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Great ancient tipping

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Still one the tryout pen

Великая древняя хитрость

Young mage Sebastian edges watched on twilight of. Fire engin-red huge the sun opuskalos for horizon and as if rastvoryalos in ceramic aquatic the vastness of. Rare clouds waved off his on nightlife underworld ·; else the sky, sharp the clean, surroundings shine with delicate paints eventually become addicted: From light-gay man and, than closer to sun, until bardovogo. Quietly shelestelo Sea, heard come remote cries gulls. Behind speaking gromozdilis gray concrete rubble old cities.
Near sat finally-??? quiet a boy. On kind of him was years six-seven, but, frankly, a boy himself not knew, how many him founding. The whether his klonilo in dream, then whether he, so same as and mage, was enamored beauty decline of.
— Tell us me pro ancient people, — asked a boy, not diverting glance from horizon.
Sebastian smiled at.
— Is you bungalows done playing with it, and now like it or listen to the pro history? – smidge surprised he.
— I fear these debris of, — contractionary said kid. – Wu me such a sense of, if someone is witnessing for us made there.
— No, for us no one is witnessing, — smiled at still times Sebastian.
Smile broke a a bit curve, because Sebastian You.
— the Ancients people remained little, — added young mage. – They fear of our presence and not risk on us go. And perishing if anyone for us watched, I would sensed.
‘ This as now, for example ”, — pro themselves graduated Sebastian.
— Tell us about them, — again asked kid.
— Nu, well, — Sebastian turned to the boy, and the already opening his mouth, was ready listen to terrible history pro dangerous, wild, evil ancient people.
— It time, when all land around were implanted people, — quieter far not easy way began narrative young mage. – They were similar on us, but not quite. For example, have them was just two hands, and eyes could look only forward, yes and saw only under light of days. On anybody have them, as and have us grew hair, only were they very tonyusenkimi, thinner, than your toiros …
A boy okrugliv eyes, with her knockers the antenna, and then hair on anybody.
— And yes, — continued, usmekhnuvshis, Sebastian, — they could not they move our.
Kid lifted lightning hair, then zaplel their in several the cornrows.
— Poor them, — concluded he.
— Yes, that perishing to speak, — agreed Sebastian. – So same ancient people were in pile color units were, and feet, as rule, had in leather products …
— A why? – impatiently U.S. kid.
— Because bodies have them have been freezing cold, and its feet have them were weak, immediately were waxed corns, scratched, if barefoot were, — explained Sebastian. – And at all, not interrupt …
— How same they such weak lived? – a boy missed past ear defied not put your elbows on.
— How something have this, — set them off hands Sebastian. – They say that, that they clever were. And I think, this partly truth. Have been able same they so much just ponastroit.
He seems to have given up hand in side debris of. A boy not heard, but young mage sensed, as came observers – they saw, as on them pointed hand.
— And that same with them happened? – all so same impatiently asked kid.
— If you stop hasten and put your elbows on me – 's sounding, — with delannoy austerity brandished finger at Sebastian.
A boy had tucked head, rather for his impatience, and nodded.
— Persons these many was, — continued Sebastian. – Too many. As contained sand on this beach, perhaps. They recognized all land became awash in, what only can be. Some even in the air managed to live – not all seats on earth been lacking. Someone under land burrowed out. Someone at all highly-highly on the sky had fled, recognized on moon. Say, that some until now there live, and someone until now flies on the sky.
A boy the entire took the trouble, was in sight, that he holding back themselves, to again not underbid his mentor.
— Speak, Jim, — has authorized Sebastian.
— A I heard, that husband aunts, awful saw their underworld city, — with the following he on one devouring.
Young mage nodded.
— And such can be. Underground cities far are not rare … Meanwhile more interesting, that they less just have suffered.
— He spoke, that there unimaginable years, heap dust, and still spoke, that saw live an ancient … — hold its breath announced his a boy Jim.
— Yes, some ancient people live until now, — confirmed Sebastian. – But much more their died about two hundred years ago. Ah, I same see, that you again like it or something say.
— Why they died?
— That to this I already and'm a match. People became many, and here is seats, food and things on all lacked. So was always, how can be judged by their history, but than more their became, the less remained for other. And on the early appeared strong people, they were selected have weak place, food and things. Weak, of course, nothing do about it could not, and because lived, as will have, hand to mouth, not in able be healthy and need the world. Instead they constantly thought about how, where would get new seats, things and food. Then on place strong came Smart, and these Smart have become distill have less savvy accounting all, that could steal. Smart lived well, some of them even sought to know the world around better, and there was science. When people became all more, deceptions became all more dodgy. All development science and neural message world was aimed, to getting rich primary the most savvy accounting. In late all, this tipping led to, that povalno all forced to were seek to emphasizing greed and wealth. No one and not have it any other simply to live and enjoy lives, as this do we … Nobody have it any other simply need the world, not while looking for in this material benefit, as this do we … the Ancients people became all more and more. And once, when all available seats were are busy, the entire food divided between the, albeit unfairly, but fully, and all things belonged faint parts of ancient people, then and happened fall. Around the world people suddenly began to kill each other, to steal all, that has the other and transfer. And if before their kept the own Smart rules and existed even special people, who saw, to these rules not tip, then now all pro rules forgot.
