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Pristrelka synapses: To combat!

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So, now I will talk, that same we with you let us to do.

The wisest cannot tell from wise, svetleyshie heads of our Forum, Drakon v palto and Brylov, have come up with deal a simple, useful and enough interesting.
All we with you not times ???? participation in pristrelkakh, wrote narratives. And arose the simple, in general something, the idea, that if borders quests do several already, but to leave authors freedom will, forestry narratives can be connect in novel.

Yes, dear comrades,, we jointly write on novel.
Taken the unusual, invariably hairy, but includes for his the emergence of on light enough, to each of us wrote just one chapter — its narrative.

Borders I hyped in topic, where have invited you to participate. Mentor keep in view, that a canteen or flasks will you forthcoming from previous confirming stories with and turned over to in the next (focuses on this in the process composing Aoyama).

When each of you will write more, we their let's estimate and will direct winners. Then figure out, in what sequence their to place and everyone will write recommendations on Climate Aoyama (to novel have us skleilsya). And then let us write narratives and again allocate winners.
On conclusion, we glue narratives and -We'II write maintained logical; and jangling, to gain fully-fledged novel pro two flasks magic water.

For moreover, to better descending in atmosphere, I propose a your attention the prologue (history, with what all began). And announce about start buy out synapses. About order paving of I will inform in this topic later (it decided until, will be whether vykladka of anonymous). But orphans as proactively deport work me in BOS.
houses works not later the evening closest Crash, camping on E. Try an inevitable product until 0 hours 20.10.2015
(For polstranichki text — this huge time, spend his on the original idea with unexpected the ending)
So, the prologue our future books:
… sz5CE/edit

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I am amazed and amused in the best sense: In my the cabinet already lies the first more one of contestants!

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egituman
Himself itself letters write? Quite (?))

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So all same one between? Or can be two?
I was shoe-in on couple of.

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Shurki
One with the very face water, the second with conventional

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Drakon v palto wrote:

Shurki
One with the very face water, the second with conventional

Simple — it is no fun. As former NOT advise: Goryuchka and oxidising. Or as former the artist: Pryavitel and a little full control. Or as lover of drinks: Opyanin and drinking remedy. :canthearyou:

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Sent its more. Something mentor explained in letter.

But, think, then can arise problem: If me will have on this IT than write narrative, then with some details (for example realistically existing / idea of ``freedom of arms) me not manages cope in terms of describe and camping on D. One of my weak seats. :dontknow:

Last edited by Грэй Варн (Oct 17 2015 06:26:55)

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Грэй Варн wrote:

(CAL) I put its more. Something mentor explained in letter.

But, think, then can arise problem: If me will have on this IT than write narrative, then with some details (for example realistically existing / idea of ``freedom of arms) me not manages cope in terms of describe and camping on D. One of my weak seats.
Edited Gray Varn (Today 08 :26: 55)


Am asking on this expense not worry. Book we write on not simply collecting together narratives together, and with mostly proofreading other people and management. Over project in regime governance work such monsters, as the Dragon and Brylov — they not would give us gap. :)
Likely, if will failings in the text participants, will help organize write (or even we offer their options write).

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Грэй Варн wrote:

But, think, then can arise problem: If me will have on this IT than write narrative, then with some details (for example realistically existing / idea of ``freedom of arms) me not manages cope in terms of describe and camping on D. One of my weak seats.

Nothing, have us on Forum there is monsters-ttkhashniki, type 12.7 x 99 mm NATO, always can be ask Council have them

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Propose a offer proposal:
— Perhaps, for options gives the plots introduce in action some kind notes Dr.? This same before was routine. Notebook, notebook, either individual seam. On him will seek flasks, beat mysteries, and anything.
Doctor destined late and double did records about neobychnosti underway.
If would anyone literate in honey. Issues averaged would data notes. To they looked true. If their collusion write, to example, I — will ridiculous and an implausibly) Gamekeeper..., ow.

— And still: Action narratives limited temporary squeezed 1880 — 2015? The distant future (the article on Darth Vader with the flask) discarded? If that — this I simply so asked :tomato:

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Not know have whether imnno more, but sent what emerged. The first time this wrote.

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I have on the hands of already six synapses.

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egituman wrote:

Wu me on the hands of already six synapses.

Look at this on him! Yes have him hands on elbow in sinopsisakh!)

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On the evening'll text.

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egituman wrote:

Wu me on the hands of already six synapses.

Khvastaitesya Ali complains?

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I would, I necessarily would.
(this I for themselves, to then was ashamed, if ??? not would).

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XLegion wrote:

Khvastaitesya Ali complains?

As BSV implying anything.

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So, work forthcoming it is time to let me down the outcome.
I now'll post an all work — you can assess and allocate the first three seats best synapses. Also, am asking call two of the most weak Sinopsisa, which less just suited to our common history.

Am asking come from next criteria:

— more should reflect idea confirming stories with, vnyatnuyu, desirable a fancy (kilowatt-hours rule as interest).
— more should be enough specific, to explain somehow tickles narrative, but not too detailed, vypisyvayuschim minor details.
— idea must be sound, camping on K. As the optimists ideas not will be an increasingly in the groundwork books (and why we all of this ????????? — I already wrote).

From themselves.
Dear comrades, and kamradessy, you very me exhilarating to tight-knit and workers dismissive — no one not jumped off, otpisalis all.
But immediately I’d say, that far not all sinopsisy can be use for our work in constant current form — and here is this already not there is well, camping on K. Suggests, that you do not understand central party line and are acting, as single mother. But in every case I plan write recommendations on Climate Sinopsisa, so that on the final product this should not exert negative impact.

Putting sinopsisy anonymously.
Indicator (authors only after pіdvedennya outcome of second round (when we define winners among authors narratives).
So, our sinopsisy.

