? I simply for head already'm grasping.
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Just: Students was torn apart by in top birding and among forests found several buildings with relics of the prickers and the sentries thought towers. As should posharili and noticed cracking in wall, where’but masked locker, where lay flasks. And not need to gorodit the rogue a kitchen the incredible assumptions.
— December tastes on taste of liquid from flasks from hurricane evacuation Institute? The author, ah occasion, this same wildness any!
— Dali opportunity I'm calling to leave the building?? I simply not understand, that wanted to say the author. If honestly, me at all idea Dhow not likes, let she and there is in prologue.. But here she brought to absurd.
— 29.01.2010 even more terrible, than all, that written previously.
Pereosmyslit task still times. Read all, that I write to other sinopsisam, penetrated. Sit up and write anew (???? a skeleton can be to leave — pro an unused the building). And the endgame produce a normal.
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Young the manager Jaroslaw is delayed in office until night. On road home pick the bizarre love art. Their pursues some derp. 's receives wound, and the passenger with his attacker disappear in an unknown direction. In parlor scene machines reveals a bag. In it any. Encompassing belonging, a small glass a vial with black circulating and saying a canteen. Giving in curiosity Jaroslaw remaining its and accidentally learns, that content has in having quickly to nurse wounds. And opening a small glass the test tube myself and by sniffing – and at all it turns out in another world. Where his they save from demise local. Lethally wounded warrior, drinking fluid from flasks, immediately Is Recovering. Faced local legend GG the jury try strange water and it turns out homes. Occurred events seem him nightmare or a hallucination, but a canteen is before him.
On next day Jaroslaw goes in police, but there his not perceive seriously.
But soon emerges “ostensibly ” familiar of the gone passenger, tells the whether fairy tale, then whether legend and very interested in the flagon. 's recognized, that she have him and promises give. But homes flasks and rest mysterious hyphenated not reveals a.
The manager transfers all on pampered and believes, that all what happened — was imagining they were executing. But through time begin restive Slumbers, in which inomirets warns about the dangers, kill the from-for vypitoy from flasks fluid, vernuvshey his in neural the world. Not vyderzhivaya gender sleepless nights, MOLDOVA goes to reach for the psychiatrist. The discovers and absolves gipnoblok, double by telling legend about Afghan the flask. Jaroslaw recalled, who precisely his hypnotized. But the search end terrible finding – quickly a decomposing corpse. Folded all in together, he understands, that a canteen with miraculous circulating not only was, but and has wrought on him as beneficial impact, so and attacked the dangers. Obradovavshis, that no one not mentioned history fully, Jaroslaw accepts decision to flee the cities and never more not recall about this flask is now.
— Resolute not likes carryover in another world. Ionou this will be a realistic dream with glimpse on the social, which hero adopts for something revelation above.
In the rest of the proactively Felix Blumenfeld. Provided, that we Limnological on fact Awakening there are some psychic abilities have individual.
MOLDOVA – one of function of sectarian belonging.
Group from six function of sectarian belonging pursues human with the flagon (gami), following “sheepish water. ” Simultaneously a fugitive pursues and the team there are some mercenaries.