— A that for rules?
— Nu, who OK knows? – set them off hands Sebastian. – Ancient people lived long, and perishing their these rules were still before. Such only wizards can you to tell.
— And that was further?
— Read more was disaster. Were such people, which were held scary weapons on case, if they have start distill their seats, food and things. But here is the trouble is, that this weapons frightening's transition damage surrounding world. Was killing nature of, was killing all being … But in a certain hour people, which have was this weapons, despite the danger, all-??? his which has been embraced. And in the answer his same which has been embraced other people, which have was such same weapons, and then and third, and the fourth, and third largest manganese reserves … In books said, that land in that day more shaken from strikes, directed at on it. That overnight's erasing in by many cities and myriad people turned sour, in of the flame this weapons. Underground palaces were are swamped under the weight of prosevshey land, celestial cities collapsed directly in raging the fire … Decision-makers, who You close program this ghastly weapons, likely understood, that little who outlast this day, but tipping, which used to make above all to think only about how, to no one could make an attempt on your seats, food and things, was stronger of reason.
— what are the they silly, — said Jim.
— I think, that ancient people themselves understood, that they are wrong, but nothing could not with a do about it. However if would not their weapons, we would not appeared on light.
— I heard this history, — here same U.S. a boy. – ari Ziemassveku Robert mentioned its. That we appeared from of the flame an ancient weapons.
— Nu, not quite from of the flame, — complained Sebastian. –. Rather much later. Because weapons this was such, that after of the flame in the air, earth and water a long time held poison. Here is how ghastly weapons was of the others ancient people …
Obey shots were clapping. Effort thought young mage stopped hot leave drone strikes and spewed in Sea. Then he the Arab orthodontic wire are tight steel tube, in the hands of savages, people in in ruins.
A boy flinched from of clapping, Justin and became worrying look in grim lot concrete rubble.
— Stones fell, perhaps, — suggested Sebastian, laying the law Student.
A boy believed and again turned to the wane.
— We withdrew from the poisons? – he a bit upset.
— Nu, unfortunately, so and there is, — responded mage. – We all children poisoned land.
— And we, too, must?
— Don’t quite, — kind smiled Sebastian. – We were born in this world, for us – this life. And for ancient people – poison.
The sun fully managing in Sea, leaving vividly-red dM have horizon. Wind strengthened, waves of made noise all louder, and tank now without labor reach at all until mage with boy. Concrete rubble cities to sink in darkness, and people, taivshiesya in them, gradually departed from sea further – crawl back in their refuge.
Been kept night – time for other creatures.
Mage sifting for ancient people, fending off the from them raid predators, rallied on witch. Having seen, that they have reached until shelter whole and intact, Sebastian reinforced their attention on beach.
Jim already frankly slept. Have him Smith severe, full dropping out and games day, after which easily can be fall asleep under noise then waves. He learned today many useful and interesting things: Learned force thought raising stones and manage jets of contained sand … But here is for closer familiarity with ancient people was still sooner. Sebastian believed, that above than a small Jim starts absorb their image life, he should experience joy from surrounding world. Understand, that the world should own order, and that violation of this order fraught with and not benefits no one. Above than face with relics of Great ancient deceptions, and it was necessary craft a immunity against it. Through this passed all new people.
Sebastian sat on cheese sand, looking on temneyuschee the sky, enjoying rumblings dire waves. Jim: You have nestled near, putting head him back on its feet, quietly nozzles, periodically returning from slumber, but again falling asleep. A satisfied, tired and full joyful hopes.
And somewhere in darkness narrow dungeon crammed ancient people. Their dream was the sensitive, long-restive, full regrettable, allows more fatigue, than vacation.
Children covered in world, which chose them their parents …

Last edited by Nairyn (Aug 5 2015 02:49:52)

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Well written. Amusing and cautionary tale child a fairy tale, although and with morning appearing battered it, a naive in than something. But in as a coaching received or, so say, honing pen goes. A slight remark. In really the early, when mage zagoril with child, he ulybnusya. Forth dialogue continues and written, that mage again smiled at. To about itself observed, that if already began to talk to child he was smiling, then're smiling almost all time. If anything, until continues dialogue in one the old. I.e., I want say, that characters former just on paired phrases, and mage managed smile, then to remove his smile (by frowning or what have him expression of faces was initially, and then again ulynutsya. As something not you know, naturally is obtained.

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Ban Andre, under the entire courses respect — let ??? let's go standard route and open the its subject'n in here — trenazhernyy hall
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Pretendent on which "forumnyy critic" — was 38 Morgan

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The author! You even with us?

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Renson
Of course, every day, necessarily you know, just nipping. But I have raze not beginning to be system buttons. So can and not have observed what.

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Renson
You know, just nipping. But over time efforts. Uchtennoe have read, there is couple moments, with whom ready argue, and else cobble.

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­ Nairyn
Is happy be useful. The author ultimately always rights. Luck.

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