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Okay, aspiring “black leading onion digger adapted ” (MOLDOVA) from Kaliningrad is sent in its first approach. Object his excavations — the old a forgotten castle, seen bleak have other diggers. He is beginning to the search in the old the area near and suddenly he falls. Oglyadevshis, sees hall, resembling stage circus artists. Today, with stepping stones on a. In the center of the “arena ” in pose lotus sit three mummy, face to center. In the center of the sitting is worth some pristine a canteen. 's lack your canteen and on seats, though-through the somehow this resurfaced. Through Internet tries to you could get that the about of unintelligible flask is now. In Internet about it nothing there is no.
Description of flasks: High 25 see Kind of from above: Currently symbol of a aspect dominates-Yan, with take in the center of the broad parts of. Foreign side chernyonoe silver with unclear symbols of in two the premier. Internal – perfectly smooth the surface. Joints not in sight. On a narrow side two piece of fastening. On broad – two groove. On senses here: Within is splashing around heavy the oil liquid. Open a vessel impossible.
's suspects, that signs on flask is now, in the first parts of – historically Prussian the runes. He flies Germany with photographs signs, good, a bit knows German. Results — 0. In airport faced old friend, entire life unit studying the Buddhism. The proved very successful at detecting in the second parts of signs rooms :-Buddhist the writing. They together fly in China. In the mountains find’longer inaccessible travelers to. The old monk tells, that must be even the second part of flasks. In the first (the iron and) elixir mounting force human in 10 times and which gives temporary bessrmetie. In the second (a white) – elixir allowing in 10 times increase activity brain (hypnosis, Providence, the link with thin world). Simultaneous use both makes human God with unlimited would exacerbate opportunities. Action estimated ends after enforcement meet the tasks, either after 30 hours (if task not was called into). After trip in China they understand, that watch over them. With enormous hard they drill second half. Under Exchequer special conditions MOLDOVA makes on features from each flasks. And suddenly understands, that cannot be to intervene in move history. Together with those he understands, that humanity not yet doroslo until this elixir. He accepts decision share flasks and burying their on different hand Ural a ridge. And inspires these same thought friends. To not become possible source of leaks information, he encodes consciousness friend so, to at the end mission, the immediately same died. Then, hides its your canteen and is lapsing in endless meditation. In general – died all.

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MOLDOVA – one of function of sectarian belonging.

Group from six function of sectarian belonging pursues human with the flagon (gami), following “sheepish water. ” Simultaneously a fugitive pursues and the team there are some mercenaries.

One of function of sectarian belonging (MOLDOVA) in jungle (the forest), in pursuit of man with the flagon (flyagami), in excited of hunting is detached from their and fall into the trap, to the his victim of. In a result, have lawyers strongly smashed head. Open craniocerebral-brains’reward trauma. He virtually is dead. Viktor already knows from its experience about how, that make, the cultists with those who had a piece of your “water. ” Ubegayuschemu requires time, to Registan from rest request his function of sectarian belonging, and risks – is pouring in his mouth poverzhennomu enemy a bit miraculous water from flasks and a bit on probituyu area heads. He hopes on the, that the water not can regain immediately entire memory sektantu under his recovery, and the, in fighting with former brethren for their lives, wins time for a fugitive. An amish man. (MOLDOVA) revives, when near already there is no his killers. All his weaponry (cold weapons and onion with small quiver arrowheads) remained under him. He not remembers, whom is, but most skills not lost. 's feels “call water ”, but not understands that this such. Nevertheless, should for the flagon, sometimes sbivayas with path from-for availability of “water ” in his own the body. Periodically have him arise strange vision from his past. Strange cries on strange language and remain behind make his move on has (forests) faster. But couple from groups mercenaries,, too, hunting down for the flagon, is catching up with his. Account for to accept battle with adversary, buoyed by fucking sidekick means. We learnt with paid mercenaries, MOLDOVA forced further to follow sheepish water from flasks. A halt on night – dinner those, that was found have mercenaries. Sooner on the morning continues to path. On road wanders in hunting land local predators. Stumbles on young, but already quite a major, tiger. In force druzhelyubnosti fauna around People of Lake, an amish man. Believes, that hypotensive should not his forbidden to touch any. But in these jungle quite other laws. Account for fight for his life, using all their instincts and skills. Tiger over assassinated. An amish man. Wounded, but may yet to flee. To his abstract cosmic visions adding strange headaches. On his footprint on “sheepish water ” goes the team function of sectarian belonging, from which MOLDOVA previously, holds. Former sektantu manages, remaining unnoticed, hear conversation their persecutors (he understands all, that those say) about “water ” and about how, that one of them gone missing and, likely, had a piece of your“ water ”, violating the a sacred oath. About how, that his for this await horrendous suffering before death. And about the need for take From from his bodies entire a sacred water. Becomes known and name of MOLDOVA. But, the cultists note presence former colleague. The chase. Group mercenaries, Coming on wake killers two of them (which separate from groups during prochesyvaniya ago, the in search of a fugitive with the flagon), as times is catching up with (or stumbles, so as, the cultists previously has been going not directly on wake MOLDOVA, and bypassing side) the team function of sectarian belonging, that plays on hand MOLDOVA. Manages well Registan and from those, and from other, which be satisfied with a small cut another unequal battle with each other. 's finally is overcome a fugitive. Tired and knackered in izorvannoy of advisers the its back on MOLDOVA intends to open your canteen and drinks democratic instinct miraculous water. Not on time is happening the episode parent pain have MOLDOVA. Former an amish man. Accidentally comes on cool branch. Viktor hears, can look back, so and not making nor pharynx. Look at dreadful grimace (as him seems, rage) pain on personified by MOLDOVA, Viktor in fear is beginning to awaken by small steps ago. And's flipping out in ravine, hidden for with a thick friends. Is plunging and gets snagged by on fat, a long prostate problems old long the magnificence tree of. To the. 's comes in themselves after attack parent pain, from nose flowing blood. Cautiously having gone down in ravine, MOLDOVA's searching corpse ,-all, that will help him us survive, and your canteen with miraculous water, about which talked, the cultists. Viktor. — ???????? — to flask is now a long experience, which MOLDOVA nakidyvaet itself on left reduce leverage. But emerges a new the problem. For him go not only, the cultists with paid mercenaries, but and another tiger over. More large. Leapfrogged ahead carve teams people and behaved on wedding killers non-threatening kindred. They, apparently, decides play with victim of, above than retaliate. Grozny the growl his ?????? from afar. Again need to flee, but fatigue prevents. To get rid of it, account for a little sip of miraculous water from flasks. The chase. Ahead ?????? noise waterfall. 's runs out on huge plateau highly over a shallow mountain River. Not far (right or from Left) – the waterfall, noise which and rang. Tiger over already near. 's boomerang its back on population at large and awaits his, prigotovivshis to combat. Tiger over is assaulting, when MOLDOVA exits on some distance back from the brink. 's ready to this, making before great leap of an animal a deceptive maneuver, but the episode parent pain again all taints. 's falls on rightist side. Your canteen on your fancy utility belt inertia throws upward. Group function of sectarian belonging already reached plateau. Tiger over, nashpigovyvaemyy arrows function of sectarian belonging in the hop, zatseplyaetsya one of front paws for experience and falls in “. Experience it turns out guaranteeing, vyderzhivaya weight tiger. Dislocation (or fractures) plechevogo replacements leftist hands have MOLDOVA. Experience sky falls with a sprained hands. A canteen together with tiger departures in the river. 's remains lie on plateau. After last attack MOLDOVA already remembers, whom was before. And knows, that with him will. Several function of sectarian belonging prisedayut about him, listening about how so happened, that their clone will violated its oath. One of them in this time, having looked with cliff sees, unosimuyu rapid the flood of already in paired tens of meters from corpse tiger down downstream on blikuyuschuyu on the sun srіbnu your canteen. In the middle a short narrative,, the cultists quickly kill former colleague. Two are corpse MOLDOVA and go to previously same the corpse is, a fugitive, naporovshegosya on branch. The rest, following map, which have them with a, represent down downstream on mountain rivers in bypassing for a radical base of a cliff.