One of function of sectarian belonging (MOLDOVA) in jungle (the forest), in pursuit of man with the flagon (flyagami), in excited of hunting is detached from their and fall into the trap, to the his victim of. In a result, have lawyers bashed head. Open craniocerebral-brains’reward trauma. He virtually is dead. Viktor already knows from its experience about how, that make, the cultists with those who had a piece of your “water. ” Ubegayuschemu requires time, to Registan from rest request his function of sectarian belonging, and risks – is pouring in his mouth poverzhennomu enemy a bit miraculous water from flasks and a bit on probituyu area heads. He hopes on the, that the water not can regain immediately entire memory sektantu under his recovery, and the, in fighting with former brethren for their lives, wins time for a fugitive. An amish man. (MOLDOVA) revives, when near already there is no his killers. All his weaponry (cold weapons and onion with small quiver arrowheads) remained under him. He not remembers, whom is, but most skills not lost. 's feels “call water ”, but not understands that this such. Nevertheless, should for the flagon, sometimes sbivayas with path from-for availability of “water ” in his own the body. Periodically have him arise strange vision from his past. Strange cries on strange language and remain behind make his move on has (forests) faster. But couple from groups mercenaries,, too, hunting down for the flagon, is catching up with his. Account for to accept battle with adversary, buoyed by fucking sidekick means. We learnt with paid mercenaries, MOLDOVA forced further to follow sheepish water from flasks. A halt on night – dinner those, that was found have mercenaries. Sooner on the morning continues to path. On road wanders in hunting land local predators. Stumbles on young, but already quite a major, tiger. In force druzhelyubnosti fauna around People of Lake, an amish man. Believes, that predator should not his forbidden to touch any. But in these jungle quite other laws. Account for fight for his life, using all their instincts and skills. Tiger over assassinated. An amish man. Wounded, but may yet to flee. To his abstract cosmic visions adding strange headaches. On his footprint on “sheepish water ” goes the team function of sectarian belonging, from which MOLDOVA previously, holds. Former sektantu manages, remaining unnoticed, hear conversation their persecutors (he understands all, that those say) about “water ” and about how, that one of them gone missing and, likely, had a piece of your“ water ”, violating the a sacred oath. About how, that his for this await horrendous suffering before death. And about the need for take From from his bodies entire a sacred water. Becomes known and name of GG. But, the cultists note presence former colleague. The chase. Group mercenaries, Coming on wake killers two of them (which separate from groups during prochesyvaniya ago, the in search of a fugitive with the flagon), as times is catching up with (or stumbles, so as, the cultists previously has been going not directly on wake MOLDOVA, and bypassing side) the team function of sectarian belonging, that plays on hand GG. Manages well Registan and from those, and from other, which be satisfied with a small cut another unequal battle with each other. 's finally is overcome a fugitive. Tired and knackered in izorvannoy of advisers the its back on MOLDOVA intends to open your canteen and drinks democratic instinct miraculous water. Not on time is happening the episode parent pain have MOLDOVA. Former an amish man. Accidentally comes on cool branch. Viktor hears, can look back, so and not making nor pharynx. Look at the horrific grimace (as him seems, rage) pain on personified by GG, Viktor in fear is beginning to awaken by small steps ago. And's flipping out in ravine, hidden for with a thick friends. Is plunging and gets snagged by on fat, a long prostate problems old long the magnificence tree of. To the. 's comes in themselves after attack parent pain, from nose flowing blood. Cautiously having gone down in ravine, MOLDOVA's searching corpse ,-all, that will help him us survive, and your canteen with miraculous water, about which talked, the cultists. Viktor. — ???????? — to flask is now a long experience, which MOLDOVA nakidyvaet itself on left reduce leverage. But emerges a new the problem. For him go not only, the cultists with paid mercenaries, but and another tiger over. More large. Leapfrogged ahead carve teams people and behaved on wedding killers non-threatening kindred. They, apparently, decides play with victim of, above than retaliate. Grozny the growl his ?????? from afar. Again need to flee, but fatigue prevents. To get rid of it, account for a little sip of miraculous water from flasks. The chase. Ahead ?????? noise waterfall. 's runs out on huge plateau highly over a shallow mountain River. Not far (right or from Left) – the waterfall, noise which and rang. Tiger over already near. 's boomerang its back on population at large and awaits his, prigotovivshis to combat. Tiger over is assaulting, when GG exits on some distance back from the brink. 's ready to this, making before great leap of an animal a deceptive maneuver, but the episode parent pain again all taints. 's falls on rightist side. A flask the your fancy utility belt inertia throws upward. Group function of sectarian belonging already reached plateau. Tiger over, nashpigovyvaemyy arrows function of sectarian belonging in the hop, zatseplyaetsya one of front paws for experience and falls in “. Experience it turns out guaranteeing, vyderzhivaya weight tiger. Dislocation (or fractures) plechevogo replacements leftist hands have GG. Experience sky falls with a sprained hands. A canteen together with tiger departures in the river. 's remains lie on plateau. After last attack GG already remembers, whom was before. And knows, that with him will. Several function of sectarian belonging prisedayut about him, listening about how so happened, that their clone will violated its oath. One of them in this time, having looked with cliff sees, unosimuyu rapid the flood of already in paired tens of meters from corpse tiger down downstream on blikuyuschuyu on the sun srіbnu your canteen. In the middle a short narrative,, the cultists quickly kill former colleague. Two are corpse MOLDOVA and go to previously same the corpse is, a fugitive, naporovshegosya on branch. The rest, following map, which have them with a, represent down downstream on mountain rivers in bypassing for a radical base of a cliff.
