Again in print polls is obyavlene just hangs,
Are rallying in range motorcyclists
Again were all huddled on Tiananmen'ai rockers
Woodworkers, shipbuilders, plumbers, their building, brokers
Path had paved and maps rozdali detailed
“Everyone on ’! And evil and good. ”
Small vzreveli in a hundred democratic instinct motors vociferous
Flags designer and, posters, shawls are wearing colorful.
In a hundred the large shrieked the road chernyonaya
Dust sedoyu joint going up in derrick lateritius
Jackets and helmets and chain and the sun on spokes
Us stork give, nor to what here bird
As category: Argonauts, on who won –
Ah, same, forward! Motocross begins!
An inept parody on Gomera
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Ah, this at all not Homer and very far from Greek gekzametra)) Why to do incompetent a skit, if there is all opportunities do good poems?) To this reverse jobs the premier, to to rhyme, you know commanded through shape of, not one under the other, and equalize the premier in size:
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Again in print polls is obyavlene just hangs,
Are rallying in range motorcyclists
Again stacked on Tiananmen'ai rockers
Woodworkers, shipbuilders, plumbers, their building, brokers
And can be so:
Again in print polls is obyavlene just hangs,
Again were all huddled on Tiananmen'ai rockers
Are rallying range motorcyclists are:
In life conventional woodworkers, shipbuilders, plumbers, brokers. — so in size have made Four-line stanza smooth,, and rhymes, raskidav through shape of, more pleasant for reading. Recommend worked out so all stikho and tickles well selves the
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Thank you for ``debriefing! If honestly, not ozhidad, that who the comes back on. After all essentially, this was training purely technical. 'm colonizing site. Ah and moreover, not expected, that from OF THIS can be something squeeze. This was only sketch, the artwork, test. Perhaps, deystvielno, that the can be done.
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Пек Зенай wrote:
Kurtki and helmets and chain and the sun on spokes
Us stork give, nor to what here bird
As category: Argonauts, on who won –
Ah, same, forward! Motocross begins!
First was Association with hills: Jackets, helmets, chain.
But, judging by scored, chain — this have motorcycles? Or as?
And the latter line outside rhythm, need another language.
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Shurki wrote:
Put was Association with hills: Jackets, helmets, chain.
But, judging by scored, chain — this have motorcycles? Or as?
And the latter line outside rhythm, need another language.
Ah, yes. Chain motorcycle. And the ending so and not was able sdela. Ah, yes okay. This myortvorozhdyonyy. Bribery not will.
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