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MA – It going to hear live's the water
Water something, to be sure, is alive. Only from-for it mertvenkim easily can do.

In drifting away House in the center of the cities, where lives MOLDOVA, unmitigated Roomie. His is beginning to special police and people in “plain clothes. ” , quiz neighbors have shown, that no one knows real name of neighbor. All with him are familiar with childhood, including days on born. But all his knew under different names. “Don’t could same one person for ninety years to remain thus same. ” Assured that in this apartment “# 90 ” lived utterly different people, but very similar between themselves.“ grandfather-father-son. ”
's mocks oddity “people in plain clothes ”, which than something similar on neighbor.
Then MOLDOVA under windows homes directly in Oximetholone pills with colors finds strange the old your canteen, like wetting which all bathed in surguchom. 's decides to hand your canteen old hat in one thing NDІ, to determine, that in it contains.
In dream to MOLDOVA comes neighbor and warns, that a canteen contains living water and otkuporivat its not worth, without acute on the need, otherwise “they sooner or later you will find. Water something, to be sure is alive. Only from-for it mertvenkim easily can do. ” With these words of Roomie moves away.
's not understands, that happened and bears your canteen in NDІ.
Day he understands, that for him watch “people in plain clothes ” and this not FSB.
On the evening not can contact with his old hat, which conveyed your canteen “for analyses. ”
At night from common an over-familiar learns, that in NDІ occurred nightmare “revived, the furniture,", even computer has come to life. And all of this a creation hell wanted eat people, someone even full-figured gals ate ”, toured “people in plain clothes. ” Them, too, as a inherited.
Only a canteen together with a vanished.

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the Massachusetts General hero — Alexander St. George, female Federal space agencies (in late confirming stories with is returning on lunar base)
????? heroes — Jason-ri, astronaut European space agencies (by fiddling with chief hero, one has on reserve a ship), Edward Price, astronaut NASA (of Iraqis in scored confirming stories with).
The hero is on board space apparatus, which commit landing to the moon. After successful landing, crew is mired on lunar base and moves into to experiments. Soon comes message about accident cargo ship and losses ties with him. Through some time it turns out, that he crashed in several kilometers from base. To deliver cargo, one of members crew should get on lunokhode until seats collapse and relocate values. Astronaut NASA cautious on this task, but in a result conjunctures for burden is sent the hero, and American remains locked up in a localized amid base.
On the way to community collapse hero face difficulties: 'Moon buggy, within which he is, undergoes a accidents and’in a result of depressurization. Female receives significant lesion, stray with appreciation, but finds in itself forces get to seats collapse in the hope on miracle. Of the last forces lining its feet, hero comes on place catastrophe, but not discovers cargo apparatus. Instead him female sees before a Cosmic apparatus, a similar on those that ran on the dawn reusable space flights. Perched and in him, hero discovers many skrinok with true treasures. But his attention attracts silver a canteen. In the hope, that within it may lie water, hero turns the big guns away lid firmly and with amazement and relish discovers, that a vessel half full. Hero has time do one democratic instinct before, as apparatus, in which he is, push is so it falls on side.
Hero chooses a spacesuit, the aggressiveness the, that not died from of depressurization compartment. Since getting out resurfaced, female discovers, that nearby from him is another Cosmic apparatus. Also nearby boils competition two astronauts, in a result which astronaut ESA receives wound and gap survival suits. Hero catches on aid your partner with your, while the other astronaut finds signifies nothing about nearby your canteen, the scored from ship, and flies up. Hero manages help to Jason, but sore of it turns out serious and blood stop not manages. Suddenly blown apparatus ’, and astronaut rolls from hands a remote control trigger wire.
Hero helps an astronaut got far inward apparatus, in which was recently female. During conversation it turns out, as two astronauts proved here, and also the, that Jason-ri – direct then Dr., of slain ancestor Edward Price's sake of moreover, to regain the two with flyagami with magic circulating. Both astronaut learned about this accidentally, when hero went to for burden.
After long conversation, female leaves astronaut, which, having lost hope, is preparing end life suicide.
Hero is returning on base and the agent about death two members crew.
In the same time Jason, the caller who spotted second your canteen, from which hero made democratic instinct, flies up on one of ships and is sent on Earth.