— This is not more, and articulating confirming stories with. And me need synopsis on five small the paragraphs of maximum. And better on three.
— “I don’t decisively not likes hero-an amish man., camping on K. For us, the cultists must remain foil, and here — will have too many pro them tell and on their backdrop of history pro water loss.
— “I don’t flatly not like actions near holy Lake. This at all myth! Is unknown, there is whether it. Can, the prologue coined dervish, which totally missed on wine?
Just write a new more.
Water something, to be sure, is alive. Only from-for it mertvenkim easily can do.
In drifting away House in the center of the cities, where lives GG, unmitigated Roomie. His is beginning to special police and people in “plainclothes than in uniform. ” , quiz neighbors have shown, that no one knows real name of neighbor. All with him are familiar with childhood, including days on born. But all his knew under different names. “Don’t could same one person for ninety years to remain thus same. ” Assured that in this apartment “# 90 ” lived utterly different people, but very similar between themselves.“ grandfather-father-son. ”
's mocks oddity “people in plain clothes ”, which than something similar on neighbor.
Then MOLDOVA under windows homes directly in Oximetholone pills with colors finds strange the old your canteen, like wetting which all bathed in surguchom. 's decides to hand your canteen old hat in one thing NDІ, to determine, that in its is.
In dream to GG comes neighbor and warns, that a canteen contains living water and otkuporivat its not worth, without acute on the need, otherwise “they sooner or later you will find. Water something, to be sure is alive. Only from-for it mertvenkim easily can do. ” With these words of Roomie moves away.
's not understands, that happened and bears your canteen in NDІ.
Day he understands, that for him watch “people in plain clothes ” and this not FSB.
On the evening not can contact with his old hat, which conveyed your canteen “for analyses. ”
At night from common an over-familiar learns, that the the L.V. occurred nightmare “revived, furniture,", even computer has come to life. And all of this a creation hell wanted eat people, someone even full-figured gals ate ”, toured “people in plain clothes. ” Them, too, pretty badly shaken up.
Only a canteen together with a vanished.
— is unclear logic hero: He all specimens carring in NDІ? And there flailing away at any opportunity to examine the any can kick out, that he carring with the streets?
— Description hell in Institute — this hell ancient, only a literary.
— Where is the endgame? I see: Hero found your canteen — him had a dream strange — authorized your canteen, like, my Aunt — aunt with the flagon disappeared under mysterious circumstances. And that? This could happen with than anywhere — camping on E. The magic bullets properties the canteens (water) — we not saw. Life hero raze not other trend. Your canteen he kept in the hands of several minutes.
Can Leave a for history surprise, perevorachivayuschiy the endgame.
45-year-old professor social sciences, archaeologist, historian and linguist Morris de Jacques airshed at the request someone`s-ranking rulers from (Shi faces) west France. There detected strange burial of with mumifitsirovannymi grave several man, clearly high origin.
Observation. Crypt, he finds on breast all buried strange a badge of-a tattoo: The snake twice and gas snap an arrow in half. Around images are visible maloponyatnye words on a mixture Latin and-forgotten Arab languages.
With this time begins sequence of deaths in environment professor. The first, under mysterious circumstances, of Iraqis behaviour for-caretaker of found hyphenated — on his’s throats falls wooden a stepladder.
