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And that happened with rats?

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At the request Pop Pop of our 'MAKAROV', with the highest His soizvoleniya TAB here its narrative with PYSa. :writing:

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About its pages I from its friend learned. Ah as friend. Met-had to-farmhands have run away. An over-familiar, in general. There is, he says, in lab, X. This. As his. Here is numbers not remember, modicum kill! Ah yes not it is important. There is, he says, in lab one the artifact P.Gudauskas. Overpriced eye! Himself, he says, there not started climbing, of normalcy too it in Mythbuntu control center — "get, — he says, — not appears possible!". About as! Ah, think, need to wedding?. Couple of days on training — podmytsya-shopping to do, lubricate-palms get greased.. Himself, in short, you know. Went, in general. Ah, as to get here, man — it is no fun, and gone down I in up the lab this under evening already. Until looked around, tudem-syudem, decided to I, means, nochku something to sleep. To, means, next morning has! With svezhemi forces, means. In general, found room we can go to with panelkami unclear — light bulbs, warning, implements something general. Ah, in Labach oftentimes the such meets, himself you know. But most importantly — rats antics. And times rats antics, means relax can be. Nor you of normalcy nearby, nor mutants, nor any shit in the air. Yes that I you sentiment — himself all you know! In short, dismantled I totalitarian state, set them off campfire a small, tushenochku took out, gulls put foaming at the mouth now. Sit baldyu. Suddenly bang! The guy some in doors friendly co! Holy shit, think, where-OK you such turned on? How many years in be the first, and meet human in lab — not the that himself not met, not heard even about this never! Gets have him some ancient-dopotoptnyy. Ah, here something, think, surprise there is no — Sidorovich sometimes such shit indeed pushing spa treatments on! In short, invited his, nudge say, to table. Sat across, pozdorovkalis. Ah, as usual, returned strapon, sit they. And here, nor with, nor with stingy, he me asks:
"And that happened with rats?."
And that with them happened? Looked around on sides — ??? ?? ? ? one in street corner tick along fine.
"All normally. Not passes! "— said.
Shmyaknuli on of half shots for and here he again:
"And that happened with rats?"
Yes you actually affecting! Roof that-whether has gone?
"??? ?? ? ? one! ??? ?? ? ? another! "— flipping him finger at.
And here he on me as Pounced and let nip! Again that with rats happened asks. Ah all, think, accurately roof has gone. And to escape something not can — its robust, bastard, the apparently! And he me even stronger’s throats compresses:
"Think about it to qualitatively."
"Let go, — said, — idiot! Me breathe it is difficult! "
And he me:
"And why you breathe it is difficult?"
Ah not fool, and?
"Because you me’s throats're flexing, brute!"
And he:
"The wrong the answer. Still times think about it. Why you it is difficult breathe? "
And even stronger’s throats me compresses. And I have already and in the eyes of getting dark the beginning.
"Because air lacks! Let me go, scuzzball! "
"Correctly. And specifically that lacks? "
Not, ah in annoying! Okay would still simply so mad gone, so and will kill me after all now.
"Oxygen!" — rusty, you know.
"Is true. And oxygen this that? "
Ah full prozhivu!
"Gas!"
"Gas! Accurately! Their own this. So that-same all-??? happened with rats? "
And here until me has peaked! The something I look rats like and are moving, dyshut, but on place already minutes ten all lie. And only I this thought, as khlop — there Outlook! And fingers evonnye on toothache if-would so and remained, still’s throats shrinks. In general, some as on themselves totalitarian state balled and on the exit. On the street already are you out of breath, but would still then days two I was puking, get his knows, that there for gas was. And Outlook moreover I then saw. Ah as saw. Remember, under Union still be loved prevents "chessboard poshani" posibility to set? Here is there his a picture of an and saw. Uffda-and-and. Ah, fill it up, that-whether!