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some, uh, strange events in life Jaroslav

Winter, don on the evening Jaroslaw, strongly pripozdnivshis, goes to home with work remained streets home city. On one of destiny crossroads, near why take pick the bizarre love art. In rojos and the Peruvian cap South American exterior a man of lending them that him a major bill, is that okay and cooing whole phrase, from which only word Airport understandable Яriku. Not managed machine pump the gas, as from-for closest buildings somehow this vague shadow and blocks path vehicle. An outraged hero, away s cozy bit of the, goes time to talk a minute with young a man in mysterious robes, were and severely over on increasing Afghan. Normal dialogue, as such by, not is obtained. Miraculously saved from serious injuries from sudden attacks foreigner's and how did you easy wound the event a only brush, Jaroslaw tries to enact counterattack, but in a heartbeat, it turns out poverjennym. From the impending death his will save sudden the disappearance of adversary. Decided in themselves, Яrik discovers, that the passenger gone missing in an unknown direction. And an attacker, likely, was chased by NYPD for him. In disturbed able, go back several circles around seats events, hero all same proceeds from there. Homes, by checking salon car, finds held with ancient the flagon, package with herbs and dark bath accessories, and the test tube myself with dark, muddy circulating. On kitchen, carefully Kuzbass trophy, Jaroslaw, giving in curiosity, remaining your canteen. Modicum viscous fluid is mired on countertop. Negligently smakhnuv its wounded hand, hero, suddenly, mocks strange metamorphosis tends, in end which hand it turns out utterly healthy. After some hesitation, animated by healthy impact fluid from flasks on its organism, Яrik remaining the test tube myself and cautiously's been sniffing around us to content. In one moment, as only mordant smells pochuvstvovalsya Yaroslav – his sharply's roofing in a different the world. Here all strange and unusually. But most ghastly – a spooky monster near and his intentions not leave doubt and hope on headshake,. Suddenly arose near man and woman immediately come into battle with monster. Who won battle and rebuffed killer injured warrior requests to drink. Jaroslaw gives him your canteen with unusual circulating. And here happens miracle – warrior goes on discount. Girl was excited talking about something's been asking questions, turning over several-case and languages. In some point Jaroslaw is beginning to its partly understand and learns history this world. Headshake, which depends on breath fluid from his flasks. Together with the so on time podvernuvshimisya putnikami Jaroslaw is sent in the path to legendary tower. On path, of poor many difficulties, he by stealth drinks everything but from mythical flasks and here same it turns out at home, on the kitchen. Gulping thirst Яrik lie down sleep. Next day it turns out too saturated. Only by the afternoon he is freeing itself from the high water workers problems and immediately Googles on organize numerous parameters too. Finding fun information, 's left and hurry home. But there not finds known hyphenated. Traces hacking there is no. And all what happened on the eve already causes doubt and seems simply nightmare. So and not and when they learned, was whether this on fact, Jaroslaw seeks to not all that paperwork to issue and simply forget this episode. Only too distinct and colorful Slumbers continue to his concerned about.

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So, after the prologue action conveyed in our days. Afghanistan. Go fighting against Taliban. In this country Comes military journalist Alexey Rum from Russia. During training report his film crew group firmly under shelling of and found to a cave, where they discovered leftovers from the Sir Edwina. He was assassinated. (Assasinami, the patrons of the Lake). Wandering around the cave, they see, that something metallic glitters in earth, and's dug up two flasks. Suggest, that their had to bury the murdered.
One a canteen was empty, and in the other were the remnants of some the strange fluid. (Water from Lake). On the evening this days already in camp they sat have a fire, drank, and journalist on dispute drinks the remnants of this water from flasks. He stsanovitsya immortal, but not knows this. For him someone is beginning to to hunt. (By Hassansins with Lake) His a bit are hurting and sore of quickly through this and here he understands, that with him something not so. He tries to to know, who on him has attacked, but avail. Through a few days his are prone to being kidnapped. It turns out, that this by the Hashshashin Lake. On them decry the Taliban and Alexey tantalizing to his the kidnapper life. The asks, why he not killed his and not escaped, on that journalist replies, that murder of the greatest sin, and he not wants his borrow on its soul. The kidnapper -Assasin says, that now he his debtor and owes preserve him life. He brings another his to the lake and explains, that the only chance him to remain in survivors route become one of them. If journalist, will have made contact with water Lake, going from Valley, then his the elephants. Alexey agrees. When foraging among them, he learns mystery of Lake. It source of life on the planet. Alexey understands, that if going from this Valley, then about this secret sooner or later learn all, and she too is important for preserving world. So in late Alexey accepts decision to remain among Assosinov.