Through a few days professor — A messenger brings another package to the the judgment, that he became heir the longstanding of the castle in French the Alps and inherited title of the Viscount of. Him should in any time soon to accept inheritance and title. So as more on excavations not found nothing interesting things, professor proceeds in Paris, away with a for studying the seal with clothing "the main" mummy. As it turns out, the writing on press roughly holds: "See in vys!". On next day dies an old man-professor, which, I have deciphered the writing. Death this also several strange kind of — the sinking in a bath.
Professor goes to to accept inheritance. This enormous, well sustained, ancient castle, with furniture and vast library, remaining from former Swedish owner. Pelvic are surrounded enough high wall from ancient of stones. Rear of the castle unless in behind chimate is a.
Its only its permanent denizen — old performed and gardener Saeed faced and indoctrinating a new host with legacy of a. Professor offers him stay and to continue their jobs for worthy threat to.
Following several days, deciding fix some being shelved in library of the castle, professor accidentally discovers the hiding place with escaped plan dungeon of the castle, sealed all the same the strange print with middle. It is unclear only, where begins Labyrinth and as in him enter.
In the same evening in castle Comes, ostensibly descendant one of previous owners — Prince one of eastern colonies France. Comes in armored huge servant. To night begins a ghastly begun and professor offers guests air freshner in a castle. Bypassing library a guest sees traces repairs and comes in a strong anger. He is beginning to demand from professor "Everyone give him now same.", as only heir. Professor refuses and requires reassert the rights of succession. In anger a guest proceeds and gives strange host week on reflection....
Over this term occur several attempts to scare, kill or first professor. In late all again of Iraqis man from his environment — Saeed. But before death he opens professor great mystery old of the castle.
Using map and new information professor finds within lies under castle ancient artifact — a double our with with odd liquids silver and golden color of. He discovers its in the hands of another mummy, on its knees which lies its own head. Itself the mummy sits in, not understandable as here trapped, drifting away carriage rides, half buried in sand-lime sediment on gender the caves.
Through week gollivudskie Prince, threatening professor, opens its's involvement to all death, but not opens their sense.
Forcing professor force return example on place, he explodes dungeon of the castle, fully zasypav all passes.
The only, that has not taken Prince — the, that give back example on place, professor several times was swallowing a gold car liquid — elixir life — from flask.
— A one narrative instead Sinopsisa. Why describe in sinopsise? Why all these wild the details there, where facilitated would one proposals? ????, more begins in latest paragraph!! And until this — at all all written not on trial!
— The flask one. Or two, but separately from each other. Water in it — conventional color of, only can slightly too thick. Not need here krasivosti.
— And in than the endgame? That for professor the has changed? This, essentially, only themes, a premise confirming stories with.
Can Leave a more full completion of the confirming stories with with Shores.
Life Alexey Smirnova is changing cardinal way, when to him in hands accidentally is mired saying a canteen, is filled unknown hero circulating. Alexei accidentally learns, that if liquid inflict on wound by, it crunch will last in matter of of seconds; and if liquid whatever the inward, then quite prolonged time regulation feel an extraordinary tide forces. Alexei is beginning to build plans, as this finding will help him incarnate in life a long dream, vzraschennuyu tens of cartoons and the films pro super heroes. However, very soon hero mocks, that on place comfortable with protracted wounds he on the next same day receives two such same, with the most ludicrous way. Deciding organisation with being ballsy with your life, he all same does one big, a good deed — offers "living water" to its friend, activist Sergey, police state from cancer. Sergei suddenly convalescing, new tests not reveal have him no diseases. But through two weeks he is mired in primitive a car accident and, stymied by irreconcilable in machine, takes buried. Hard gradual and tragedy, Alexey is beginning to offer your canteen first aim, telling about chudodeystvennom property its the site. But no one wants to accept this uncanny ability from his hands. Hero is lapsing in despair and not can understand, that serves cause of bonds of. He himself or a canteen? He himself became cause of their renegotiation wounds and tragedy ,-with Sergei, because not deserve such a gift? Or such is the reverse side any miracle? To the same, Alexey mocks, that for him begins bear. Which people in black clothes now pursue his and day, and at night. Faced with them once face to slap, hero miracle avoids death. However, through a few days persecutors all same have been able establish with him a normal contact and heard a about turn of Last Hope. Alexey already was ready bring them their apology and return your canteen, but a small miscalculation in behavior interlocutors of the simple his on thought, that the Guards (as they themselves themselves called) — fictitious. Hero very not want resort to services the canteens, but another exit there is no, he makes democratic instinct living water and lurks from persecutors. He fears go home, fears turn to friends and relatives. Even more he fears to do a new democratic instinct, although knows, that soon on him comes around unfathomable fatigue. When action elixir passes, Alexei falls without forces directly in the midst of the streets. In themselves he comes on next day, understands, that him helped one of passers-by, and gives him your canteen in a badge of gratitude, nothing not telling about its miraculous strength.
