Agree with all Him until me. I even a little bit of a correct.
Ahem. Sometimes for the surfacing as rhythm, so and sense with unique style quite not necessarily to point fingers, who or that produces action. This to smaller specify such as. After all proposition or cliche higher already on this mentioned, and so clear on sense, on that the author points out attention. Here is how example:
Sometimes only stars understand,
About than're sad, about than of being,
They so look, as if know,
When, pro that, about than do you miss it.
And here is so can be write without "They":
Sometimes only stars understand,
About than're sad, about than of being,
And look from above, as if know,
About whom with ulybkoyu do you miss it.
To everything, I changed and last string, and the stuffy a stylistic a repeat of in it sounded from the second the premier: "About fix, about fix, about fix."
Ah, and the last. Said already was not times pro too simple glagolnuyu rifmovku the lines. Too cliche she, because the end of the verbs in advance predictable and even with skloneniyakh rarely change. Best seek rhyme with glagolami other parts of speech. 
Last edited by Reks (May 5 2015 13:46:31)