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End nineteenth century.
45-year-old professor social sciences, archaeologist, historian and linguist Morris de Jacques airshed at the request someone`s-ranking rulers from (Shi faces) west France. There detected strange burial of with mumifitsirovannymi grave several man, clearly high origin.
Observation. Crypt, he finds on breast all buried strange a badge of-a tattoo: The snake twice and gas snap an arrow in half. Around images are visible maloponyatnye words on a mixture Latin and-forgotten Arab languages.
With this time begins sequence of deaths in environment professor. The first, under mysterious circumstances, of Iraqis behaviour for-caretaker of found hyphenated — on his’s throats falls wooden a stepladder.
Through a few days professor — A messenger brings another package with notification, that he became heir the longstanding of the castle in French Alps and inherited title of the Viscount of. Him should in any time soon to accept inheritance and title. So as more on excavations not found nothing interesting things, professor proceeds in Paris, away with a for studying the seal with clothing "the main" mummy. As it turns out, the writing on press roughly holds: "See in vys!". On next day dies an old man-professor, which, I have deciphered the writing. Death this also several strange kind of — the sinking in a bath.
Professor goes to to accept inheritance. This enormous, well sustained, ancient castle, with furniture and vast library, remaining from former Swedish owner. Pelvic are surrounded enough high wall from ancient of stones. Rear of the castle unless in behind chimate is a.
The only his its permanent denizen — the old behaviour for and gardener Saeed faced and indoctrinating a new owner with legacy of a. Professor offers him stay and to continue their jobs for worthy threat to.
Following several days, deciding fix some being shelved in library of the castle, professor accidentally discovers the hiding place with escaped plan dungeon of the castle, sealed all the same the strange print with middle. It is unclear only, where begins Labyrinth and as in him enter.
In the same evening in castle Comes, ostensibly descendant one of previous owners — Prince one of eastern colonies France. Comes in armored huge servant. To night begins a ghastly begun and professor offers guests air freshner in a castle. Bypassing library a guest sees traces repairs and comes in a strong anger. He is beginning to demand from professor "Everyone give him now same.", as only heir. Professor refuses and requires reassert the rights of succession. In anger a guest proceeds and gives strange host week on reflection....
Over this term occur several attempts to scare, kill or first professor. In late all again of Iraqis man from his environment — Saeed. But before death he opens professor great mystery old of the castle.
Using map and new information professor finds within lies under castle ancient artifact — a double our with with odd liquids silver and golden color of. He discovers its in the hands of another mummy, on its knees which lies its own head. Itself the mummy sits in, not understandable as here trapped, drifting away carriage rides, half buried in sand-lime sediment on gender caves.
Through week gollivudskie Prince, threatening professor, opens its's involvement to all death, but not opens their sense.
Forcing professor force return example on place, he explodes dungeon of the castle, fully zasypav all passes.
The only, that has not taken Prince — the, that give back example on place, professor several times was swallowing a gold car liquid — elixir life — from flask.

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Life Alexey Smirnova is changing cardinal way, when to him in hands accidentally is mired saying a canteen, is filled unknown hero circulating. Alexey accidentally learns, that if liquid inflict on wound by, it crunch will last in matter of of seconds; and if liquid whatever the inward, then quite prolonged time regulation feel an extraordinary tide forces. Alexey is beginning to build plans, as this finding will help him incarnate in life a long dream, vzraschennuyu tens of cartoons and the films pro super heroes. However, very soon hero mocks, that on place comfortable with protracted wounds he on the next same day receives two such same, with the most ludicrous way. Deciding organisation with being ballsy with your life, he all same makes one big, a good deed — offers "living water" his friend, activist Sergey, police state from cancer. Sergei suddenly convalescing, new tests not reveal have him no diseases. But through two weeks he is mired in primitive a car accident and, stymied by irreconcilable in machine, takes buried. Hard gradual and tragedy, Alexey is beginning to offer your canteen first aim, telling about chudodeystvennom property its the site. But no one wants to accept this uncanny ability from his hands. Hero is lapsing in despair and not can understand, that serves cause of bonds of. He himself or a canteen? He himself became cause of their renegotiation wounds and tragedy ,-with Sergei, because not deserve such a gift? Or such is the reverse side any miracle? To the same, Alexey mocks, that for him begins bear. Which people in black clothes now pursue his and day, and at night. Faced with them once face to slap, hero miracle avoids death. However, through a few days persecutors all same have been able establish with him a normal contact and heard a about turn of Last Hope. Alexey already was ready bring them their apology and return your canteen, but a small miscalculation in behavior interlocutors of the simple his on thought, that the Guards (as they themselves themselves called) — fictitious. Hero very not want resort to services flasks, but another exit there is no, he makes democratic instinct living water and lurks from persecutors. He fears go home, fears turn to friends and relatives. Even more he fears to do a new democratic instinct, although knows, that soon on him comes around unfathomable fatigue. When action elixir passes, Alexey falls without forces directly in the midst of the streets. In themselves he comes on next day, understands, that him helped one of passers-by, and gives him your canteen in a badge of gratitude, nothing not telling about its miraculous strength.

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Two world confront each other. Two vessel. One — sin, the other — virtues, from century in age itinerant, on planet and await moreover, who will solve their fate.
And here is, the world in another times has stopped for on the threshold of an inquisition.
Two running mate,, two friend. Gleb and Vanas find artifacts (flasks) and gradually are beginning change. Strange vision, voices, but importantly, penetrating in their consciousness two measure. One thing — Istind mountain peak, with European in vys crystal skyscrapers. Another — dark, saturated misery and pain, a contraction and blood, zhertvennikami and executioners done.
Whether withstand the heroes, will remain whether people? Will be able preserve themselves and friendship, or will become three killer enemies?
After all in the final path competition is inevitable.
And that will with humanity, if heroes will become alive portals in our world?

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Comes on
” of Zhongshan in principle, was good guy. And even tried to help others, when not was under high or not sought funds for another doses of. Here is only throw to accept renounce all can kick out raze could not. And here this guy. -addict his obshmonal, but found only any your canteen with but beautiful. The, that this drugs now, he understood immediately, as only the a junkie began him place to prospective parents pro any Lake Hope, detained and miracle-water. In short, was hopped up passenger not on-@—@ time.... -addict promised, that takes your canteen in reliable hands, only would sdykhatsya compulsive illness the meth-head, and decided to seriously sever, looking on his agony.
However, such promises he gave itself on a hundred on day, but here was the other alignment. Any draw in the black began to pursue his. He first thought, that this have him glitches from damaging began, but very perishing real proved all these glitches – several times he slightly not investment tottering, and only somehow miracle ran for my life from unknowns. The will break in past them unnoticed, then with bullet in his gut gets until an over-familiar dealer, where his zashtopayut, but will pick it on full – even your canteen for. And she again will return in his hands. Truth, already with cold corpses dealer and his lackeys. Several times of Zhongshan is in situation, when democratic instinct from flasks can solve all his problems. But he not knows about properties water, and so goes from hardship with large effort and costs. Such adventures quite not for him. Although, they change stuck out. He loses about drugs, his body becomes stronger and are hardier, will is seasoned. His even not learn former mates.
In late all, he understands, that narrative found items them guy was true – when pours them out water from flasks in the river, far dumping corpses their persecutors, and those go from water again ozhivshimi. Then he terminally understands its appointment and decides for Ban to go in Afghanistan on the search moreover the most Lake. Water chooses his in the Guards.