— Don’t likes telezhku flasks.
GROUP podpilim this moment more interesting to do?
In the rest of the — proactively unique.
wa world confront each other. Two vessel. One — sin, the other — virtues, from century in age itinerant, on planet and await moreover, who will solve their fate.
And here is, the world in another times has stopped for on the threshold of an inquisition.
Two running mate,, two friend. Gleb and Vanas find artifacts (flasks) and gradually are beginning change. Strange vision, voices, but importantly, penetrating in their consciousness two measure. One thing — Istind mountain peak, with European in vys crystal skyscrapers. Another — dark, saturated misery and pain, a contraction and blood, zhertvennikami and executioners done.
Whether withstand the heroes, will remain whether people? Will be able preserve themselves and friendship, or will become three killer enemies?
After all in the final path competition is inevitable.
And that will with humanity, if heroes will become alive portals in our world?
Auteur, I try to put no one not mebers, but I have was two dire weeks and I not weathered: This not work, and own. Simply such dang-swoosh just pick one at random. If you can wrestle one decisional laziness and other negative quality — up on the other sinopsisy and of food a new. I ready his to consider, if over him will work, not lyapat that —-something.
MOLDOVA: Very a real clever lad, really tiny boy-child up in behalf of YR (Younger Futhark) (21 year) lives in, charitably, a dicey area cities N-ska. Parents there is no. From home fleeing. In school not walking, but to knowledge was delayed and forever Orthodoxy books from stores and libraries, for that became's pet Librarian and not times ran for my life his help, when there is had nothing else to.
Their buoyed guise of and philosophy constantly earns trouble, until deadly, of which had it figured out only thanks to some fateful luck. Not fit in nor in one of camps street gangs, but contrary – became their favorite lasting aromas.
Love levels, churchgoers on the ropes, Pre doing prevents tumbling doing the nasty,, parkurschik.
For its brief life managed knowledge all bones, try all possible drugs, to study every attic cities N-ska. Slums knows, as their five fingers. Usual place (below the – an alternative underground, feng shui freaks, neformalov, punk and ready.
Of the most remote and bold plans on future: Live still although would times from decline of until dawn, everything else — conventions.
Ability to bottles in my history: Distort time and space around iineoaey, preventing a mortal the danger.
Meeting with the flagon: Once, after another race on survival, YR (Younger Futhark) falls on the old come from pigeons attic, which before why something not noticing. There, in s box from-under pizza, lies a strange saying a canteen. Having studied subject, YR (Younger Futhark) mocks runicheskuyu rope of on metal fins, covering glass vial. However, read the writing not in able. In flask is now is any transparent liquid. Decides scooping up subject with a.
Tries to lay your canteen several fence it, but all refuse. And only big one how something looked on him, muttered something pro the, that he already the second, who him such “bubbles ” brings, and to more here prevents addicts not activating every bloody system they.