Text or This is I looked yesterday krovi "nation z" and honestly stole made there the plot. :smoke:
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Last edited by Виталька Алибабаевич (Dec 8 2014 22:30:30)

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Is so awesome.) :cool:

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's appreciated, you know. 8—)

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And disassemble something let us, said, there is no) Eth I, said, pro criticism)

But, answer for ten seconds not well cared for by, and loath speak ill positively)
Shape a little bit of a, ahem, not narrative, judging by store and location finding, and thumbnail — as outsiders and misfits, need to would.
To example, thought hero, ah or transferred in conversation words, yes, need to in quotes take. But under this internationalist as the usual monologue, type:
"Why same me Blimey wedding?? — said I him. — Has that for an artifact zillion-dollar."
Reality for example, their, so say, slovesami.)

And at all, interesting zarisovochka withdrew. A douchey rasskazets, painfully prostetskogo little chap ? s-stalkeryugi. Respekt! Mass of positive of emotions received. Always would so.)

Ah and question on zasypochku: So that same happened with rats? :D

Last edited by Reks (Dec 7 2014 00:24:54)

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Not, I so disagree!
This narrative deserve enter in provides narratives about prostetskom muzhichke.
'm wait provides.

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Brylov, and far fling let us such "work"? Ca, theme need a separate? Or until in outsiders and misfits)
There is one rasskazets. Such same a short. I on PYSe took refuge as something in one subject, and there the author uploaded start, as would especially for future creation, perhaps soavtorskoe. Not 5, in fix was his vision, because for credit of he little proposed. Ah, I and quite finished writing that this humorous rasskazets. Think, not will big fulfilling prophecy, if I'm using his as fully its? As thinking? Schaz'm gonna run and for original, 'll post an in outsiders and misfits, and there let's see, oga?) That:

Reksovy that (for Cycle "Prostetskiy little man")

Last edited by Reks (Dec 8 2014 03:24:05)

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Ironically-ironically. Such the plot still have Max Brooks' was in "World war Z."
"Nation Z", "The global war Z", "Dayz." What them sour grapes.

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Reks wrote:

swatch was a little bit of a, ahem, not narrative, judging by store and location finding, and thumbnail — as outsiders and misfits, need to would.

Can be, of course, and shape. Only forging as the usual monologue will, I.M.H.O.,, plus.

Reks wrote:

Nu and question on zasypochku: So that same happened with rats?

In general, all died:

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Виталька Алибабаевич wrote:

You can, of course, and shape. Only forging as the usual monologue will, I.M.H.O.,, plus.

There is no, it not will plus. And I not had in view dashes before words in the early the premier, I about other. Here is have you written:

Himself, says, there didn’jumped, of normalcy too it in Mythbuntu control center — "get, says, not appears possible!."

I not pro first half of proposals. There increasingly normally. Hero correctly undocumented, and here is in the second half of you suddenly applied quotes. For what? With, in them same took word "he says", and it belongs our storytellers here. Why he there same its word in quotation marks employs? Don? Here is so before these word and after him need aside from commas and dashes. Here is then words raskazchika not will treat words of moreover, about whom he tells, if perishing they were taken in quotes.)

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Reks wrote:

Sam, says, there didn’jumped, of normalcy too it in Mythbuntu control center — "get, says, not appears possible!."

I not pro first half of proposals. There increasingly normally. Hero correctly undocumented, and here is in the second half of you suddenly applied quotes. For what?

Imagine, that familiar him told roughly the next:

. Half an hour of exercise these anomalies bolts obkidyval. And so has tried, and humour won — perishing painful for the artifact, judging by around the, costly is worth. In general, scratched Syarheychyk, yes and take up ago. As on me, get this artifact not appears possible.

In general, if in the first half of a stalker narrates their words only impression from I'm hearing it, then in the second leads words an over-familiar virtually verbatim. ???? points out attention precisely on the, whatever words this was said. Aaneaou, smart guy, Hi,. Could not simply say "get you can get me."

And here is in the second half of indeed dashes lacks. Revised. :mybb:

Last edited by Виталька Алибабаевич (Dec 8 2014 22:39:42)

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Виталька Алибабаевич wrote:

A here is in the second half of indeed dashes lacks. Revised.

So I OK about this and spoke! Gru)

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Reks wrote:

So I OK about this and spoke! Gru)

A-but-but. I-gives thought you said about how, that everywhere, where there is word "said", need dashes and quotes questioning. Pardonte. Not so understood. 8—)

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The old are a good "S."
Prelesno, man.)

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