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Our time for standing pat actions: The beginning of 90—’.
's: Very a real clever lad, really tiny the boy named YR (Younger Futhark) (21 year) lives in, charitably, a dicey district cities N-ska. Parents there is no. From home fleeing. In school not walking, but to knowledge was delayed and forever Orthodoxy books from stores and libraries, for that became's pet Librarian and not times ran for my life his help, when there is had nothing else to.
Their buoyed guise of and philosophy constantly earns trouble, until deadly, of which had it figured out only thanks to some fateful luck. Not fit in nor in one of camps street gangs, but contrary – became their favorite lasting aromas.
Love levels, churchgoers on the ropes, Pre doing prevents tumbling doing the nasty,, parkurschik.
For its brief life managed knowledge all bones, try all possible drugs, to study every attic cities N-ska. Slums knows, as their five fingers. Usual place (below the – an alternative underground, feng shui freaks, neformalov, punk and ready.
Of the most remote and bold plans on future: Live still although would times from decline of until dawn, everything else — conventions.
Ability to bottles in my history: Distort time and space around iineoaey, preventing a mortal the danger.
Meeting with the flagon: Once, after another race on survival, YR (Younger Futhark) falls on the old come from pigeons attic, which before why something not noticing. There, in s box from-under pizza, lies a strange saying a canteen. Having studied subject, YR (Younger Futhark) mocks runicheskuyu rope of on metal fins, covering glass vial. However, read the writing not in able. In flask is now is any transparent liquid. Decides scooping up subject with a.
Tries to lay your canteen several fence it, but all refuse. And only one as something strange looked on him, muttered something pro the, that he already the second, who him such “bubbles ” brings, and to more here prevents addicts not activating every bloody system they.
On the evening, YR (Younger Futhark) goes to meet with its a good friend, boss a small andergraund-club “Love-In. ” There, on approach to personal cabinet to run the government, hears characteristic wheezing like breath. Runs in cabinet, and there his each, tied up, the next room chained to baby, beats in convulsions from overdose cocaine. On glass countertop with a thick layer by layer rassypan white powder, in which the Milan the same runicheskaya rope of, that and on flask is now. YR (Younger Futhark) tries to trigger together, but in this moment in room vbegayut guards. Try to grab guy, but him manages escape, pre mellow discern still detail – on gender have legs a dead friend first accurately such a same a canteen, as and have him.
On footprint. Day YR (Younger Futhark), sitting on tower, tries to unplug that a vessel. Have him nothing not is obtained. Then, he with anger lurches subject down, but cost him deflecting glance from pieces, as the familiar severity of again ottyanula pocket. A canteen returned. Then, he suddenly irresistible push obey and flew down, himself being in’s rump, and under this by continuing rooted on themselves with Heights … Soon, consciousness Algiza again became one, and he saw several very flat below mysterious people, slithering upward. Are talking on an unknown language, look in eminently suspicious. Guy immediately understands, that to do its feet. And not is exposing, when, undermine regional stability range, past him suddenly zasvisteli bolts live automatic crossbows.
In late all, YR (Younger Futhark) is a fugitive in House have Librarian •, where natyvaetsya on book “Ancient relics may be ”, and on one of pages finds description of his Fiala (religiously-with, pro time, space and fate), where so same mentioned, that some ingenious glass vial can multiply until two copies of, one of which will have all his miraculous properties, and the other no.
Librarian, overlooking the, that reads YR (Younger Futhark), is beginning to asking both guy. The, surround trust old man, tells all. Through several minutes, the goes on cuisine “still for tea ”, but YR (Younger Futhark) hears, as he communicates with someone on the telephone and says — yes, the boy I have … slideshow, that his again officers betrayed, tries to escape, since getting out through window. But here, podsypannoe in tea thirst is beginning to act. Undermine regional stability range, YR (Younger Futhark) glides for, 's flipping out. Glass vial marks from pocket, again the same history – first breaks glass vial, then YR (Younger Futhark) is changing with him jobs, and in the next moment he already again goes on cornice, but in move from moreover seats, where Spain shortly before this, the enduring board, and guy nips dangerous place without accidents.
Quick, this one, that have him real glass vial, and finally in “junkie ” died from-for disposed Fiala. Decides'll be sittin, until not will understand, that to do. Moves away in its den on one of rafters •.
However, already on the morning his kennel surrounded people one of bosses slums. Their too many, and, in late all, led on by troublemakers gets caught the kid. Order boss – to capture alive and intact, so, him not inflict special harm and glass vial raze themselves not shows. Those same day, his delivered to local authority, which became very interestingly, than this entrance is very sad the boy Stole attention unknowns “, Werewolves, ”, that those paid for his the capture of a very and very greater amount. And so same no, I just wondered, that this for subject, which obscure so heavily wanted get, and not he'll deign whether YR (Younger Futhark) to hand this gain invaluable thing him – the, which promised the kid is starving shelter, in case what.
YR (Younger Futhark) tries to explain the crux of the flasks, but authority not believes nor one his word and thinks, that somewhere on Algize there is the key from skhorona or time (in parallel around the, from another local gravitas fleeing his man with big sum game, and Algiza suspect precisely in this).
When peace talks not uvenchivayutsya luck, Algiza are beginning to beat, torture. Guy feels, as is getting heavy glass vial, but the situation not is changing – he still in several moves from a real deadly dangers. Then, he is beginning to provoking boss, hoping, that the not would contain hand and will kill his before, as will come “ghouls. ” However, on this time death his to be waiting for not such a quick and painless. + Skyfall somehow a clouded reasons, authority not saw glass vial in pocket guy. Bruised, so nothing and not told, YR (Younger Futhark) waiting for “, Werewolves,. ” Their cars comrades are being withdrawn the captive on streets, where the manages to escape and run, not under heavy machine. For a moment, before, as his relocated a truck, glass vial had a chance from pocket and khrustnul under enormous wheels.
The endgame and loss of the canteens: Glass vial views not simply a truck, but entire razvernuvshuyusya the situation as threat life owner and distorts time, give back his to point of reference – to s box from-under pizza, King the attic. YR (Younger Futhark) catches to box, hoping again find glass vial •, but there empty. A vessel dismissed themselves from fate guy as the greatest threat.
Epilozhik: Through a few days, to qualitatively pogulyav in “junkie ” with friend, having got drunk, vykuriv several packs cigarettes and“ otshlifovav ” all of this deal using rabid dancing, Algizu the entire higher has arisen retold history has become seem just nightmare. Here is only to old man Ask Librarian he more on tea not walking.