On the evening, YR (Younger Futhark) goes to meet with its a good friend, boss a small andergraund-club “Love-In. ” There, on approach to personal cabinet to run the government, hears characteristic wheezing like breath. Runs in cabinet, and there his each, tied up, the next room chained to baby, beats in convulsions from overdose cocaine. On glass countertop with a thick layer by layer rassypan white powder, in which the Milan the same runicheskaya rope of, that and on flask is now. YR (Younger Futhark) tries to trigger together, but in this moment in room vbegayut guards. Try to grab guy, but him manages escape, pre mellow discern still detail – on gender have legs a dead friend first accurately such a same a canteen, as and have him.
On footprint. Day YR (Younger Futhark), sitting on tower, tries to unplug that a vessel. Have him nothing not is obtained. Then, he with anger lurches of down, but cost him deflecting glance from pieces, as the familiar severity of again ottyanula pocket. A canteen returned. Then, he suddenly irresistible push obey and flew down, himself being in’s rump, and under this by continuing rooted on themselves with Heights … Soon, consciousness Algiza again became one, and he saw several very flat below mysterious people, slithering upward. Are talking on an unknown language, look in eminently suspicious. Guy immediately understands, that to do its feet. And not is exposing, when, undermine regional stability range, past him suddenly zasvisteli bolts live automatic crossbows.
In late all, YR (Younger Futhark) is a fugitive in House have Librarian •, where natyvaetsya on book “Ancient relics may be ”, and on one of pages finds description of his Fiala (religiously-with, pro time, space and fate), where so same mentioned, that some ingenious glass vial can multiply until two copies of, one of which will have all his miraculous properties, and the other no.
Librarian, overlooking the, that reads YR (Younger Futhark), is beginning to asking both guy. The, surround trust old man, tells all. Through several minutes, the goes on cuisine “still for tea ”, but YR (Younger Futhark) hears, as he communicates with someone on the telephone and says — yes, the boy I have … slideshow, that his again officers betrayed, tries to escape, since getting out through window. But here, podsypannoe in tea is beginning to act. Undermine regional stability range, YR (Younger Futhark) glides for, 's flipping out. Glass vial marks from pocket, again the same history – first breaks glass vial, then YR (Younger Futhark) is changing with him jobs, and in the next moment he already again goes on cornice, but in move from moreover seats, where Spain shortly before this, the enduring board, and guy nips dangerous place without accidents.
Quick, this one, that have him real glass vial, and finally in “junkie ” died from-for disposed Fiala. Decides'll be sittin, until not will understand, that to do. Moves away in its den on one of rafters •.
However, already on the morning his kennel surrounded people one of bosses slums. Their too many, and, in late all, led on by troublemakers gets caught the kid. Order boss – to capture alive and intact, so, him not inflict special harm and glass vial raze themselves not shows. Those same day, his delivered to local authority, which became very interestingly, than this entrance is very sad the boy Stole attention unknowns “, Werewolves, ”, that those paid for his the capture of a very and very greater amount. And so same no, I just wondered, that this for subject, which obscure so strongly to get, and not he'll deign whether YR (Younger Futhark) to hand this gain invaluable thing him – the, which promised the kid is starving shelter, in case what.
YR (Younger Futhark) tries to explain the crux of the flasks, but authority not believes nor one his word and thinks, that somewhere on Algize there is the key from skhorona or time (in parallel around the, from another local gravitas fleeing his man with big sum game, and Algiza suspect precisely in this).
When peace talks not uvenchivayutsya luck, Algiza are beginning to beat, torture. Guy feels, as is getting heavy glass vial, but the situation not is changing – he still in several moves from a real deadly dangers. Then, he is beginning to provoking boss, hoping, that the not would contain hand and will kill his before, as will come “ghouls. ” However, on this time death his to be waiting for not such a quick and painless. + Skyfall somehow a clouded reasons, authority not saw glass vial in pocket guy. Bruised, so nothing and not told, YR (Younger Futhark) waiting for “, Werewolves,. ” Their cars comrades are being withdrawn the captive on streets, where the manages to escape and run, not under heavy machine. For a moment, before, as his relocated a truck, glass vial had a chance from pocket and khrustnul under enormous wheels.