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Nephew guide`s anticipation (in museum) finds in the storeroom old your canteen and decides its on-muss to a minimum carry away (on time), to go with it in approach. In flask is now something — He's gurgling, but young man decides to wash it and rinse them with your canteen homes. However, for levies and preparation — loses this do.
Understanding of, that water there is no manifests itself only during a hike, when he grabs for your canteen. In opting, that filling your canteen have closest brook, he Takes water have Comrade, and your canteen leaves in alone.
On the evening GG Joe vodka and falls asleep. But among night comes, Navoi leaves future for his mission. He remembers, that in flask is now water and there is no and is sent seek water, camping on K. In night expressly hears stream kind of babbling brook. Having left on large distance from camps, he falls in hole, bumps his head and loses consciousness.
's comes in themselves and on dire pain understands, that relatively itself all, that can be, yes still and ripped hand and side, and expires in blood. In limbus absolves with belt your canteen and makes democratic instinct the strange fluid, after what sharply convalescing and trezveet. Now him frightening get out resurfaced, he not understands, that happened and in full of shock decides to sit this one out in the pit until morning. However, soon alongside a hole emerges an old man with flashlight, and reports MOLDOVA, that as like a hermit and witch doctor, suddenly irresistible impact very powerful forces and came on its call. And that GG now elected the fate of, camping on Have. Have him source of inconceivable might, able on comprehensive that. And also, that now hero destined for become powerful warrior,, defeat together enemies, which on smells forces already are beginning flock, and at all the world never will former.
's neck from obdobi occupies, with hard find its camp, but there all sleep. He a sigh of relief even climbs in tent and falls asleep until morning. And on the morning admonishes friends to return, camping on K. Heard at night the roar of bear.

Returning in city, he the first affair picking its way in museum and closes your canteen in the same box, where its took. T. K. Were far mighty warrior, be not wants, despite the fact, that clearly drunk dialed saw too a nightmare, and a canteen here internally not under affairs. But all-??? on psyche safer, if this pleasant thing will lie on place.

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The author first Sinopsisa Commission on novel))

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1 — description of flasks several confusing and not immediately understandable. Idea global, ????? whether that active in? And’t fit this whether the author in framework volume of confirming stories with

2 — persecuted by an, still not victim. From this and betray him with zhervoy and killer. Behavior tigers the box, and because not quite plausible. But permissible. Itself idea me "not is transparent" — from what faces goes narrative, when MOLDOVA will assassinated.

3 — "in House gone missing."? Smallness of not understandable, where this became known? And so — watch, that the author will write, well would. Detective like brewing.

4 — this full fiction.) But interestingly, far author would lead the his idea.

5 — — Not a bad idea, and well is read

6 — well, but that to do with patriotism, which "napityvayut" our, significant both abroad not "on tourism", and work?

7 — nice like is read, consider, that will in fictional?

8 — the benefits — antipolza. Contrasting the miracle — antichuda. Interestingly could make.

9 — short, but all same can be dream up for a long.

10 — right Glenn Lesick. ”. Ah and that, like would? Visual. But in such a Jaatteenmaki Himalayan already namalo zhargonizmov. And that will in fictional? In my opinion, or to change style applying, or.

11 — the boy. And 21 year. Strange comparison. A real clever lad. Parkurschik. Malopravdopodobno, but permissible. And at all MOLDOVA such the entire super. , too, like nothing, but combined already too. In my opinion

12 — until visible only only the initial idea. In my opinion. And where else?

Not like would no one strongly scold.)
Think, that under finalization, all sinopsisy well workable.
Jerzy correctly writes — not all, yes and I, think, also, realized a common goal and idea. But here perishing, is obtained, who variants, who there is no.
About best — not know, that and say. 4, 5, 6 and 8 interest cause. Again same until not understandable, as they bounded in a common concept of?
3 and 10 me less appealed on general backdrop of. Perishing, Xcuse me.)

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1) what are the Vallejo and tin? What Monad (Greek philosophy) and China? In prologue. Same clear written, where flasks went — Afghanistan, British military in their herojiv flasks polled water from Lake. The author inattentive.
2) How something too messed up, but most importantly neponyatngo — why Viktor suits trap, and then is returning and animates of slain them lawyers (GF?)
3) I so understand, all events in NDІ we will know only with retelling someone? Then not ice — narrative tickles without saspensu.
4) confused, who there astronaft, and who kosmonaft. And as all pianos agree on the one small those respects))
5) The events that hero perceives, as dream — normally. Truth, embarrasses the second a canteen with it is unclear chemi and the parallel reality.
6) How something without intrigue history.
7) And? Narrative hinting on continuation of, but his there is no. Sense in such a a short story?
8) That here already something close in topic, Odobryams.
9) Oh what the second flask is now with terrible water speech, if there was got a full simple spring water? What standoff worlds in separately your rented fictional? There is no, past.
10) Don’t know, about points, became Jerzy, when applied to this Kipling. History a drug addict? Enough whether she interesting? And so history there is, there is growth hero and morality.
11) MA – It strongly grimly with previous short novel (coincidence, but under this much deeper and more interesting (finally someone hasn use water not only for prospects wounds! Karl, this breakthrough!)
12), devour up over, not starting. Eventual scheming dissolves together with unwillingness hero become hero))

So, three best confirming stories withon version of my two finally goals:
11, 8 and 10
Two the most weak:
6 and 7

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1. The author not read the prologue.
2. Hardcore –. Krovishsha. Zhutkiya zhivotnyya — tigrry. Could make is not a bad certificate)
3. Determine fokal — and do soft-dicked detective. Incidentally — the prologue, too, not read.
4. Not such perishing and the distant future. If a file in it revolution — should make.
5. In newspaper investigations I. Theoretically to prologu has attitude through two words — a canteen and of the Germans.
6. And we where learned this history, if journalist remained have Lake? And flasks now where?
7. The author not read the prologue.
8. In newspaper investigations I. All such dobrenkie.
9. The author not read the prologue.
10. Prikolno. There is about than to think.
11. The author not read the prologue.
12. The author not read the prologue.

2, 3, 10 — leading.
The rest lag behind.
Text or: Modicum now the prologue read the.

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Think, if to go digging on forums unit checked the reenactors', can be see more large and qualitative samples. But hardly there will Vallejo, tin, hideous and other runic calligraphy.

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And in those times they were called the flagon? Or as something on Different? Type baklagi or camping on P.? To Stimul-Cash, if question naive. I not learn using in the old depots.

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1. The author the prologue read. But, not let us be confused reason with consequence of. Why flasks bulging with in Afghan war. Not can prove in China? And not't forget: If "kuzbas can –, and Caucasus can sanatorium-", then Afghanistan raze not pulling on world the pantry miracles. And description of flasks, like would mathematical precise. And even. Most synapses can house only in narrative. If me not changes memory initially was that the said pro a joint writing on pieces unfair. Or're just imagining things? Or let us write raskaz in 120 lines for on 10 lines for every?
2. Particularly disassemble not d. "Pravov nemayu." 2 and 11 drags in fix the similar. Can, infer legwork around the circle. Perishing hurting in detail described by increasingly. And this increasingly ??? more.
3. Is worth think. There is far go.
4. Not inspired. Although, if some where to slash and some where add.
5. Too Fantastic. I would have squeezed would a little bit of a to earth.
6. The most piblizhennyy narrative to primary school enrollment rates conditions. And sense present.
7. Too many sovpaeniy, B.S., without sostykovok.
8. Nothing not can say. Written, like, in subject. And there is sense, but develop further, as something not ice.
9. Inteesno, as MOLDOVA found flasks together or divided? As they their divided a? Issues many. In my, theme not quite be revealed.
10. A pity wasted wasting fluid. , it is a pity that went junkie. That, smartso would still not izlechetsya. And at all the (this applies not only to 10, to to most), surveillance "swarthy people" in Russia, ah on senses here, vosprnimaetsya as the ludicrous, that the from travesty.
12. Very close to topic, although there is no and words about Afghanistan. And realistically.
I would put pros 5, 6, 12.

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Drakon v palto wrote:

About Continent’milk suppliers British army-style of the late 19 th century, then sometime, looked they as something so:

Think, if to go digging on forums unit checked the reenactors', can be see more large and qualitative samples. But hardly there will Vallejo, tin, hideous and other runic calligraphy.

Where have Guards Lake "tsivilizovanye" flasks. In the best case — tiles. Increasingly else quickly is... is rotting and is decomposed.

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Пек Зенай wrote:

will have Guards Lake "tsivilizovanye" flasks. In the best case — tiles. Increasingly else quickly is... is rotting and is decomposed.

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So flasks not have guards Lake were. Their with a soldiers brought, judging by prologu.

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Dimish wrote:

So the canteens not have guards Lake were. Their with a soldiers brought, judging by prologu.

Agree, is dull. And nevertheless, if am not mistaken, theme "Afghanistan" and the situation was rekomendatelnoy. Or again not so understood?

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Пек Зенай wrote:

will have Guards Lake "tsivilizovanye" flasks. In the best case — tiles. Increasingly else quickly is... is rotting and is decomposed.

Edited Peck Zenay (Today 22 :50: 44)

You still times have proven its nemunie to read and to see because of. Read the prologue still times, closely — search, whom belonged the canteens. Then search, in how many sinopsisakh you saw precisely "swarthy people" (and still. Go on trades abroad and look, how many their there usual).

theme "Afghanistan" and the situation was rekomendatelnoy. Or again not so understood?

This the prologue books, not rekomendatelnaya article. And writing books the implication was not submitting a, and all world in Kipling.

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Drakon v palto wrote:

you still times have proven its nemunie to read and to see because of. Read the prologue still times, closely — search, whom belonged flasks. Then search, in how many sinopsisakh you saw precisely "swarthy people" (and still. Go on trades abroad and look, how many their there usual).

This the prologue books, not rekomendatelnaya article. And writing books the implication was not submitting a, and all world in Kipling.

Then I have questions:
1. "Yes, dear comrades,, we jointly write on novel." So was said. And forth "Skyfall conclusion, we glue narratives and -We'II write maintained logical; and jangling, to gain fully-fledged novel pro two flasks magic water." I so understood, that will be chosen one more and governs in novel?
2. ". The fluid collection in flyagakh can produce in a miracle influence on human organism (any, until reviving), and can not produce (camping on K. In one flask is now water Mandher, and in the other — simple).". From one Lake? With different properties? Not be ridiculous my. It.
Yes, with "dusky" overdid it. They vsrechayutsya only in 7, 8, 10 (people in the black), 11 (strange people with strange language).

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