The endgame and loss of flasks: Glass vial views not simply a truck, but entire razvernuvshuyusya the situation as threat life owner and distorts time, give back his to point of reference – to s box from-under pizza, King the attic. YR (Younger Futhark) catches to the box, hoping again find glass vial •, but there empty. A vessel dismissed themselves from fate guy as the greatest threat.
Epilozhik: Through a few days, to qualitatively pogulyav in “junkie ” with friend, having got drunk, vykuriv several packs cigarettes and“ otshlifovav ” all of this deal using rabid dancing, Algizu the entire higher has arisen retold history has become seem just nightmare. Here is only to old man Ask Librarian he more on tea not walking.
— This is narrative, not more confirming stories with.
— The flask simple, but the old.
— The notion very non-ordinary in general context and if on it lay its as should — can be done a serious jump by the quality of just art. But I have until there is no understanding of, that with this do.
As will abandon as there is. On opportunities — the author, dock sturgeon. To hell the details — I need several small the paragraphs of.
Agree with all on their IT than. Wrote his after two sleepless nights, after 3-legion hour oblivion on couch. Fear himself re-read.
Sturgeon'll chunk you to.
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'oc. Its perfected.
Times perishing write quite a new more me is offered, answer about reservations to my history.
Skyfall first point of — yes, agree, too many details wrote. Before sinopsisy not wrote, so so and ‘. Yes, jumped the gun I to send because of — need was more in write
About GG-lawyers, worker memory from-for craniocerebral-storming trauma — simply came in head squaring the idea, that such can happen. But if perishing around "function of sectarian belonging-hired assassins" should be some halo as mystical mystery and about them almost nothing should not be known, then obviously depends in, why novel idea with mournfully on all with their hand not has drawn.
On third point of — actions confirming stories with occur at all not about a mythic holy Lake. Fictional setting, as and it's time for action I at all not dwelt for greater compatibility with stories rest participants. Under the first meeting with tiger even mentioned, that here at all not those seats, where GG lived before and where predators almost nor on whom not decry (in this the fragment always can be contribute some roll levelling and to remove mentioning holy Lake). T. E. My history can be was would putting under the most different temporary periods and under any wood or jungles, in which dwell tigers. Even replacing an tiger on any predator-a mutant can be in what any a local an abnormal zone action easily be transplanted.
PS: If before the end of round in head will come any another interesting history, which be appropriate more my current, then write more and post.
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Frankly, I still poorly understand its task.
Deported the a new option Sinopsisa.
Frankly, I still poorly understand its task.
I here is, too, not know, as the endgame remaking. Seek to adjust his under the beginning of one of narratives mb?
I here is, too, not know, as the endgame remaking. Seek to adjust his under the beginning of one of narratives mb?
On my view structure must be standard. Artifact has vnzeapno from blue. And so same suddenly resigned. So to it is unclear was, where he comes up in next time.
At my view structure must be standard. Artifact has vnzeapno from blue. And so same suddenly resigned. So to it is unclear was, where he comes up in next time.
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I with heavenly perseverance contend, that we need to as can be more small, but synchronous details. To have reader was precise a sense of, that this alone and those same jars,, and that fanatics-Hassansins alone and those same. And that all of this — one thing event, not randomnye the pieces from a fascinating life the band’s glassware.
I with heavenly perseverance contend, that we need to as can be more small, but synchronous details. To have reader was precise a sense of, that this alone and those same jars,, and that fanatics-Hassansins alone and those same. And that all of this — one thing event, not randomnye the pieces from a fascinating life the band’s glassware.
Increasingly correctly. But, for moreover, to create these details, needs have a more insufferable part of sinopov. Then can be will remove "secondary arithmetic." To not broke a halo. Have one a canteen glass, have second aluminum. Have one she is carried in pocket, have second on-strapping it behind. But, on large thirteenth time, except describe MOLDOVA, camping on E. The canteens, I not see other "common denominators." Already were called the higher criteria. Place actions — Earth. Time 19—21 age. Reality — the real. If from whom the arise questions on different criteria demanding coordination — spit it out. Think, masters rastolkuyut. I, for example, not see.
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